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MC Name:

Hightinker

Character Name:

Kincaid Dimare

Have you read, and are familiar with all server rules and villain rules?:

Yes I have and glance at them whenever on the wiki and just re-read the villain rules.

Are you sure?:

Positive.

Links to any previous villain applications (for reference):

http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/36136-read-denied-kincaids-anti-hero-application/

What SPECIFIC evils does your character plan on committing? Please list the number of each Evil you would like to be considered for, and specifically when/why you need them:

1, and 2a/b

1:

Deception; Well, Since Kincaid is a mute he uses deception in a different way... He can’t use a silver tongue- Because he doesn’t have one but he could use himself. Someone notices he can’t talk? He could scribble down a lie on papers saying “My parents cut off my tongue when I was young.. to shut me up they said...” Make people feel bad, win over some friends and find out some things. Information is a key in the life of some one like Kincaid, This would mix also in between thievery and deception, making people feel bad enough to give you money, make another lie saying “I am trying to pay off a doctor to help ease the pain...” He only has minor uses for deception, that is because he can’t lie much if he can’t talk... To go on though, Deception comes with disguises. Kin will need these for various reasoning's.. Spy work... or to make his fake stories even more true...

Thievery; Ah... One of the things Avarsi taught Kincaid so much of, thieving.. The three kinds of thievery Kincaid will need will be able to Pick Pocket, Regular stealing from homes if he needs it, and Heists. Kincaid doesn’t get payed by anybody... Pick pocketing some one would give him enough coin to survive, and upgrade his tools while at it. As said earlier he will also Use sympathy to steal from people. Make them feel bad to “Donate” To whatever fake cause Kincaid comes up with. Grand Heists would be more important things, Battle Plans, Jewls, Coin, Treasure, Etc... Anything big. He will hire a few Thieves while at it, make a break in, and Bam get what he wanted and pay off the hired thieves. And to steal from regular homes, villages, farms, etc.. He will do these on a rare occasion, only if he is hungry or needs something to accomplish something else. Kin will not however do high way banditry, and steal from people on the road. He finds it not useful rather when you could slip your hand into their pocket and take some money the easy way.

2a:

Assassinations; A Silent Assassin you see? I mean Literally a Silent Assassin he can’t talk. Kin will assassinate in various levels whether he is hired to or ordered to. He may even Assassinate someone if they have done something to him or throw dirt on him like he does to most, These will be more planned out then killings planned on the spot. They will be like a heist, but the treasure is the target, the person. Most will be quiet, and unsure of who or what did it. Kincaid may even use a disguise to look like someone and run off making it look as if that person killed the target. Causing chaos which more light will be shed upon later.

Killing when threatened; If someone threatens Kin in anyway, whether it be asking for a duel in a different deming or wishing to punish him but bluffing because they can’t or don’t want to, Kin will want them dead. He doesn’t want to stand around while someone makes threats of attacking, getting hurt again like he has in so many ways. He will strike like a snake, quick and silent.

Killing when Unprovoked/Provoked; If Kin is in a bad mood or he just plain out does not like you he will try to kill you. There might not even be a reason, but he just starts to unsheathe his daggers and start walking towards you. Or there might be a reason as if he listens in on a conversation and hears someone is backstabbing him or they just say rumors and try to get Kin in trouble... He will attack yet again... Stealth is a key to glory, along with Broad and Intelligence. Stealth is the key Kin follows though...

2b:

Sadism; Kin has been through a lot... Him becoming a Rogue due to Avarsi... Not being able to talk due to being a mute, Two of his friends being killed in the nether.... Aegis being taken over and that leaves a very... Confused and Depressed Kin.. You see.. He doesn’t want others to be mutes. He thinks its agonizing pain to be in the state of one, but the ones that don’t appreciate what they have He will hurt them. Slowly, Painfully, Until blood and a tear is shed... He wants to cause pain to people. Certain ones and then just groups over all. Kin is a sadist, destroyed, and emotionally confused and hurt... He causes these pain through minor stabbings... Or to go on using the next evil...

Torture; One of Kin’s tools.. Being a sadist requires this, to hurt someone slowly. He doesn’t want to kill the person with strength and might and then laugh at their Weakness.. He wants to bring slow, dramatic, pain... Make the person cry, hurt them in every way... A rogue uses poison, Poison hurts when its at its final stage... Just because Kin isn’t their when the person starts to hurt, doesn’t mean they will still be hurt. Using arrows, Lodge them deep within the persons back. Don’t clean a blade and stab it in a person to give them infections... It will be very useful for Kincaids own twisted ways... and for his problems...

Pyromaniac; Getting your throat burned and most of your nerves in your mouth destroid by fire is quite the experiance. Especially when it all happens when your knocked out... Seeing the damage that has happened to himself with fire, Kin decides to use it as his own weapon... He uses it in torture, fighting if he could get a spark, just the smell of smoke, cackle of the flame, and sight of the fire makes him go crazy. Crazy as in makes him happy in all different ways... It could even be the smell of smoke coming off of someones burnt corpse. Or himself shoving a torch into someones eye, All the possibilities are endless with the heat of this powerful element...

Biography:

-Finally reaching Asulon from Aegis, waking up and getting out of your ship you swim towards the camp the Monks had set up, along the way you notice a Thin Book on shore, you walk over cautiously picking it up...

The Title Reads; Kincaids Journal

Opening the cover and looking at the wet pages, you see that some of the start of the journal has most likely been washed away by the rough ocean coast. Beginning to read the first page, it seems this was written before the taking of Alras in Aegis..-

Konigsberg... Still slow as always, it seems as if I do the same thing all day. Go out and hunt some creatures and animals in the night, return to the city in the morning... If only I was authorized to go out and fight in undead battles but no... I have to stay inside the city unless I have permission to leave. I wonder if Dain will want to go hunting soon.. He will probably say yes but he has been busy as of late.. Doing things for Mirtok and Samuel, Me however, I have been keeping control of citizens in lock downs which I don’t like to do all the time, I made a good amount of friends in them though... Alek, Sprat, Elros, Etc... I guess I could head over to Tassels Tavern to get a drink and write a letter to a friend, I will continue to write after I finish writing a letter to my good friend Vl’athar, He went missing maybe he would answer back to a old friend...

-You Read down to the next entry-

Letter in hand about to send it, I asked Dain if he wished to go hunting, He accepted as I thought he would, Now I just need to find a bird coop to send this letter off on a journey... maybe it will find him, maybe not... He lived in Winterfell- But Winterfell is gone now... I wonder where he was the days of the assault on the city. Enough of talking about him, Me and Dain are heading off behind the farms of Konigsberg. Huge dark hills and plains of grass, most likely a lot of creatures of the dark out there. We are leaving tonight, When the moon rises. I have to get ready, I will write about the hunting trip when I get back.

-On the same page you read on to the entry that states what happened during the trip-

Gah... I hate this.. I hate this I HATE THIS! This wasn’t a hunting trip this was me getting stuck with something I didn’t want.... Grr... I can barely write, I’m coming out of my skin... and now I have a voice in my head... IN MY HEAD! Of course it was me... I have done nothing wrong and the gods stick me with this... Alright.. I guess I will write out what happened... During the hunting trip we were by a shore line, The dirt was wet and I slipped on it landing head first in a sink hole that opened up a cave entrance, At that point I hope I would have killed my self from that blow on the head if I knew what was to come of me in the past hours after my fall.. But I didn’t, The leather helmet I had on my head cushioned my fall and just kept my neck from breaking, After I fell Dain freaked and rushed down to me, hoping I didn’t hurt my self to bad. I only had a couple of bruises and scratches, But from the slip I cracked through some weak cave wall, man made, It was a clay to cover up the tunnel... I got up from it not sure of what had happened other then I fell. Dain noticed a gleam of light down the tunnel, he told me “We should investigate.. could be a plot to attack Konigsberg or Goods” I shrugged and we went in, unsure of what to find. This when I start to hate... This is where it all starts. We walk in... It wasn’t treasure, or plans it was a old tomb. A casket in the middle. Greed got to me, I used to never be like this... I ran to the casket even though it was probably filled with bones, shoving the case off and as I was right, not only spotting bones but... a journal and... a stone.. a dark, mysterious, almost foggy, hallow one. Not like any other, I thought of value when I saw it, Immediately grabbing it and holding it to the torch light examining it more... Whilst doing that Dain read the journal found in the casket. A few minutes in, Dain threw the journal on the ground and started to almost sound worried... He said “Kincaid do you remember who you are?” I answered back with a “Yees..?” He scram at me “Do you realize what you have just done! That stone held the soul of a Rogue, his name is Avarsi and since you touched it hes in you now! Now I ask again do you rememb-” Then I noticed, I whisper that wasn’t mine was coming out of my mouth... I could hear it and feel my mouth moving but couldn’t control what it spoke... It spoke “Awwhh... A good na- Wait a second where am I? And why the hell am I speaking.... Oh that stone I knew it was bad trouble the day I found it... Now I as-” Dain yelled “Get out of my brother! Now!” The strange whisper said “Oh? Well I'm not going to pass this up even though I CAN’T get out... I would at least choose someone more flexiable then this if I were to..” Dain steamed and said “NOW!” And the whisper- To find out was Avarsi said “Make Me” Dain sighed and said under his breath loud enough for Avarsi and I could hear... “Kincaid I want to speak to you tell me, Where are you from and what is your job?” Avarsi started to Say “Oh I us-” But I took over the sentence saying allowed “I’m a Sariant of Konigsberg” Dain nodded and told me to “Follow him back home, Do not say a word to anybody Avarsi...” Under My breath Avarsi said “Make... Me...” Me and him are complete Opposites... I value Friendliness, Honor, And respect, I am a Soldier, Whilst he values Hatred, Deception, And most things wrong... He is a Rogue, Thief, Assassin... I have to calm down for the night... Head home, get some rest and try to sleep it off maybe he will be gone in the morning...

-You notice that where it ends off right there that three pages are missing, you read the next one sighing that there are so many missing pages, there appears to be a splodge of dried blood on this page though..

Huh... Weeks of keeping a voice in your head hurts you, especially if you made a deal with it... Making a deal with Avarsi was like signing my soul away, We made the deal he gets to tend to my Physical and Mental State While I got to keep my memories and personality, He changed me a lot... He was changing me from the Warrior I once was to a Rogue... He wouldn’t let me eat meat, only tiny portions of bread... he made me so skinny that he said he was my life line, that he was keeping me alive... I was scared.. I cough up blood now, he is destroying me from the inside out... I don’t think I should have trusted him, He shows concern in Tassel though, he says he wants to meet her But I do not think it would be good if they were to meet.. He has met Segari already they get a long quite well which is strange... Dain and him clash like Undead and Ascended... And most recently he met Alek, Alek and I were sitting in Tassels Tavern talking, Then Avarsi whispered up, Alek looked at me like I was crazy... Thought I was going back and fourth with my self, Which really I was... Sort of... I eventually didn’t want to scare Alek so I ran out in a hurry, leaving Alek very confused... Citizens of Hanseti started to think the same of me, I talked to Avarsi which was really my self on a daily basis, I went from being a Soldier body type to a weak fool, What was I to expect? Hes making my life miserable... Maybe it could end soon if it comes to that..

-The next entry seems like it was written in a hurry, it is sloppy and hard to read but you are able to make it out-

A few days ago... I did something I can’t forgive my self... It started with Tassel, Segari, Dain, And Myself.. Dain and Tassel never got along.. We all sat by the fire and Tassel and Dain got into a heated argument... Dain marched out and Avarsi was screaming joy inside of my head... I had no clue what Avarsi was going to do, I called Tassel over to meet Avarsi but- My body it just... shut down, I couldn’t control it... I could only hear and see things... Then Avarsi Insulted her, she slammed him into the book case behind him but he made her feel terrible, that she wasn’t hurting Himself but she was hurting me, My body.. Segari watching it wasn’t sure what to do, he just stared pondering the moment. Tassel then... Did something unsuspecting, to knock Avarsi out of control on myself. She bent down, and kissed me, Avarsi and I faded to black, I woke up, control of my body again and Tassel embraced me. I sat there with Segari, staring into the fire when Avarsi wanted me to do something. I couldn’t do what he said... But I did. I don’t know why.. But I did... We waltzed up to her and Avarsi spoke in his whispers, asked to duel Tassel. She approved and got her stuff, Avarsi then just took over again without asking and went to get weak armor and weaponry... They met outside of the gates to Konigsberg, Tassel was enraged at him for wearing such weak armor. They went on but The Hochmeister Samuel stepped in, saying I would probably get hurt in the condition he was in. Avarsi was irate and lunged at Samuel for stopping the duel, dagger at ready but Tassel knocked us back. Samuel then mocked Avarsi over and over, Until Dain got sick of it and knocked us out with the hilt of his blade, Dragging us to the prisons... Shoving us in, and leaving us there for days. Tassel constantly tried to feed us, shoving food in our mouth and forcing it down. Days after days Sam came to the cell... But this time with a Shaman, A Soul Druid. His name was Thul, I adopted him a while ago when I found him in the city. I let him go with The Ram King.. Here he was now, getting rid of Avarsi. He performed his Magic works, mumbling and pulling out a ender pearl sealing away Avarsi in it, leaving a weak, at the brink of death me... I am writing this at home... in my bed while my body adjusts to the newest changes in it.. I am not however returning to my old self, most would say “Well wouldn’t you want to return to being a soldier?” No, I don’t. Avarsi may have caused me a lot of trouble, but he taught me things... Things I can’t forget... Things that will never leave me as a scar mentally and physically...

-The next dates are not of recent dates after the latest entry, it seems that they may even be years apart. You read on curious of what had happened to make Kincaid stop writing for such a long time-

Been a while since I picked this up... This is my first time in a while picking this journal up since the latest I could think and read were the dates of Avarsi... I’m writing this while I walk home to Konigsberg, making silent steps down the stone road. -The page seems hard right here, water must have hit it- Gah... A Rain drop hit my journal page, didn’t know it was going to rain, its starting to rain hard now, I see the House of Thyone up ahead, Ill ask if I could take Shelter their until this storm passes...

-You go down to the next entry still curious as of this man-

This is like... Avarsi all over again... this time worse... I- I don’t remember anything... All I remember was entering the Thyone’s and waking up outside of Konigsberg w-with a sixth of my tongue gone... I- I can’t speak... My throat is ruined, something burned it making my vocal cords burnt.. my nerves in my mouth are mostly dead also... I can’t taste anything or talk... Paper is my only choice of communication... Avarsi was torture enough having two voices but now the gods give me no voice? I’m starting to do-doubt them... As if they think I’m not good enough for them... Dain bandaged my mouth and left me in the market... He was scared just as I was... I mostly kept it a secret, letting my brothers and citizens find out when they could... It was horrible.. I couldn’t taste anything... I couldn’t speak... Could I trust anyone anymore... Black hand coming to Konigberg... What could this all mean? Are the gods out to get me?

-Your at the final page of the journal, reading it outwardly-

Abeam... Segari... Dead... Both of them... They fell in the nether.. I don’t know what to do anymore... I am on the military ship of Hanseti sailing next to the Citizen ship on our way to a new land... Aegis is gone, my home is... I don’t know what I could do anymore... I can’t speak... I’m no longer a soldier but a rogue... My friends are gone.. I’m not even sure if Tassel, Alek, Sprat, and Syrila made it out alive... All of this rips me appart...Could I trust the gods anymore? Aerial has given me false hope.. I don’t think I should trust them anymore... If only there was somewhere to turn to.. I don’t know... I’m in my own world right now deciding so much... I hope we go somewhere where... only the war of races start... nothing to do with the gods... No Undead that threat the land or Ibless to destroy it... No Ascended to tell us lies.. and No Aerial to give us false hope to destroy the darkness....

-Not sure if this man is actually crazy or all of this happened, you bring the book to the lore master in the camp, handing it to him and continuing on your way to adventure and glory in Asulon-

Question Section - Answer with as much detail as necessary

Why does your character do what he does? What are his motives?:

Mostly everything that happened in that journal are his motives, Living with a “Demon” , Kin called Avarsi that, made Kin change in physical and mental shape. The going silent Kin thought was the end of all of these sin brought upon himself, but they kept coming. People dieing, his home gone. Kin just wants revenge... A New home... People that under stand him even though he has no speech...

What moral boundaries does your character adhere to, if any?:

Kin has been thinking about himself as of late, not caring what happens to others. He is searching for more like himself, not mutes... More that have been screwed over of sorts by the gods. He blames the gods for all of this that has happened to him, all he has done was give.. give.... and give... Tassel said he had a golden heart, but that golden heart is being melted down to ash. He doesn’t care who he goes through, who he has to kill, who he has to steal from as long as it benefits himself... Small child to elder adult... A Death person to blind... He will do anything to get from point A to B...

What are some notable strengths and weaknesses of your character? What might cause him to falter? Include things such as temptations, addictions, physical handicaps, etc:

Most of Kin’s strength lay in the shadows of stealth. He uses a Bow and Arrow, Two Daggers, Extra Knives, Short Sword, Shears, and Flint and steel. He is a accurate shot with a bow, able at holding his breath. He knows balance, able at jumping roof to roof and using silent steps in his path. The ability of no speech helps with this a lot, and his mouth being covered with a bandage leaves only the slow breathes of his nose being heard aloud. His skinny body leaves him able to get into crevices and get down low. His height is short at 5,0 allowing him to bend down and move more quickly.

Kin’s weaknesses are in very noticeable spots. Being his weight and height- While they might be good in the areas of stealth, in open combat they could be the death of Kin. The powerful blows of a ax or sword could easily take out Kin, He may be quick and witty but up against an Orc or someone in armor of iron, gold, or diamond could easily crush Kin. Another weakness lays in his love for fire, it could distract him in a assassination or heist attempt. He may even burn himself with his craze for it. And finally, an Addiction. Kin loves to smoke red stone cigarettes. The smoke that comes off of them smells good to Kin, and flicking the ash of it onto the ground symbolizes what he loves so much.

What role will your character play in Asulon? What separates them and makes them unique and original among villains?:

Kincaid is the type of person who would be standing among the shadows watching you, waiting for the time to strike. Being the mute that he is, he doesn’t get along with many now. He used to be out going and friendly, now he is solitude and only trusts those that think the same way he does. He will play the silent rogue type of character, watching you, marking his target. Getting what he wants even if it means murdering his own family or friend, You can’t guess what he is thinking, you don’t know if he will try to strike. He wears a Poker face all the time.

Is your character loyal or a backstabber? Does he trust others in return?:

Kincaid has to be a back stabber. Everyone is, in any situation someone could turn around and be on the enemy team but you won’t know. Kin will do that a lot, against others. He only trusts a few people, his life is going down a deep hole. There is nothing to loose anymore. The only thing he could do as of now is do what he does best, be a rogue and search for people like him self.

Why do you as a player wish to and deserve to play a villain?:

My first attempt at this was okay I thought, but I fleshed it out and added more recent events to this App, I think I improved on writing this app then the last. Not to mention with all of this happening to my character his mind set is completely different, he has to commit villainous acts other wise he would probably end up killing himself. He just has to do these things to allow himself to stain in the mental state of stealth and reality. To go away from the In character things, the Out of character things is because I have yet to have to many problems with anybody, I have made a ton of new friends in lord of the craft that I wont forget and I found my self attached to Kin even though his life is wobbling on a wire over fire. I trust that I can manage him being a rogue mute and to continue this amazing role play experience I have had so far.

Open Response - Answer at least four out of five listed. Do not powergame, metagame, or do anything else illegal or unrealistic. Each scenario is designed with no particular objective in mind and is open ended deliberately. Assume your character is in each position, regardless of their normal situations:

A middle aged man, a young wife, and a small male child are walking down the King’s Road together. The women walks with a long staff, and the man appears to have a scabbard at his side:

I sigh, leaning against a tree next to the road my mouth covered, hearing the childs small voice I look in the direction of the family. I see the large man, beaming my eyes trying to see if I would be able to pick pocket from them. The man is in the back of the two, while they walk slowly up front of him. This would almost be impossible to get this without picking A Fight, sighing at loosing the sight of dinner money I let them walk past without trouble. The man stares at me suspiciously almost seeing if I was going to try to steal money from them. I raise my hands up almost saying “I have no weapon in hand why would I rob you?” He almost snarls looking back at his family and walking on down the road.

You hear knocking on your door and go to answer. It turns out to be an angry looking woman with a large human behind her. She is telling you that you owe taxes to King ___ and must pay within the fortday:

I let out a deep sigh, throwing the string I was twiddling with onto the floor, walking towards the door of the Inn I was staying in, looking through the closing crack and seeing the face of the almost cranky women and the giant man, raising both eyebrows I open it slowly, unsure if its a set up or a real tax collection I open the door slowly, tense around the large man, raising one eyebrow and she says “Well?” I respond with pointing to hear mina bag and she says “Pay up now... we don’t got all day now do we?” I sigh through my nostrils, turning back closing the door slightly so they can’t look into my inn room to see my weapons, and flint & steel. I go over to my bed and lift up the mattress pulling out a tattered pouch of minas closed with a rope. I pull the rope off and walk over to the door, peeking out and raise the mina bag and raise an eyebrow. “Yer late to paying the taxes. Pay up now or be fined and have to pay or go to the dungeons” I sigh, looking at the amount of minas added up and count out 450 minas exact out of my pouch. I put it in the womens hands, not caring if she was to drop it all on the floor or not snarling at her a tiny bit, and slamming my door shut on both of their faces, wheezing a little and walking over to my bed placing the pouch under the bed and continue to twiddle with the string that I had picked up again.

Two Guard tries to break up a fight between your acquaintance and two Goblins. Your friend slays one of the Guards as he approaches, causing the other Guard as well as the Goblins to unsheathe their arms:

Unable to shout out orders or to tell my friend where I am, I take out both of my daggers standing at ready for one of the goblins or the guard to attack. I glance over at my friend to make sure he is alright and then point my friend to the guard, and then act like I am bashing my head. My friend nods, running over to the guard while I take a look at the small goblins. I twirl my daggers back and fourth ready to pounce, but I want them to make the first move. One of them with a mace starts to run towards me, he swings at my side and hits me right in my rib cage, I hold it and snarl under my bandage. I throw my daggers on the ground near the two goblins to make them jump back, while they are distracted with that I pull out my bow and arrow, sort of balancing it on my knee and trying to shoot one of them, I let go of my side pain coursing through me from the blow but get steady and fire a arrow hitting the goblin that was farther behind in the shoulder, the one with the mace turns as I run up to him unsheathing my short sword and try to take him on full on, he swings and knocks the blade out of my hands it landing in the dirt of the ground. I wheeze, thinking of another weapon and think -Shears- I Immediatly reach behind my back pulling from behind my shears, just in time for the goblin to be close enough.. I nip the top of his ear off, him wailing with pain. The goblins turn back running, I look back at my friend who just knocked the guard to the ground. I gather the items I could find which would be my daggers and short sword, and head over to my friend. We leave the guard there, cleaning our weapons and leaving filthy armor behind and run off to get away from the scene.

As you turn the corner into a dimly lit alley, a pair of young female halflings instantly run up to you. They are begging for a donation of either minas or food:

Looking down at the two, a few inches shorter then me I raise an eyebrow as they ask for minas or food. Reaching in my hood and scratching my head, I realize I could easily confuse these two to getting out of here. I simply just walk by them, acting as if nothing is there. They start to cry and yank on me, pulling my arms every way and scrambling at my waist and legs, I keep on trying to move on while they tangle them selves with my limbs. They cry more and I close my eyes, bringing my hands up to my temples and rubbing them. They know I’m starting to get annoyed so I just simply... Pull out a piece of paper, some red stone, and roll the red stone in the paper, nice and tight and setting on a stone that is coming out of the wall, I then remove my bandage around my mouth and the halflings are unsure of what to do. I open my mouth slightly, showing them the darkness inside of it. The burnt mouth and no tongue, the destroyed and scarred mouth. The little stub of the tongue that was once there. They start to panic, standing still. I take out my flint and steel, arranging it in between my fingers and picking up the red stone cigarette. Lighting it and putting it in my destroyed mouth slowly, the small glow of the red stone and ash falling to the ground. I then flick the cigarette at one of them it hitting their shoe, when they looked down at it I simply walked off tying my bandage around my mouth on tighter.

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Wonderful application and an amazing role-player, I definitely believe that Kincaid deserves to be a villain. +1

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Roleplays well, excellent person, and an overall realistic viewer.

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