Ventus2's Third Application

[Ventai 291]

Out-Of-Character

Minecraft Account Name: ventus2

How old are you?: 14

Time-Zone/Country of Residence: Canada,Eastern Time

Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?: I have a fair grip on grammar and im good at English

Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself: Im fairly good at drawing. I am in high school and just like anyone else im just try to pass. I am thinking of persuing a career in animation.

How much time could you be on the server weekly?: 20-30 hours a week

What do you know about Roleplaying? Give a definition of what it means to you: Roleplaying is when a person creates a charecter and breaths life into that charecter. He makes a story which follows the charecter and then the person plays as that charecter and does what the charecter would do in that situation.

What experience have you had in Roleplaying, if any?: I was on lots of mutiplayer servers and on some roleplay servers. one of them was aerocraft which i was a assassin with my freind named Icelifreakx and we were fighting againest the Nether Mages.

In your own Words, define what the act of Meta-Gaming is: Meta-Gaming is when a charecter acts out of charecter.

In your own Words, define what the act of Power-Gaming is: Power-Gaming is when a charecter does something which is imposable for the other charecter to react to.

What do you expect this server will be like?: i think it will be a very intertaning sever which people dont power-game or meta-game in. and i really wanted to play on a good roleplay server that actually roleplays.

What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?: i was on the wasteland botp it was a really amazing server and i left because it went down.

Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?: yes i have

Do you promise to abide by said rules, and laws? This includes the Server, Forum, and Teamspeak set Rules: yes i do

How did you hear about us?: I heard from a freind who got accepted in the server and he said it was a amazing server that has endless amounts of fun.

Have you voted for the Lord of the Craft on Minestatus? Which vote number were you?: no i havent i want to see what its like first before i vote.

In-Character:

Character Name: Fedas BraveHeart

What Race are you?: Elf

Biography (Please make this at least 2 paragraphs long. This must include the history of your character and his life as well as age, appearance and personality, etc.):

Fedas was a basterd but not just any basterd a basterd born by the kings blood. He was sent to the streets and nobody cared about him. he was forced to life as a begger prince with no money no shealter or food. He had to run away from the city and lived in the wilds. in the wilds he learned stealth speed and knowlledge of the wilds. he made freinds with wildlife and learned tallents from the animals he gained speed and a knowlledge of hunting from the wild cats. he learned how to increase hes strength and combat from the bears.

He feasted on the meat from fish and wild boars. untill one day antother basterd came to him he was weilding a sword and had hood on. he looked at Fedas. Fedas said '' hey you ant from around here are you lost?'' the man replyed with a smile and said '' I am not lost just looking for some rare shrooms. Who are you?'' Fedas said with a faint voice '' My name is fedas BraveHeart ive been lifing in these wilds for some time now'' The man looked at Fedas with pity and said '' well you can come with me if you want i was heading to my house ill get you some thing to eat you look straved'' that is when fadas saw that not the whole world is filled with hate. he thanked the man and they were off to the mans home. fedas learned how to use sword rather than a stick he also learned how to use a bow and learned acrobatics.

after one year of becoming a man somthing happened undead rose from the ground the man who found bravly protected him but it was to to late the house was burnt down. and the man was dead fedas was in the wilds and when he came back he saw the man dead on the ground. anger filled his heart he could not bear to see the man the only one that cared the only one that helped him. after he morned and went off to find people like the man and hoping that one day he could find the horrable beings that did this to his hero.

What is your Character's ambitions?: Revange to find the murder of the only person that cared about him.

What is your character’s favorite tool? (sword, pickaxe, shovel, etc): the blade that was given to him from his hero.

What is one of your Character's most skilled talents? agilty

A screenshot of your skin (must be in proper format): http://imgur.com/TVdjG

Other Information about your Character: he has a side quest of finding his heros son. he has a strange obbsesion with wealth.

Open-Response-Questions

Whilst traveling from the Cloud Temple you see a small halfling, being harassed by two armed warriors. They appear to be trying to steal money from him, how does your character respond? Fedas finds a place to hide he looks for a opening and shots the warriors in the leg. thus stoping the warriors in there footsteps. he points his sword to the warriors and questions them.

Your character wanders into Alras, and comes across a small stall, behind which a well dressed man is standing. He’s offering various wares, the merchant turns to you and says in a posh accent " 'ello there, what can I do you for today?" What is your character response? Fedas replys with a shy voice '' what are you selling''.

Whilst wandering in the wilds, your character comes across a small hut, which looks abandoned. Inside it you see a chest containing a few iron bars, and a golden sword. How would your character respond?: Fedas takes the iron and golden sword and sells the sword for some extra coin.

Hungry and lost in the wilderness, you stumble across a small trading camp nestled among the forest, they greet you you in the common tongue, how do you respond? Fedas replys with '' is there any work that i can do i need the coin''.

You hear word that bandits occupy the road outside the town in which in which you have been staying. The town guard have gathered, and are asking for assistance to help eliminate them. The leader of the party is offering a reward for any who offer their support. How does your character act on this information?: Fedas accepts the job glady. He hids in the wild and wacths the bandits closly for a opening attack.

[Rhisereld 317]

I'm sorry, but you have been Denied. This doesn't mean you won't get on the server, it just means your application needs to be improved or changed first!

Your definitions of metagaming and powergaming are wrong in this context. You should research them.

Proofread your application and fix spelling/grammar.

Work on your biography. Flesh out your character. You cannot start off as royalty, even if you were illegitimate. Your biography is also difficult to understand due to poor grammar. There's something about an Undead, which breaks lore. They're not running around in Asulon. They were only in Aegis.

You need more detail in your open response questions. Tell more than your character's initial reaction, including dialogue, details of any combat and reactions of other characters. You need to really explain the scenario and follow it to its end.

[Rhisereld 317]

Moved to Denied Forum