Korasigaming's Application

[Wolf Haley (Tyler Okonma) 3]

Out-Of-Character

Will Marsh

Minecraft Account Name:

KorasiGaming

How old are you?:

12, I'm alot more mature than most of my year. Anyway, I'm the oldest of my year my birhtday is on the 21st september.

Time-Zone/Country of Residence:

GMT, British time. I live near bournemouth, in poole. Right by the sea. I've got my penthouse, traintrack, then the beach. It's really close!

Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?:

Yes I'd say my grammer/Language is usualy better than most players. I do put effort into every sentance. I never forget my punctuation etc. I think of it as

a habit as using good, and well put sentences. I do not have a very good imagenation as you will see from the biography.

Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself:

I love minecraft, I play many other games. I always study hard, but I sometimes go to bed late; which decreases my consentration the next day at school. I

love to play cricket, I don't play in the winter though, I play in the summer. I take weekly piano lessons on Wednesdays for half an hour. My mother is

Turkish, and my father is british, I can speak both languages fully, and fluently.

How much time could you be on the server weekly?:

I'm on about 4-13 hours a day. I'm not sure, but I think whitelisted servers are more important then not whitelisted. Because you must have a good community.

So i'd play on this server more. As I said earlier, I do have a half an hour lesson in piano weekly. On a Wednesday.

What do you know about Roleplaying? Give a definition of what it means to you:

Roleplaying in a computer is living the life of a created character. I've played on many role playing servers. Here is a chat I've done on a role play server

----Rain Starts-----

Korasi walks up to Leo's (name edited to more roleplay type) house.

-Knock Knock-

Me: Hello? Please may I come in? Just for a minute,

Leo turns to door.

Leo: Oh sorry, didn't see you there! Sure come on in!

Me: Would you like to come over to my house tommorrow at ... just before night time?

.........

Yeah, that's my roleplaying type of thing. I could roleplay in any style aswell. I played a game called runescape, Which is a RPG game,

I could never find a decent role play game, so I decided to turn it into a roleplay game in my own imagenation! So I made a Daily schedual

Wake up IRL.

Go on runescape.

Feed the pets.

Invite a online friend for curry.

Go for a walk

Go PvPing

Lastly have a nice two minute time in the pub alone unless another roleplaying friend comes with me.

I also played on the roleplaying worlds for a while.

In your own Words, define what the act of Meta-Gaming is:

Ok, I was given help with this even though it it adressed in my own words. Powergaming is making somone with no other choice to do somthing. Like having a

overpowerd character. Metagaming is using information out of your character, and then using it in your character, like if you plan a build on a test server,

and then build it with your character. Your character is not meant to be aware how to do it. It should also be the first time doing it.

What do you expect this server will be like?:

I think it would be amazing, With beautiful scenes. I've also played lord of the rings online the RPG game. It's

pretty good, I loved it. I love mincraft. Put them together it would be epic. I also have seen part of the lord of the rings movies and playing this would

enspire me to watch them all. I'd love to learn more about Lord Of The Rings! I also never can find a server were there is a rule to not come out of your

character. That's great if you ask me. With really good roleplayers too! I'm also aware it's not based on lord of the rings.

What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?:

I played on CityCraft. It was a good server in 1.6 -1.7 but then, they started getting rid of the original PvPer's like me. I used to do alot of pvp. I still

can do it. But I preffer it to be a hidden skill like if a town got raided. I could use it then. I left CityCraf because my brother made a server. Somone

went on CityCraft spammed our server IP. Pretending to be one of us. There were 5-6 of us there from CityCraft. We all got banned. Then Citycraft's admins;

moderators started abusing powers. It got really annoying and I left. I do not recommend CityCraft anymore. They have powerhungry staff who do not care about

anything but donations. They only have two caring staff. When they had two amazing staff also they demoted them for not being as harsh or somthing. That

leaves two good staff on a server with 140 regular players.

Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?:

Yes, I agree on all the rules. I'd always check before doing somthing bad. I disagree on rulebreaking, I think theres no point in breaking rules. I think all

rule breakers who break rules on purpose should be stuck on creative mode everytime they turn minecraft on with every mod there is. Inclueding Herobrine just

to scare them.

Do you promise to abide by said rules, and laws? This includes the Server, Forum, and Teamspeak set Rules:

Yes, I promise never to disobay any commands. I'll always stay on the rules/laws.

How did you hear about us?:

My friend WAGGY1999 put it up on his skype status. I thought it looked cool.So I'm trying this out. I also have heard WAGGY1999's friend applying and

failing, HunterOfTheNorth and I thought I'd like to try myself aswell!

Have you voted for the Lord of the Craft on Minestatus? Which vote number were you?:

No not yet, I'll put it on my to-do list. I'll remember to do it some time soon.

In-Character:

KorasiGaming

Character Name:

Korasi, I think the Gaming part wouldn't suit the enviroment of this server.

What Race are you?:

Man, I always choose the nearest to human race in every game. I don't like looking like grose reptile things... On skyrim I'm a human aswell.

What Sub-Race are you? (note, you aren’t required to have a sub-race):

I don't have one, I'm to even to sure what they are, I'll search it later.

Biography (Please make this at least 2 paragraphs long. This must include the history of your character and his life as well as age,

appearance and personality, etc.):

At the age of 8, Korasi ran away from home. He lived in a farm for 10 years. At the age of 18. Some men in robes came to his farm, And took him away. He

could not escape, there were many of the people in the distance. His short brown hair was in a mess. He put his and by his foot after being thrown against a

wall. He was taken to join the Hobbit race. There were two men. Performing a ritual around him. They were short, like everyone else. He reached for his

pocket and found a sharp, thin knife. He threw the knife at one Hobbit to disband the Ritual. Then he took his escape, and ran to stop for armour and a sword

only.He ran and ran, through the trees, swam through the rivers. He stopped, and lit a beautiful fire. As he lay down against the cold and damp mud. He heard

the leaves around his crunching..He got up and pulled out a stick and lit it. The torch he had lit was slowly dieing down, the crunching of the leaves

started getting louder, and closer! He stood behind a tree, with his blue eyes coverd by his eyelids. He felt a chill go down his spine. Korasi lunged out

from behind the tree and hurled a small, sharp knife towards the area where he expected to see a person. No-one was there. He picked up his stuff gear and

sprinted to the old village he lived in. He felt a warm, calm breeze on his face as he pushed his way through the bush. He collapsed in sadness to find the

place he grew up in to be burnt down. He ran through the ruins and kicked down the door of every persons house to find survivors. He couldn't find anyone, he ran up and down every allyway, every street in the village to find some clues of who did it. All the people where gone, every house was burnt but still standing. He took the remains of what he found into a cart, and pushed the cart down a track to a medow. He followed on behind the cart to where it stopped in a sunny place far away from the village. Two hours had passed, he had already built a little hut out of wood. He went outside and saw a large bear in the distance, He drew his bow and shot the thin, sharp arrrow towards the bear. He had hit the bear in the neck and punctured its wind pipe. He cut the bear open and took the meat and cooked it and used the fur as a rug. He had deep thoughts about the village that he lived in, and how he left on that day and saw the people for perhaps the last time, he regreted everything. He waited for day and went outside with a axe and chopped down trees and made his house for a hut into a bungaloo. He had crafted many weapons too. One night the next week, four men were hiding at the back of Korasi's house. Korasi heard them in his sleep. He could see there shadow through the window onto the wall. He knew exactly where they were hiding at the back of the house. Korasi pulled a sword out from a long, box and stabbed it into the wall killing one of the four men. The other three did not notice he had fallen and died. Korasi went round one side of the bungaloo and shouted "Behind!" pretending to be the guy he killed. When they turned around Korasi ran round and got them from behind. He left one on the verge of death to find out who sent him, and why. The man dressed in black said "He orderd me to come, with my brothers and kill you. He didn't tell me why he just said that..." The man slowly started to die. "WHO SENT YOU!" Korasi yelled! The man turned cold, and started to drop back. He had died. Korasi ran into his house and made the best armour he could. People say, he often is seen in a village, fighting off thugs and bandits now, But he's just waiting to be accepted for the army that a old man was building.

What is your Character's ambitions?:

To have a fun time on the server, and help out. I'd also like to increase my role playing skill.

What is your character’s favorite tool? (sword, pickaxe, shovel, etc):

Pickaxe, You can get alot from a pickaxe, you can mine the things you need for all the other tools. It's quite handy.

What is one of your Character's most skilled talents?

PvPing, Fighting and slaying mobs and people. Also guarding things.

A screenshot of your skin (must be in proper format):

http://oi40.tinypic.com/122dfet.jpg I'm not sure what the format is. I think I've done it right. The link is on the left.

Other Information about your Character:

He is good at free running Is very wise, and stealthy.

Whilst traveling from the Cloud Temple you see a small halfling, being harassed by two armed warriors. They appear to be trying to steal

money from him, how does your character respond?

Korasi:Hello Gentlemen, what's going on here?

Halfing: Help me! They're trying to mug me!

Korasi: Back off! Or you'll both have to fight me!

Sask: Ok then! We'll fight you!

-Fight Starts-

Sask falls down and limps away with a damaged leg.

Goliath: SASK! GO I'LL HOLD THEM OFF! GET BACK TO THE MINE!

Your character wanders into Alras, and comes across a small stall, behind which a well dressed man is standing. He’s offering various

wares, the merchant turns to you and says in a posh accent " 'ello there, what can I do you for today?" What is your character response?

Korasi: I'd like 15 Loafs of bread for 10 iron ingots.

Shop Keeper: Sure, here you go.

Whilst wandering in the wilds, your character comes across a small hut, which looks abandoned. Inside it you see a chest containing a few

iron bars, and a golden sword. How would your character respond?:

Korasi: Woah! I hope these arn't anyones! Well the place looks abandoned so I'll make some armour and keep the sword!

Hungry and lost in the wilderness, you stumble across a small trading camp nestled among the forest, they greet you you in the common

tongue, how do you respond?

Korasi: What a nice place here! I love it! It must have taken ages to gather the resources for your camp! I must say look at the houses! They're beautiful.

You hear word that bandits occupy the road outside the town in which you have been staying. The town guard have gathered, and are asking

for assistance to help eliminate them. The leader of the party is offering a reward for any who offer their support. How does your character act on this

information?:

Korasi: I'll join! I'll help you! I'll be one second I'll go get my gear from my basement! I wont be long!

Thanks for reading! I hope you like my application! I've tried hard on it. It's my sixth attempt!

PS: Great forum!

-KorasiGaming

There are also some rather odd gaps, Everytime I correct it goes back. I

[Lego XBOX 915]

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You have been denied.

There are various reasons for this denial but I can see you do understand in some way what RP is about.

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~I told you this last time. The Out Of Character and In Character are titles. You don't need to put an answer to them.

~You should always look over your application to find errors. It really looks bad when you say that you have better spelling and grammar than other players and have an error in that same sentence. This I also told you last time:

I do put effort into every sentance.

When they had two amazing staff also they demoted them for not being as harsh or somthing.

~Please try and fix the errors with your spacing, just rewrite an application on the actual forums. Its easier and you won't have the problems with the spacing. It is just hard to read. Also avoid the wall of text you have for your biography. If you don't put it into paragraphs it really makes me want to ignore it.

~Another member of the Application Team has told you this already. A RPG is not an RP. An RPG is what Runescape or Skyrim or Lord of the Rings Online is for example. In those games the point is to get money and level up. In an RP the point is to have fun and socialize.

~You did not give me a definition of Power-Gaming. You can find it on Team Speak App Team help channel. But you must say it in your own words.

~PvPing is not allowed on the server. Please read the rules a bit more carefully.

~As I also said, its obvious that your Minecraft name doesn't have to resemble the name you will use for your character ingame, so you don't need to be Korasi, though you can be him.

~This server doesn't have anything to do with LotR. Another Application Team member told you this. Thus they are not 'hobbits' but they are called 'Halflings' (they aren't the same thing though).

~You are over powered (another definition of power gaming) throughout the entire application. You were captured, but you could throw a knife at a 'Hobbit'. You were able from a pretty long distance, with one arrow to hit a bear directly in the windpipe. You stabbed your sword through a wall. So you are also strong, you don't seem to have any weaknesses. You are very quick and stealthy and are able to kill 3 guards from behind without trouble, with a sword. And many other things.

~Think of a bio which includes less slaughtering, it makes you sound a bit drama queen.

~Your favorite tool (which is the tool you use best) is a pickaxe, but you can slay things perfectly. That's also power gaming.

~To PvP and easily slay things is not a skill, think of one more creative to write up. And on that matter you can't be good at free running and swift having heavy armor and using a long sword. Especially being a Human.

~Finally, your Open Response Questions answers are nothing, you have to show a bit of effort and creativity if you want to RP properly. It make it more interesting for us team members. For the sake of it. I won't review your next application so we can see if you took my advice.

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That is all I can say about your application. And for your friend Hunterofthenorth, he is going to be banned for copying your application. Good friend he is... *sarcasm*

I authorize one last application attempt.

[Lego XBOX 915]

Moved to Denied Forum