My Application 2 Attempt

[WhiteHawk 0]

Minecraft Account Name:

whitehawk9

Did you attend minecon and sign up at the LOTC booth?:

No sadly I did not.

How old are you?:

I am 14 years old.

Time-Zone/Country of Residence:

I live in the U.S. and my time zone is eastern.

Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?:

I have a very good grip on the English language. I have a 100 in my English class!

Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself:

I am an average 14 year old. I like theater, track, and debate. I try very hard and never give up on anything.

How much time could you be on the server weekly?:

Probably an hour a day. I could spend a couple hours playing on the weekend.

What do you know about Roleplaying? Give a definition of what it means to you.:

Roleplaying: I think of it as playing a game were you make a new identity and play as it.

In your own Words, describe what Metagaming and Powergaming are.

Powergaming: When a player tries to make his characters traits superior in a role playing game. This form of gaming is looked down upon.

Metagaming: When a player uses outside information in a role playing game to make dissensions that his character would not be able to make without the outside knowledge. This is also looked down upon.

What do you expect this server will be like?:

I expect the server will be very fun and interactive. I’m very excited because I’ve never done any roleplaying before.

What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?:

I have played on Axium I. I left because I thought it was boring because there was no roleplaying just building.

Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?:

Yes I have. I like how you have set it up, not to many rules but not too little rules.

How did you hear about us?:

I heard about you on a YouTube video.

Have you voted for the Lord of the Craft on Minestatus? Which vote number were you?

yes I did and I don’t know what vote number I was.

What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name?:

WhiteHawk

In-Character:

Character Name:

Estoladan

What is your Race?:

I am an Elf.

Biography(This should include the history of your character and his life as well as age, appearance and personality, etc.):

WhiteHawk is a wood elf with dark green hair and a tan skin color. He was raised in the middle of the woods with just his mother and father. Both his parents were killed when he was 10 by orks. He took their deaths hard but managed to raise himself. He became one with nature. He respects the earth and wants everyone to. He has a special hatred towards orks for killing his parents and wishes that they were all dead. He is a little unsocial because of never growing up around any one. He is very smart and as a child created his own language. He tried to spread his language through the elven race but it never took off. He doesn’t usually stay in one place for very long. Whenever there is war he is glad to join and has in the past. He is very good with a bow and arrow. When he was 17 he attacked a small ork village. He was then captured by orks from a neighboring town. He was captured for a year until he escaped by tricking a guard. He tries to get a group of elves together to attack the orks again but they always bail on him. He is very fond of the arts and is a big supporter of it. He doesn’t like to depend on people so he mostly just depends on himself. He also has a hard time trusting people. He is found of the human race and thinks they would make good allies. In all he is a good person who just hates orks.

Your characters ambitions:

His number one goal is to have revenge on the orks. He wants to create a group that will help him fight orks. He also wants to spread his language throughout the lands. He at least wants it be recognized as a language. He also wishes to live a long life. Finally he wishes to give back to nature for letting him live in its forest for most of his life.

Out in the Wilds, your character comes across a small cottage. Outside, there appears to be an elf struggling combat with two bandits. What does your character do?

WhiteHawk would help the elf. He would draw his bow and ask the bandits to stand down. If they didn’t he would attack until they gave up or were dead. If they stand down he would ask them if they wanted to join him on a quest to attack the orks.

Your character walks up to a shop in the middle of Al'Khazar. "Hello, my good sir!" says the shop owner. "What may I help you with today?" How does your character answer?

He would ask the shop owner if he knows of anyone who would help him attack some orks. He would also ask for seeds and saplings so he could plant them and give back to nature like he always wanted to. He would also tell the shop owner to tell no one he was here in fear that orcs would track him down.

A screenshot of your skin:

[Rhisereld 317]

Denied.

You seem to have a fixation of orcs. They are not the "villain race". If you want them to kill your family and give you a grudge against them, fair enough, but explain it a little and give a reason. "Orks killed my parents" doesn't cut it.

You need more detail in your open reponse questions. Tell more than your character's initial reaction, including dialogue and details of combat. You need to really explain the scenario and follow it to its end. There is no "would".

Remember, you must wait 48 hours before reapplying.

[Rhisereld 317]

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