Aitrus Omaar 2Nd Attempt

[SGriffs007 0]

Out-Of-Character

Minecraft Account Name: SGriffs007.

How old are you?: 13, turning 14 in April.

Time-Zone/Country of Residence: NSW, Australia

Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?: Yes. I managed to get in to a special high-school class for my English skills.

Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself: I am a friendly guy and easy to get along with. I enjoy playing guitar and Xbox. I have been playing minecraft since 1.8 (Beta).

How much time could you be on the server weekly?: About an hour 3-4 times a week.

What do you know about Roleplaying? Give a definition of what it means to you: Role-playing is when you act out the role of a character, reacting as he/she would in a situation.

What experience have you had in Roleplaying, if any?: I have played on various RP server, but have left due to bad moderation/community.

In your own Words, define what the act of Meta-Gaming is: Meta-gaming is when you use OOC information IC.

In your own Words, define what the act of Power-Gaming is: Power-gaming is when you claim to do impossible things, that make it unfair to other players.

What do you expect this server will be like?: I expect it to be great. I have heard many recommendations from various people, and judging by how many apps your getting, you must be good.

What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?: Kreatious - Head Admin Left, new map gets griefed alot.

imdiety - Hardly anyone role-plays on it.

Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?:Yes I have read, understood and agreed to the rules.

Do you promise to abide by said rules, and laws? This includes the Server, Forum, and Teamspeak set Rules: Yes I promise to abide all of the rules.

How did you hear about us?: I heard about you from my 2 friends who play on this server.

Have you voted for the Lord of the Craft on Minestatus? Which vote number were you?: Yes I have voted for you. However i do not precisely know the vote number. There are 686 votes, so I think i must be the 686th.

In-Character:

Character Name: Aitrus Omaar.

What Race are you?: Human.

What Sub-Race are you? (note, you aren’t required to have a sub-race): Northerner. (If I would ever want to change, could the moderator reading this please tell me how).

Biography (Please make this at least 2 paragraphs long. This must include the history of your character and his life as well as age, appearance and personality, etc.): Description: Aitrus is an Ambitious adventurer who is an opportunist. He has a big love for adventuring and exploring, he has Black Hair, he wears a leather jacket and leather pants. He usually wears Armour on his travels. Aitrus is also a good Blacksmith, as also was his father, who was the blacksmith of their town. He has seen a few battles and knows how to wield a blade, due to his travels with the traders he had. He is a kind person who will only fight another Human, Dwarf, Elf or Orc when he is facing death or if he is getting robbed. He may also help others being robbed, attacked, etc... He is Easily to get along with and a friendly person.

History: Aitrus was born into a rather wealthy family where he was the youngest child, he had one brother and one sister. His brother was the eldest of the three. When his brother was 18 he enlisted in the Human military. His brother was quickly promoted to a Captain. When his brother and his group of soldiers were investigating a cave that was supposedly full of zombies the cave collapsed and the soldiers haven't been heard from since. Aitrus' brother is presumed missing in action.

His father was a Blacksmith and was able to teach him a lot of skills related to smithing. When Aitrus was a boy he loved hearing the tale of Aegis with Malin, Krug, Horen and Urguan and Iblees.When Aitrus was 14 his sister was 19. Aitrus' sister was a politician. One day she was offered a job to sail to a foreign continent and to work out a diplomatic solution to the trade routes. She gladly took the job and sailed to the overseas continent. Aitrus was now left as an only child.

When Aitrus was 17 he was offered a job to travel with a trading caravan, which he gladly took as a chance to explore the world of Asulon. He had many adventures with the traders. One of the traders was particularly skilled with the sword, and taught Aitrus a few of his skills during their travels. One day the caravan was attacked by a pack of viscous wolves near the border of solace. Aitrus ran to the stock chest with his fellow traders and grabbed out a iron sword. Aitrus helped his men fend of the viscous wolves. One of the men who had been surrounded by three wolves, and was close to being faced with death. He saw that the other men were busy with the other wolves, so Aitrus went and helped the wounded trader fight off the wolves and drag him back to the safety of the caravan. Aitrus was given a Heroism medal for this feat. He returned home after a few years.

When Aitrus was 21 he decided to begin his life as an adventurer. He said farewell to his parents and set out on his adventure. Aitrus' goal is to uncover the mystery of his brother, and explore all of Asulon.

Current Date: Aitrus is now 23 years old and explores the continent of Asulon.

What is your Character's ambitions?: His ambitions are to uncover the fate of his missing brother, and to explore all of Asulon.

What is your character’s favorite tool? (sword, pickaxe, shovel, etc): Aitrus' faveourite tool is a sword, because he finds it the most easy of weapons to handle. He also believes that they are easier to craft and use, and deal more damage to foes in his times of need. He also carries around a pick-axe because he loves occasionaly enjoying mining ores to make better Armour/weapons.

What is one of your Character's most skilled talents? Swordsmanship is probably his most talented skill, as it is thing he has always carried with him, a sword, and had to use it the most times. He is also great at smithing, like his father where he learnt the skill from. He is not the best smith, but can craft some handy iron Armour and swords.

A screenshot of your skin (must be in proper format): Attached to document.

Other Information about your Character: He is 23 years old and is currently adventuring Asulon.

Open-Response-Questions

Whilst traveling from the Cloud Temple you see a small halfling, being harassed by two armed warriors. They appear to be trying to steal money from him, how does your character respond? Aitrus sneaks up and hides from the situation. He listens in, trying to gather any important together. The halfling seemed to refuse to give over his valuables, therefore the two armed warriors got a bit violent and pulled their daggers on the halfling. Aitrus flings out of his hiding spot and says "stop, and pick on somebody your own size!". The armed warriors then drop the halfling, and he scatters away. They both approach him with their daggers, very angry. Aitrus draws his sword, and waits for them to make the first move. The attacked, but Aitrus blocked the swing, and swung back at them hitting the first warrior. The second one tries to attack, but is blocked and hurt also. Aitrus uses their size against them, dodging and ducking under their blows, occasionally attacking them. He defeats them, and returns any keeps their stolen goods as their is know one around to claim them.

Your character wanders into Alras, and comes across a small stall, behind which a well dressed man is standing. He’s offering various wares, the merchant turns to you and says in a posh accent " 'ello there, what can I do you for today?" What is your character response? Aitrus politely greets the man, and asks what he has for sale. He browses through the mans stuff, which vary from tunics, Armour, rings, footware etc... He spots a nice looking Leather tunic, and asks how much it is. When the man replies, Aitrus does not want to spend that much coin on it, so he politely says he does not want to buy it. He will tell the man farewell, and walk away from the stall.

Whilst wandering in the wilds, your character comes across a small hut, which looks abandoned. Inside it you see a chest containing a few iron bars, and a golden sword. How would your character respond?: Aitrus first scans the area. It is obviously uninhabited due to the rotting floorboards and walls of the house. Aitrus walks inside, and looks through the items. After reassuring know one lived their, he would take anything that he wanted, shut the chest. He walks away from the hut, and continues his journey.

Hungry and lost in the wilderness, you stumble across a small trading camp nestled among the forest, they greet you you in the common tongue, how do you respond? Aitrus greets them friendly. He asks the person if they would be kind enough to spare some food and water. The trader smiles, and says "Sure, we have plenty of food here! Take what you need friend". Surprised the kindness of the traders, Aitrus spends the night with the traders. He sleeps there for the night, and gets up in the morning. Before his departure, he thanks the men for their kindness, and bids them farewell. Aitrus will walk away, and continue his journey.

You hear word that bandits occupy the road outside the town in which you have been staying. The town guard have gathered, and are asking for assistance to help eliminate them. The leader of the party is offering a reward for any who offer their support. How does your character act on this information?: Aitrus steps through the crowd, and and openly volunteers to assist the guards. They gather a few more willing men, and they soon head off to the bandit road. They all stealthy sneak up on them, and some of the guardsmen fire some arrows at them from a distance. The arrows struck and killed the bandits they were aimed for. All the other bandits just looked up and started running angrily towards the Aitrus and the guardsmen. They engage in battle,. Aitrus parries off many blows and does a fair deal of damage. After he and the guards had successfully fend off the bandits, everyone sheaves their weapons. The party leader approaches Aitrus and thanks him for his assistance, and then hands him the reward. Aitrus will then continue to do what it was he was doing.

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not bad...

but..

You can not define a word using the word in the definition, this shows lack of understanding of the word, and as we are an RP server we expect full understanding of what it means to RP. Expand this definition in your own words to show you understand what it means

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