Waggy1999S New Character App

[waggy1999 0]

Out-Of-Character:

- Minecraft Account Name:WAGGY1999

- How old are you?:13

- Time-Zone/Country of Residence: I am from England

- Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?:Yes I have good knowledge of grammar

- Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself:In real life people call me Dylan or waggy (because of my last name Wagstaff)me and my friends are into Rping and MC from time to time i try out mmo,s but the price is too high for me because my family are financially challenged. I try hard in school and do most of my homework at day and play MineCraft the rest of the day i like to Rp because it tkes my head off the world around me and lets me relax and fell powerful.Plus i love drum and bass

- How much time could you be on the server weekly?:Around 18 hours depending on my homework maybe 20

- How long have you played minecraft?:I cant wuite remember but since 1.3

- What do you know about roleplaying? How long have you been doing it? What kind?:Roleplaying to me is to make a Character in a fiction world and with that character he/she must take part in the lore of the land and its history when you speek you must speak in the grammar of the land and not slang . you must keep in character by keeping youre personality eg:if u say you cannot farm you must not farm well and must take time to farm and so with every other skill. you also

you travel the world and explore alone or in a group and take on historical challenges of the world and so gaining honour in the proccess

- What do you expect this server will be like?:Vey good and organized hopefully with good admins

-In your own Words, describe what Metagaming and Powergaming are: Metagaming is sticking to what you have employed on youreself like saying you are bad at math and with that you take a bit of time to work something out powergaming is overpowering youre character by giving him amazing powers like flying and things like that

- What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?:Citycraft survival it got very reppetative

- Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules? What about the lore?:Yes i have the lore is quite awesome

- Name the 4 races on this server.Orc Dwarf Elf Human

- How did you hear about us?:Alot of videos and minecon

- Did you vote?:Yup number 3167

- What was your favourite Law?:Always keep in character

- What was your least favourite Law?:you must have a forum account but i found a way

- What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name?waggy199

In-Character:

Character Name: Aciriz

What is your Race?:Orc

Biography(This should include the history of your character and his life as well as age, appearance and personality, etc.):Aciriz was a big healthy orc his father taught him the way of the warrior whilst his mum taught him the way of the trade at the age of 14 Aciriz and his friends started a small bandit group and traveled aegis in search of fortune and . . .bloodshed he came strong and soon at the age of 16 he returned to his town and helped out his father in the orc army he got given a choice of an axe a bow and a sword he chose an axe. him and his father were in petris raid of the elves and shortly after the battle of oren in that battle his father was on a roof top fighting of a horde of zombies and spiders he was tearing them to pieces with his axe when underneath him creeper blew up and he fell into the burning housein rage Aciriz rushed past all the other fighters to his dads death when suddenly an undead recruit only armed with a sword jumped on him Aciriz puched him off and hacked him to death with his bear fists but then when Aciriz had finished more creepers went off in the same house leaving nothing left Aciriz returned to Krugmar and now serves as a honorable gate guard

Your characters ambitions:To keep the people of krugmar safe

Out in the Wilds, your character comes across a small cottage. Outside, there appears to be an elf struggling combat with two bandits. What does your character do?Acariz was returning from a patrol when he hears arguing over the hill to rogue orcs were harrasing an elf infront of his family Aciriz shouts "OI leaf dat poor Elfie alone" the bandits snigger at him in disgust Acariz runs to the cottage the orc at the back pushes him away and spits on him Acariz pulls out his axe and beats him to the ground the other orc turns around and Acariz punches him in the face and spits on him after the fighting Acariz walks up to the Elf "Thank you for the help" the Elf said"we could have been goners here take these minas and supplies you will need it out "Tanks"Acariz replies and rejoins his patrol

Your character walks up to a shop in the middle of Al'Khazar. "Hello, my good sir!" says the shop owner. "What may I help you with today?" How does your character answer?Acariz wonders around the shop "hmm" he ponders about his desires"i would like a ale please" "Ok sir that will be lets see 30 minas" Acariz fells his mina pouch "sorry i dont have enough" he leaves and goes to find clean water in the river nearbyy

A screenshot of your skin: its attatched

Other Information: I hope i can create a new character an elf doesnt fit me well

[marimbamonk 1501]

Your application was...

You got some things right, but here are some you missed:

• Your definition of metagaming is not correct.

• Your biography was extremely hard to read. Please make it more organized, and use a period once in a while?

It also had some hints of powergaming in it.

• Your answer to the bandit scenario question could be considered powergaming. Imagine that this actually happened in LoTC. You couldn't just start beating the bandits into submission. You have to role-play it out.

Overall, please make your application easier to read, if you can.

Fix the things I mentioned and you'll have a much better shot at getting accepted! Please reapply after 48 hours.

[marimbamonk 1501]

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