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[Ragingbullet The Dwarf 0]

Out-Of-Character:

Minecraft Account Name:Raggingbullet

Did you attend minecon and sign up at the LOTC booth?:No

How old are you?:I am 16.

Time-Zone/Country of Residence:Canada, Mountain Daylight Time.

Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?:Yes, mainly because it was the first language I learned.

Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself:If I personally were to describe myself I'd say I was cool but from another person's point of view it's probably more of a Creative/Gamer sort of guy. I usually act like an goof ball when I'm bored, but I do try to be serious from time to time. I take people seriously easily and I really get mad when someone mocks me even though he is joking, though it's more of an annoyance then a hatred.

How much time could you be on the server weekly?: 19-20 hours

What do you know about Roleplaying? Give a definition of what it means to you.:I know the Roleplaying is pretending to be a fictional character, talking as they would and acting as they would. Roleplaying is actually pretty important to me since I do it so much on other games.

In your own Words, describe what Metagaming and Powergaming are.:

Metagaming is the act of having one's character know certain information they wouldn't normally know. If I was told something about the server IRL, like a war was coming on a certain date, my character wouldn't actually know that because it's Metagaming.

Powergaming is an RP struggle of sorts, where if I was to type *grabs the enemy's arm and holds him down so he can't hurt me* he would have no ability to fight back, and I'd be acting super overpowered and generally like a jerk.

What do you expect this server will be like?:I expect it to be really handled and and a barrel of fun.

What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?:I have not played on any other server.

Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?: Yes

How did you hear about us?:I heard about you guys from my friend Falconbird9

Have you voted for the Lord of the Craft on Minestatus? Which vote number were you?Yes, I have. (1,609)

What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name?: Ragingbullet

In-Character:

Character Name: Thorgus Crockhandle

What is your Race?:Dwarf

Biography(This should include the history of your character and his life as well as age, appearance and personality, etc.): Thorgus has brown hair and a black and grey squared shirt with blue pants and black gloves with grey and black shoes with a brown beard. He loves mining, He loves to build houses, even when he was 24 years of age. Thorgus once had a bad dream of zombies eating him. He absolutly hates undead minnsters that make him angry when he sees them. This is the lore of Thorgus The Dwarf, I hope you like it. Thorgus was a real chip off the old block when he was a kid. His father was interested in sword fighting and his mother was interested in cooking and blacksmitherie. His father taught him everything he knew. One sunny day, on his 24th birthday his dad taught him how to make houses with all sorts of materials like wooden planks and roofs with cobblestone. He was really good at making houses that his father thought he was ready to venture of into the mines and continue the family business. When suddenly, a bunch of Orcs challenged him to a dual to the death. He took his mighty Diamond Axe out of his knapsack that his dad made him when he was 18 years old and and his diamond sword out of his knapsack and killed all of the Orcs that were there and finally all of the Orcs were defeated. He saw that the Orcs were carrying a bunch of wooden planks and rare ores that costed a fortune. He took the stacks of diamonds and wooden planks and continued his adventure to the dwarf city where he can finally make his father proud by making a house and and mining some more rare ores. It was getting dark so Thorgus stopped at a hotel for the night and rested until morning. The next morning, Thorgus put on his clothes and grabbed his stuff and payed the manager and left him a tip of one diamond he got for killing those Orcs. He walked towards the road and heard a traveler cry like a little baby who got his stuff stolen. The traveler said that the Orcs stole the dwarf city's whole armory for their own and they have been using it for 4 strait wars. Thorgus thought that bringing him all the armory's stuff back was a good idea, so Thorgus went to the Orc city and take back the armory that the dwarf city lost 16 years ago.He got to the city and climbed the Orc city walls like a monkey cause climbing was one of his ability's he killed the Orc at the top of the wall with his diamond Axe. He had to stop on top of the wall and clean his Diamond Axe.After he cleaned his Axe, he walked down to the stolen armory and sneaked back to the dwarfish city traveler and gave the armory back to him. He asked the traveler the directions of the city and he said it was north east from here. Thorgus said thanks for the directions. After 3 days of walking Thorgus finally got to the dwarf city. The gate keeper said "Hello there fellow dwarf, what are you doing here on such a fine day"? Thorgus said that he was here to make his father proud and mine rare ores and build his very own house. The Gate guard said that there was a shop down on 2nd street. Thorgus got permission to enter and he went to the shop to craft a diamond Pick Axe and get some more supplies to make his own house. He went in the shop and the shop keeper said "How may I help you?". Thorgus said that he wanted supplies to build a house in this city and where can I craft my Diamond Pickaxe. The shop keeper said that the crafting table and the furnace were beside the counter and supplies for the house you want would be 10 diamond ores and the plot would cost 50 dwarfish dollars. Thorgus gave him the diamond ores and the 50 dollars. The shop keeper said you can have 64 extra coal as a gift for doing these things. He crafted the Diamond Pickaxe and went to his plot and made his very own house with his supplies he got from the shop and made a very nice house that he thought was a really good home. But,, he did not finish the house completely. A dwarf came up to him and said have you heard of the story of the fall of aegis? Thorgus said no and the dwarf told him the story about how a brave soul went into the Nether (Sealed or sacred realm. I forget which one it was). He sacraficed himself into a pool of lava and aegis was saved until the Undead Soldiers took aegis for them selves. Thorgus decided to liberate aegis from those villainous Undead Soldiers. He went to the Undead territory of aegis and he saw the Undead were really evil and turned aegis into one scary city. A bunch of Undead soldiers saw him and knocked him out with a knock out flare. He awoke and found himself in the Undead prison. He ripped off the chains he was tightly chained chained in and broke out of prison with his massive strength through 16 walls and ran towards a boat outside the prison which would take him back to the dwarf city if he steered the boat right. He finally got back to the city of the dwarfs when a group of dwarfish soldiers walked by. Thorgus asked them if they wanted to grab all of their friends and take on the Undead city. They agreed and Thorgus asked the dwarf king if he could use the soldier/war meeting room. The king said it was alright to use it. 5 days later the soldiers returned with their human, elf and dwarf friends and the war against the Undead started. After 20 years, aegis was liberated and the army won the war. The army returned to the dwarf city. The king threw a big party and the whole army and the whole city except the people that died during the war was invited. After diner, The king announced a toast to the dwarf that led the army of Heroes. After the toast the king asked Thorgus what he was going to do next. Thorgus said he was going to finish his home in this city. But the king said you can be the leader of this fine city and you can visit the old city any time you like and you will have a statue of yourself as a war legend in the city that the finest builder are rebuilding. Thorgus said that would be lovely, I am thankful for this army winning the war of the Undead. Now all of the Lord Of The Craftia can now live in peace. After the diner, Thogus was the new leader of this new dwarf city. He died when he was 110 years of age and married a nice wife at the age of 60. I hope you liked this lore of my character, Because I did.

Your characters ambitions:His ambitions are to keep up the family business and return aegis to it's origonal state.

Out in the Wilds, your character comes across a small cottage. Outside, there appears to be an elf struggling combat with two bandits. What does your character do?: Tell the bandits to stop. If they don't stop, he defends the elf.

Your character walks up to a shop in a quiet market. "Hello, my good sir!" says the shop owner. "What may I help you with today?" How does your character answer? I would like your finest supplies that you you can offer.

A screenshot of your skin: http://www.minershoes.com/skin/view/i4f368f3461eed8436682085475431584317443194

Other Information:

[Danny 2232]

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I'm sorry, but your application for Lord of the Craft has been...

Notes for applicant:

• You can't be a dead dwarf... You say: "He died when he was 110 years of age". Then how can you play as him?
• Your open response questions aren't detailed enough, and don't describe much. What would your character say, think and feel.
• That skin isn't a roleplay skin.

Please note: Whilst you may be angry or irritated at this denial, you need to understand that as a member of the Application Team it is my job to ensure we only have people who made great applications on the server. After you fix the issues that I've detailed in your application, it will probably be accepted.

Where can I get help to fix these errors?

It really depends on what you need – you are not allowed to have anyone else write part of your application for you. As the Application Team we're here to not only accept and deny your applications, but it's our job to give you help for fixing them. We'll help you as much as we can, but we will never write a bit of your application, no matter how much you ask!

The best way to get help, is to contact the Application Team member who denied you, (in this case, myself; Danny). You can contact me either here on the forums, via a PM – or you can also find me on TeamSpeak most of the time, either in the “Application Team” channel or in one of the private channels. Feel free to poke me, or send me a message for any help, and I'll try my best to help you!

I'd also suggest that you do some reading up, depending on why you were denied, as there's some good help out there, already written for anyone who needs it!

The WikiYou provides almost every scratch of lore that we have, there's people dedicated to expanding on it, and making it as detailed as possible. It's possibly the best place to find lore on the website, although you can also find quite a bit in this forum section.

You should also read the various posts that have been made by GM's and Application Team members to help with your applications, and believe me, there are many. The most useful is the “Application Team's Advice” thread. Which can be found

right here.

Can I re-apply?

Of course you can! Often people post as many as 3 applications before they're accepted! Just make sure, that you wait until after 2 hours before you re-apply or your application will be denied. We have the 2 hour wait system to keep the Application Submissions forum tidy, and to ensure that the application team aren't overwhelmed by applicants posting a new application every five minutes.

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[Daniel_J 23]

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