My Second Applacation

[Rangerrick 0]

Out-Of-Character:

Minecraft Account Name: Rangerrick22468

Did you attend minecon and sign up at the LOTC booth?:No i was serve-ing in the U.S military at that time

How old are you?:24

Time-Zone/Country of Residence:U.S.A Central

Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?:very well

Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself:I am a very disciplined person who server in the us military (army) for 6 years. I am a very nice person who enjoys having fun

How much time could you be on the server weekly?: Most of the time when im home

What do you know about Roleplaying? Give a definition of what it means to you.:Roleplaying means to me playing the roll of someone who you can spend hours thinking about and can continue changing the path that they follow.

In your own Words, describe what Metagaming and Powergaming are.

What do you expect this server will be like?:Metagaming is using knowledge from un-roleplaying situatuions and using it to the character's advantage and Powergaming is basically using cheap and unlawfull tactics to get to the end content like cheating for the goal.

What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?:Minederp and bad admins

Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?:very well

How did you hear about us?: a friend

Have you voted for the Lord of the Craft on Minestatus? Which vote number were you? Not yet but i plan to

What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name?:Rangerrick

In-Character:

Character Name: Becknohog

What is your Race?:dwarf

Biography(This should include the history of your character and his life as well as age, appearance and personality, etc.): Becknohog is a 20 year old dwarf warrior who enjoys fighting battles as well as mining he was involved in many battles from the age of 13 and fought very strong. He has a very nice attitude around allies but crazy in battle. He is scared from many wounds in battle

Your characters ambitions:Be the best warrior in Aegis

ut in the Wilds, your character comes across a small cottage. Outside, there appears to be an elf struggling combat with two bandits. What does your character do? He kills both the bandits and helps the elf with his injuries

Your character walks up to a shop in the middle of Al'Khazar. "Hello, my good sir!" says the shop owner. "What may I help you with today?" How does your character answer? Hello sir! I would like to have some food.

A screenshot of your skin: http://www.minershoes.com/skin/view/i4ed2b2810e7d953231096589503243321453257

Other Information:I am a very nice person

[marimbamonk 1501]

Your application has been...

DENIED.

You had some things right, but here are some things you missed:

•You copied what is supposed to be your own definition of role-playing, powergaming, and metagaming from someone I just reviewed. We're not that stupid.

•You didn't provide a solid backround in your biography. We know that he wants to be the best warrior in Aegis, and he can handle a mining pick, but give backround. Don't be one of the countless people who have the same exact plot behind their character. Make something unique.

•You need to have bigger and better ambitions for your character.

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He kills both the bandits and helps the elf with his injuries

That is called powergaming. You cannot simply kill someone, you must roll (attempt to kill them), or do something else. Killing them cannot be your answer, because what happens if you're in Aegis, see this scenario, and kill them? Thats a no RP kill.

•Your skin does not match the lore.

Fix the things I mentioned, and you'll be a lot more likely to be accepted into the server! Feel free to reapply after 48 hours.

[marimbamonk 1501]

Moved to Denied Forum