Application By Darkhunneydue

[DarkDue 1]

Out-Of-Character: human gladiator

Minecraft Account Name:DarkHunneydue

Did you attend minecon and sign up at the LOTC booth?:no

How old are you?:14

Time-Zone/Country of Residence:estern time amarica

Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?:yes i do

Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself:well i am a calm person i only play to have fun i dont like when people cheat i do have a temper i like playing hockey and i like to skate bord i hang with my friends a lot and i like to play video games.i am adjudicated and i am a active person i am alwas doing something and i dont realy like it when people are rude.

How much time could you be on the server weekly?: almost every day

What do you know about Roleplaying? Give a definition of what it means to you.:i think roleplaying is to assume a role either unconsciously to fill a social role or consciously to act out a chosen role.like to if i was a dwarf i would have to act like a dwarf i would have to dig holes and to love treasure.

In your own Words, describe what Metagaming and Powergaming are.metagaming is a broad word used to define any stratiegy action or method used in a game witch sets a ruleset witch affects the game or goes beyond the supposed limits or environment set by the game.also refers to the game universe outside of the game itself.powergaming is a style of interacting with games or game like systems with a aim of max progresson towards a goal.

What do you expect this server will be like?:i expect one good team work two a lot of war and action three good sports man ship sometimes and last four for something to do.

What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?:i have bin on a lot of servers and i leve them becuse no one can or will help one another two people are alwas mean and rude last people are just no good sports they all normaly cheat.

Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?:ye i have read understood and agreed to the rules

How did you hear about us?:youtube

Have you voted for the Lord of the Craft on Minestatus? Which vote number were you?no

What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name?:DarkDue

In-Character: human kight

Character Name:gabriel

What is your Race?:human

Biography(This should include the history of your character and his life as well as age, appearance and personality, etc.)my character gabriels history: the day he was born his parents new exactly what to call him. gabriel which means man of god but just because his name means man of god doesnt mean his life was easy he had a hard life his parents where poor and he didnt see that mutch of his dad because he was working in the army and his mom has a job as a shop owner. she makes just enuf money to pay taxes she didnt need money for food and water because she gets that from the shop.gabriel has bin in trouble a lot and he has bin beaten mutch more.my character gabriels life:he lived in a village called helgade with the love of his life untill he went to war with the roman and together they where fighting the hingarian one day the general of the roman army said leave the village of helgade let the hingarians take it and gabrial said we are going to help the town and he attacked the general and ran they soon found him with his lover the general took her away and sent him to become a gladiator untill he was rewarded with freedom he soon had enuf money for his lover to be sent to him but she was killed by bandits after 4 years he was freede then he join the thracian army he was the best because of the skills he had. my character gabriels age:28 my character gabriels appearance: he has a scar on his chest and one small one on his face he has black short hair a beard and he is a medium sized man.my character gabriels personality: he is i nice man but will kill when he needs to he is silent he has a very high temper a big patients.

Your characters ambitions: to get revenge

Out in the Wilds, your character comes across a small cottage. Outside, there appears to be an elf struggling combat with two bandits. What does your character do?he creeps up and throws one of his swords at one then and he stabes the other after the killing my character asks if he is ok.

Your character walks up to a shop in the middle of Al'Khazar. "Hello, my good sir!" says the shop owner. "What may I help you with today?" How does your character answer? he answers i would like a knife some food and some torches please.

A screenshot of your skin: (sorry if the link doesnt work if it doesnt tipe in the website and go to page 4 name of skin is gladiator skin person its by DanSoldHisSoul

http://minecraftfreeskins.com/skins/?skinid=131754

Other Information:no other information

[marimbamonk 1501]

Your application to LoTC was...

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• You do not have good grammar or English. I could not even read what you typed. You said you were educated, but you spelled it wrong...

We need better, cleaner, and smarter work than this.

• Make your writing legible and work on your sentences. This is not acceptable if you wish to be accepted to the server. I'm not trying to be rude, but we want to have the best time we possibly can here, and having wrong spellings and misunderstandings will not achieve that.

Since I cannot judge any other problems with your application due to the malfunctioning sentence structure and platitudinous grammar, we shall discuss other matters that are wrong within your application the next time you apply.

Please, fix your application answers (PM me if you have any questions), and post a new application after 48 hours.

[marimbamonk 1501]

Moved to Denied Forum