magicman8's Seconds Application Submission

[magicman8 0]

Out-Of-Character:

Minecraft Account Name: magicman8

Did you attend minecon and sign up at the LOTC booth?: No

How old are you?: 15

Time-Zone/Country of Residence: ET/United States

Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?: English is my first language so I would like to think it is good, with some occasional spelling mistakes.

Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself: I am pretty much just a high school student. If I am not doing school work on the weekdays its minecraft in my free time.

How much time could you be on the server weekly?: On weekdays a lot less that I want to, maybe 2 hours a day, but around 5 a day on weekends.

What do you know about Roleplaying? What is it?: In roleplaying you are not Joe or who ever you are you are your character. You just worry about the problems of your character. You are not just pushing buttons but you are trying to achieve something through your character. Your life becomes the characters life. You you only know the information that is given to the characters, so you are not some omnipotent person who knows everything about the story. You develop who you are and become more advanced as you progress.

In your own Words, describe what Metagaming and Powergaming are.: Metagaming is a player using information the character does not and powergaming is the creation of an optimal player characters that has the aim of maximising the power the player has in the game.

What do you expect this server will be like?: A beautiful world, full of great players and adventures

What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?: Not many big servers, just small random servers.

Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?: Yes, I agree with all the rules because without rules there would be chaos

How did you hear about us?: The minecraft forums

Have you voted for the Lord of the Craft on Minestatus? Which vote number were you?: Yes #5

What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name?: magicman8

In-Character:

Character Name: Chrispen

What is your Race?: Elf

Biography(This should include the history of your character and his life as well as age, appearance and personality, etc.): Chrispen was named after his grandfather, a great warrior. He was a quick learner from a young age. He learned about the ground under his feet, the animals, and the culture. He loved these things so much that he would venture out into the forest. In the forests he continued to gain more knowledge about his world, he even rode a pig not long after learning you could do so. Sometimes he would go so far out in the forest that he would even find ruins. That was one of his favorite things, he loved learning about the history of his people, other races, and the world. In these forests there was also a presence of danger. As he defended himself from all different kinds of danger, things like animals, creatures, or even bandits. As his knowledge grew and he ventured out further his need for adventure grew. Even his shelters he built in the forest helped him. His simple structures became more complex and complicated with practice to the point of the structures being incredibly elaborate This is were our story begins now with Chrispen around the age of 30. Wearing the average clothes of an adventurer, with red face paint. Always interested in learning about pretty much anything, and talk to anyone.

Your characters ambitions: He wants to try and reach the prestige his grandfather had.

Out in the Wilds, your character comes across a small cottage. Outside, there appears to be an elf struggling combat with two bandits. What does your character do?: The first thing that would come to Chrispen's mind would be to help a fellow. As the bandits attention is toward the other elf Chrispen sneaks up behind for his first strike. Once in range Chrispen stuck the closest bandit, knocking him out cold. Surprised by the attack the other bandit turns around giving the other elf time to attack. This attack knocks the bandit of balance, next Chrispen delivers the final knockout blow. Wanting to keep helping his fellow elf, Chrispen restrained the bandits for the authorities, while figured out what group they were from to take them down.

Your character walks up to a shop in the middle of Al'Khazar. "Hello, my good sir!" says the shop owner. "What may I help you with today?" How does your character answer?: "I just need some things to help me survive the day" as Chrispen said with a smirk. The shopkeeper returns with, "Well, we have plenty for that". After getting all he needed Chrispen thanks the shopkeeper, but before he goes he asks the shopkeeper if he is having any trouble with anything or if he needs any help. The shopkeeper says he doesn't, but thanks him anyway as Chrispen walks out the door.

Skin is in an attachment

Other Information:Even if I am not accepted I would still like to say that this looks like a wonderful server.

[Taiga 764]

Your Application has been...

DENIED

Reason(s)Why Your Application Was Denied:

Role Play:

Missing Biography [ ]

-Short Biography [ ]

Insufficient Information in OOC [X]

Insufficient Knowledge on Role Play [ ]

Insufficient Knowledge upon World [ ]

Incorrect Lore / Other-Worldly Lore [ ]

Powergaming [ ]

Metagaming [ ]

Conflicting Status [ ]

Cliche [ ]

Needs Villain Application [ ]

Form:

Bad Spelling/Grammar [ ]

Missing Areas [ ]

Breaking Rules [ ]

Cliche [ ]

Skin:

Missing Skin [ ]

-Skin Doesn't Fit Character [ ]

-Incorrect Character Description [ ]

-Incorrect Skin Format [ ]

-Unloreful Skin [ ]

Other Comments:

Your definition of Metagaming and Powergaming are incorrect. Everything else was perfect.

If you have any Questions or concerns, feel free to send a Private Message to my account!

<3

You come to Aegis to Develop a Character, not have one Developed already

Just because you play RPG's, doesn't mean you have RPed before.

Don't post another application in a period of two (2) days. It ruins our organisation methods.