Freshkidp Typical Application Form

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Out-Of-Character

Minecraft Account Name: freshkidp

How old are you?:18

Time-Zone/Country of Residence:PH,GMT

Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?:Yes

Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself:Just like others i have no special characters to add. But i have some simple difference between them, i have this useful sense of humor since i was 8, my parents are just typical parents, my mother is working at Lyceum De Calamba, my father was an adventurer like you but he took an arrow on the knee :D joke my father is a computer technician. I've live my life reading books and learning computer fundamentals and troubleshooting.

How much time could you be on the server weekly?: 4-5 daily and sometimes more depending on my situation.

What do you know about Roleplaying? Give a definition of what it means to you: Role-playing to me is just putting your self at someones life, following the path of someone and taking the role of the character itself, i believe that role-playing gives us another life and that another life would be perfect because we can change anything that we made mistakes in our real life, its just like putting your self in someones shoes.

What experience have you had in Roleplaying, if any?:In school, sometimes i'm a teacher and its fun though its giving me a hard time but all is worth as long as you are having fun of what you are doing.

In your own Words, define what the act of Meta-Gaming is: Meta-Gaming is giving additional knowledge to your character giving it an advance knowledge that he usually didn't already know.

In your own Words, define what the act of Power-Gaming is: Power-Gaming is like being PRO at something making yourself a tough man like a "KING OF THE HILL" don't letting someone be on the top of your shoulder and thinking he/herself tough.

What do you expect this server will be like?: Just what is said above its a role-play i'm just gonna put my self to where i should be and do what should i do.

What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?: UBER, SUPER-EARTH and NEXUS, i leave them because they have this boring part on the start and they don't have this event thing that LOC has.

Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?:Yes

Do you promise to abide by said rules, and laws? This includes the Server, Forum, and Teamspeak set Rules:Yes.

How did you hear about us?:I found it on YouTube while i was roaming at minecraft topics.

Have you voted for the Lord of the Craft on Minestatus? Which vote number were you?:

Have you posted this application on our minecraft forum thread yet? If not, just finish it up on here and then copy + paste is over there. (http://www.minecraftforum.net/topic/832121-%E2%96%91%E2%96%92%E2%96%93-the-lord-of-the-craft-%E2%96%93%E2%96%92%E2%96%91-enter-the-world-of-asulon-o-f-f-i-c-i-a-l-l-y-t-h-e-n-o-1-r-p-s-e-r-v-e-r/):Sorry not yet, ill vote it after.

In-Character:

Character Name:Jules Everlazzy.

What Race are you?:Human.

What Sub-Race are you? (note, you aren’t required to have a sub-race):

Biography (Please make this at least 2 paragraphs long. This must include the history of your character and his life as well as age, appearance and personality, etc.):

Well my story? My story is not so special, i'm a tribes man lived in Renatus my parents are once a warrior of Oren and were killed during the siege of the undead in the Aegis long time ago, but that didn't affects my growth. Im not usually a tribesman but i was force to leave the Aegis due to the war long time ago. I'm a fisherman of my tribe but my tribesmen didn't notice that i sometimes trained my self for hunting and survival because i know in sometime there will be a time when the undead will rise again and im preparing for it.

My life is not that boring i also have this part time job of being a bard in Asulon but i was forced to stop that job due to the wilderness outside the city and im not ready yet for it but soon when i have the guts to fight, to push forward and the courage to win this wilderness i will. I still remember my dad telling me that "Son, Its not war that stops us its the heart of man, soon you will realize what i said, hahaha after all you are still young." and i just laugh at my father and he response with a laugh too and my mother just look at us and gives us a smile.. but that was long time ago long enough to move on and start a journey and take revenge to what was lost and rebuild what was destroyed. So i hereby promised to my self that i Jules of Tribal will start a journey and return back home with a pride and with a hope for the people that i lost.

What is your Character's ambitions?: To upraise my tribesmen and rebuild my fallen country and bring peace to the world.

What is your character’s favorite tool? (sword, pickaxe, shovel, etc):Bow and dagger that my father gave to me when i was still young.

What is one of your Character's most skilled talents?Archery our tribes specialty

A screenshot of your skin (must be in proper format):

Other Information about your Character:

Im 16 years old, i good at hunting! but others cant see what i can do.. they dont appreciate it. :(

i like to sleep! i like apples, im scared of enderman >,< ,i had a green set of clothes that came from my tribe.. i dont usually talk to people that are not interesting to talk. :|

Open-Response-Questions

Whilst traveling from the Cloud Temple you see a small halfling, being harassed by two armed warriors. They appear to be trying to steal money from him, how does your character respond?Silently Jules walks around the tree and aim his bow at the money socket and shot it to the tree then the two warriors notice the arrow to where it came from so they charge at Jules then Jules walk back to a grassy place and say's "Woa!! woa!! guys cool down for a sec will yah? my arrow just flew in the socket i just missed the bird and the arrows falsely pinned down the socket okay? So will you guys for a sec cool down the jets?" then the first warrior madly grabs his apparel and said "You little kiddo i will crush your head!!!!!!!" and Jules with rumbling toes and feet was scared so much and didn't response on it waiting to be crushed but the halfling interfere and trow a small stone on the head of the warrior and the warior look back at the halfling and commanded the other warrior to take halfling to their HQ but Jules while the warrior was looking back at the halfling takes his chance and pick up the big stones near him and smashed the head of the 1st warrior, smashed enough to take the warrior on his feet and the 2nd warrior saw the smashed head his friend and scares himself off and ran away to the forest. The halfling and Jules become friends after a while and talk then leave each other away.

Your character wanders into Alras, and comes across a small stall, behind which a well dressed man is standing. He’s offering various wares, the merchant turns to you and says in a posh accent " 'ello there, what can I do you for today?" What is your character response?

Jules response: "oh hi, im not asking for anything just passing by! :) im so pleased that you asked me."

Man :"oh another adventurer passing by again? haha its ok im used to it, some people say im crazy because i always ask people who do not ask for anything but this ill tell yah buddy. This place in not the place to have fun and roam around, so stay alert because anything can happen here."

Jules response : " thanks for the advice sir, im glad that i met someone like you! Im leaving soon so goodbye thanks for advice"

Jules continues to walk on his journey.

Whilst wandering in the wilds, your character comes across a small hut, which looks abandoned. Inside it you see a chest containing a few iron bars, and a golden sword. How would your character respond?:

Jules talking to himself: "hmm.. maybe this is trap?? its obvious from the looks of it that its leading.. and leading i think is trouble.." so Jules ignores the chest and proceed to his journey.

Hungry and lost in the wilderness, you stumble across a small trading camp nestled among the forest, they greet you you in the common tongue, how do you respond?

Jules: "Hello there fellas..!? :)"

Man 1 replies : "Hi there stranger, what are ya doin here?, this aint no place for a stray dog.. :D"

The people laughs at Jules.

Jules lied an answer : "I ain't stray dog of someone, im just an adventurer like you, but i took an arrow on the knee. :( "

Man 2: "That's what happens if you just lurk around here and flirt at someone hahahaha. :D"

Jules laughs and response: " hahahaha ok enough with the stupid jokes :| , i aint here for jokes."

Man 1 picks up his extra bread and trow to Jules and said: " hahaha ok we've have enough of you here take this and continue along. I think your mama misses you hahaha. :D"

Jules catch the bread and said : "blah blah blah.. ok thanks by the way." and silently whispered himself "people in here are crazy i should get going.. "

Jules now continues to he's journey.

You hear word that bandits occupy the road outside the town in which you have been staying. The town guard have gathered, and are asking for assistance to help eliminate them. The leader of the party is offering a reward for any who offer their support. How does your character act on this information?:

Jules walks in the front of the Guard.

Jules: "ooh thats sounds interesting.."

Jules offers himself to the party and gave a smile on the Guard :).

Guard 1 heard Jules offers and said : "Come here little boy, this aint no place for kids.. just stay on your house and let us do the job, ok?"

Jules toggle's his sad face :(

then Jules response: "aw, :( but.."

Guard 2 interrupt.

Guard 2 : "Go home kiddo, or else.. "

Jules stand back and watched the battle sadly :(..

[James Undercroft 129]

I am very sorry, but your application has been moved to the denied section of the forums. There are numerous reasons for this, all of which I have included in my feedback below this message. In the mean time there is an abundant source of information, stories, guides and other helpful tips to get you on your way to being accepted; all you need to do is look around. I would suggest the lord of the craft wiki and application submissions section of the forums to start off your little quest to make the best application. Good luck!

The reasons that I have denied you are:

You did not give valid examples of RP, or you did not describe how your examples are RP.

You need to describe to us how the games or locations you have talked about pertain to an RP environment.

Your definition of power-gaming is incorrect.

In lord of the craft we use an RP definition of power-gaming, rather than an RPG definition. While these may seem like the same thing, we can loosely judge that an RPG definition would fit in with games such as World of Warcraft or Skyrim, and the RP definition would fit in with games such as D&D or other person to person Roleplaying. Please do not confuse the definition we use to the definition that other Roleplaying groups may use, relating to creating a character which is too powerful, or doing an “overpowered” action; this is not the definition we use. To make sure you have the correct definition you can either have a look at the Lord of the Craft wiki, or by joining our Team Speak channel (send me a message if you need help getting started) and asking an experienced member. I would also like you to include an example of the term as it demonstrates your understanding of the concept.

Your definition of meta-gaming is incorrect.

There are very few definitions of meta-gaming so it would be rare that you could confuse meta-gaming with another term. I would suggest that you go back to researching (or perhaps begin to research if you guessed the definition) and find out a correct definition pertaining to Roleplaying. I suggest that you do a Google search for the term, look on the Lord of the Craft wiki or join our Team Speak channel. Please do remember that plagiarising (copying someone else’s work) may warrant you a temporary or permanent ban from applying to the server: so don’t do it! I would also like you to include an example of the term as it demonstrates your understanding of the concept.

Your biography has a lot of errors.

You have not included any (or much) lore from the world of Asulon or the lore you did include contradicts that of Asulon. I recommend that you do a lot of research as to what you race is and how they act, as well as towns and places that you could use in your biography. I would also like to note that the entire server escaped from Aegis about 25 in game years ago to move to Asulon, I suggest you do some research on this point. Do note this is not Skyrim or Lord of the Rings, we have our own universe with our own races. For ideas and lore you can look on the Lord of the Craft wiki (link on the main page), the Role-play or History sections of the forums or better yet; talk to the people themselves. Just join in our Team Speak channel and ask around! We welcome new people :)

Your story does not make too much sense.

two paragraphs (which in themselves must contain at least five full sentences).

You need to complete the entire biography, detailing all your characters history, age, personality and description. We also like to see little role-play quirks such as habits like the constant brushing back of a fringe, or the scratching of an itchy palm.

Every single thing in your application must have a justification. For example:

John’s father taught him swordsman ship and the lay of the land. X BAD

John’s father was a retired swordsman in the Oren military, after the undead attacks and the moving to Asulon he decided it was time that he lay down the sword for more important matters, family. Now days John’s father teaches John the way of the sword, not so that he can join any particular military, but so that he can defend himself for future experiences to come. √GOOD

Your ambitions are underdeveloped.

You need to show some advanced thought processes. What would your character like to do in the near and distant futures? What is your character planning? You also need to justify your decisions. Why does your character want to do this? Things such as planning to kill all bandits, orcs, humans etc. are unacceptable ambitions as this would require a villainous activity.

Your answers to the favourite tool/best skill questions are underdeveloped.

You need to justify why you have chosen the choices you have. It is all well and good that your character can run really fast, or is light on their feet; but why?

Some or all of your answers to the Open Response questions need a lot of improvement.

Your particular style of roleplay just doesn't seem suited to the server. You constantly refer to things in real life such as "jets", use modern slang and just don't seem to keep to an acceptable roleplay standard. I suggest you practise on some other roleplay servers before coming to one such as this which requires a very high standard of RP.

If you have any questions about my feedback, or would like to create some constructive criticism about the way I give feedback (I.E am I being TOO blunt, or am I coming across rude) then please send me a message! I take all questions, none are stupid! :) You are not allowed to apply again for a full 24 hours.

[James Undercroft 129]

Moved to Denied Forum