Occultus Server Application

[Occultus 0]

Out-Of-Character:

Minecraft Account Name: CamouFranky

Did you attend minecon and sign up at the LOTC booth?: No because I didn't go to Minecon

How old are you?:13

Time-Zone/Country of Residence: East U.S Coast

Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?: I'm a born American. I can speak English fluently.

Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself: Very skilled RPer that has been on Minecraft since 0.0.1 Creative. I have a great sence of humor and love to play Minecraft.

How much time could you be on the server weekly?: All weekends, some weekdays. On weekends a very long time.

What do you know about Roleplaying? Give a definition of what it means to you.: Role-Playing is taking on the role of another being. It's filling in that role perfectly so that you can be believed to actually be that person.

In your own Words, describe what Metagaming and Powergaming are. Metagaming is going out of character in a bad way. Powergaming is playing with absolute control with the situation and using it without RPing it.

What do you expect this server will be like?: A very fun and entertaining expirience.

What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?: I've played on countless amount of servers. I always go back to them though.

Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?: Yes

How did you hear about us?: My friend Sparrow told me about the server.

Have you voted for the Lord of the Craft on Minestatus? Which vote number were you? 300 somehting.

What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name?: Dude2023

In-Character: Occulus

Character Name: Occulus

What is your Race?: I have not fully decided yet, either Human or Elf

Biography(This should include the history of your character and his life as well as age, appearance and personality, etc.): None. My character has no rememberence of his past. He is 20 years old. He is a normal male with emotions and feelings. He is outgoing, bright, self-less, and always aware of his sorrounding.

Your characters ambitions: To just get by and to learn the most he can.

Out in the Wilds, your character comes across a small cottage. Outside, there appears to be an elf struggling combat with two bandits. What does your character do? My character is kinda like a Sherlock Holmes type of character through his experiences. He jumps on top of a bandit, does a jab knife to his carotid. The next bandit is cause by surprise when suddenly and runs away. I have a small conversation with the elf and go on my way, learning from this experience.

Your character walks up to a shop in the middle of Al'Khazar. "Hello, my good sir!" says the shop owner. "What may I help you with today?" How does your character answer? Al'Khazar doesn't exist anymore. but I would probably ask "What do you sell at this store?" and "How old is this store?"

A screenshot of your skin: I change my skin regulary. I'm probably gonna make a new one for the server and multiple others for special occasions.

Other Information:

[marimbamonk 1501]

Your application was...

You got some things right, but here are others you missed:

• There is already someone named CamouFranky on the forums, and you could be accused of plagiarism.

• I already reviewed this application in the last 24 hours.

• You need to have a backround! Even if your character lost his memory, he has to have some sort of back round. Go into 3rd person and explain it.

• Your answer to the bandit scenario is power-gaming.

Fix the things I mentioned and you'll have a much better chance at getting accepted.

WARNING: You could be banned for plagiarism, and a GM will have to see this application.

Please reapply (if you can) after 48 hours.

[marimbamonk 1501]

Moved to Denied Forum