Return Of The Dom

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Chapter 1: Blood and Fire

The sound of screams surrounded Krogu, blood and corpses were everywhere he looked, but the adrenaline was pumping, Krogu got up from the floor and looked for his sword, which seemed to have disappeared in the thick of the fighting, he looked up as a blast of purple set a tent and five soldiers alight, His gaze turned to Or'ta and his remaining Shamans, surrounded by Orc soldiers desperately firing bolts of flame to deter the soldiers, Krogu saw the trouble his leader was in and tried to run, but a jolt of pain shot up from his leg and he fell to the ground.

He woke up with Death all around him, when he looked around he saw that two other orcs were lying into of him; dead, a tear welled up as he pushed the corpses off of him and he saw the true spectacle, Or'ta and his shamans' heads on bloodied spikes "N-Nub, Nub now, W-We were winnun' da Klomp, Whut happ-" a familiar burst of pain exploded from his legs, his eyes went hazy and he stumbled towards the gate, he suddenly saw two dark blotches coming towards him, that was when Krogu collapsed and closed his eyes, he heard the muffled voice of his mate, Shaklu and an unfamiliar voice, but Krogu was too weak to comprehend what they were saying and fell asleep.

Chapter two: Exile

Two years later

"Krogu! Krogu wake up! Brekfast iz reddy!" Krogu opened his eyes and saw his mate's face above him, with an easy smile he sat up and kissed her belly "Tha child will be strong un Bub'hosh, Shaklu"

"Yub, less just 'Ope dat it's Boy!"

Krogu chuckled to himself and got out of bed,

"Any attacks ur raids last nigh'?" he yawned, Shaklu's face suddenly turned red "Uur... Dere wuz Ash measly attak, nub body wuz klomped, but..."

"But wub?"

"Dey... Took... Your bruddah, Skago" A blind rage took hold of Krogu and he picked his bed clear off the ground and threw it at Shaklu, luckily she ducked and the bed ripped a hole in his tent, Krogu's anger left him and he sunk to the floor "Krogu! Giddup yah skahin' Shara!" yelled Shaklu as she rushed over to him, Krogu was breathing heavily but managed to speak in a croaky tone "Me will hunt dem, ta da end uv Aegis...".

A week later, Krogu headed out into the woods to look for his only surviving brother, Skago'Dom, he knew the journey ahead would be long and brutal, but he never knew he would never see his Family again...

Chapter 3: The Amulet

Months had Passed, And Krogu Had not found His Brother, Eventually he gave up and stumbled upon a small township called RastVale, after asking several passers-by if he saw his brother unsucessfully, he retired to A Nearby inn and Drowned out his sorrow with Ale, He was staring into his 3rd Ale Tankard when He heard a Whisper from behind him, When he turned around there was nothing there, But when He turned his head back to The Ale, a Hooded Stranger Was sitting in the Chair on the opposite end Of His table "Whut duz lat wunt?" Grumbled a Drunk Krogu.

"Oh... Nothing much... But I do Have something you May Want, for a Price Ofcourse..."

"My Bruddah? Lat Have Him?"

"No, No... But I have something that May help with your Search."

"Well, Wud?!" Krogu Stood Up from the Table and Leaned Over to The Stranger, His Horrible breath made the Stranger's nose Wrinkle in disgust "Come With... By God That smells... Come With me Please".

Krogu Reluctantly Followed the Stranger Outside the Town, Expecting a Trap Krogu Readied his Axe, but to his surprise the Stranger Beckoned for Krogu to Enter a tent, Covered by Weeds and Wisteria Plants, Inside was a Woman, Also Hooded with a Glass Sphere and a Golden amulet with A Purple Amethyst engraved into it, Krogu Seemed to Like the Amulet and attempted to Haggle with the Man for It, To his dissapointment the Man Turned down every offer and Told Krogu to Sit In The Empty chair opposite the Woman, Moments later, The Hooded man Left the Tent and left Krogu And The Woman Alone in Silence, After Five Minutes of Nothing but The Hooting of an Owl, The Woman broke the silence "So..." She Croaked in a Haggard old Voice "You Wish to Find Your Brother?" Krogu was Startled

"How Dz lat Kno dat?!"

"The Fire Tells me alot of Things, Come" The Woman Beckoned Towards a burning fire at The left of the tent. "The fires never lie, I may Be able to Find your Brother, or Give you a Guide of Sorts" The Woman Let out some uncomprehendable words and The Fire grew to a Larger size, She Then Started to Throw bones into the Fire, And Saw Three Things. "First... A Stranger Returns To his homeland, Second... A Group will meet on the Field Of battle" The Crone cleared her Throat "Three... A Child Shall never be Born...".

((TL;DR: Clan Dies, Brother Stolen, Crone Predicts, Krogu Returns. <-- If You Read that you are one lazy Bones!))

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*=*Progress*=*

Chapter 1: Done

Chapter 2: Done

Chapter 3: In progress

Chapter 4: Not started yet

If everything goes well I Will be done by new years!

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