Lazylizard420 Application Fixed

[lazylizard420 0]

Before I start I am trading my Elf, Lizz The Run Away Orphan, for this Character.

MC Username:

lazylizard420

Rp Username:

Anpaytoo'Angeni ((Radiant Spirit)- http://www.bronsonbattlecreek.com/services/birthcenter/nativeambabynames.shtml)

Character Skillset:

Base of 50 points:

Wrestling:10

Fishing:5

Lumberjack:15

Farming:10

Crafting:10

Appearance (age, SUBRACE, gender):

Anpaytoo'Angeni or Ann for short is 15 and is a female Tigrasi. She is a bright orange with grayish black stripes all along her and very alive green eyes. She wears purple drape that is like a minimal dress set up to cover parts needed to be covered and easy to move in that has a whole in the back for her tail. She wears no hood nor shoes or gloves at they cover up what makes her herself. The clothes are not of any real value dealing with money, but when it comes to sentimental value they mean everything to her. They were the last thing she was given from her mother before her mother moved on. The outfit is almost seen as a two piece ritual dress. It clips at the hips and the top is covered by a small leather 'collar' to protect the top of the dress from ripping or coming undone in work.

Personality:

Ann is very energetic and loves to live life. She carefree but is alert of her surroundings unless really distracted or concentrating on one specific thing. She is on the more highly intelligent side and makes friends of others very easily. Ann is peevish and when provoked, rises like a bulldog but her anger is very soon subsided. She is pure in heart and always inclined to help others. She shines very well as a good spokesman. Ann at times is timid. She feels shy to exhibit her talents but her conversation will be most interesting and highly instructive. She specialize in subjects like arts of all forms. She is intuitive and has a good judge of character. She has no organizing capacity and never would betray the interests of even her enemies, when trust is placed in her. On the whole she is a person who has something subtle in her which endears her to all she comes in contact with. The only problem she has the most is the 'creatures' she comes by, other than other Kharajyr, she tends to ignore or just deal with quickly and move on.

Please include a short bio of your character's life:

Ann was born to a small farming family on the out skirts of Khalenwyr. Her family was well fed as her father worked a hard life on the farms to supply her uncle supplies for his shop. Not a big time shop it was just a small family run business. Ann has a younger brother at the age of 10 who help out on the farms and a elder sister of the age of 18 who stays only to raise the youngest brother but has been training to become a healer. Her mother though, had contracted an infection and died not long after her brothers birth. Upon reaching the age of 15 she now hopes you leave and live on her own. Before she settle's she would like to see the world, maybe find the place where she could actually find adventure in her life. Ann really though just wishes to settle down later in life and start her own tailoring business if she is to get married. If Ann contracts a single life she wishes to be a lumberjack or Jack-of-all-trades.

Character's ambitions:

Though Ann does not really have any ambitions she really though, just wishes to settle down later in life and start her own tailoring business if she is to get married. If Ann contracts a single life she wishes to be a lumberjack or Jack-of-all-trades. But for now it's living and having a home to get started on what life throws at her.

_---Situational Rp Questions---_

1.

As you travel through the Karakatuan jungle, you spot a human trespassing on your nation's lands. He approaches you, obviously distressed, and asks for any food, water, or shelter that you can provide, then tells you that he has been lost in the area for days without any proper supplies. How do you react?:

Ann's first reaction is to try and get away but the male seems to be apon the brink of death. Ann attempts to tell the man to stay. Hoping he knows what she was trying to tell him she run's home and gathers a water skin, some bread, and draws up a quick map of some surrounding villages that he could go to. Quickly hurrying back she gives the man the items and points in the direction of one of the closer villages and other small cluster of houses. After biding him a good day Ann continues on with her day.

2.

As you romp through the lands of the "apes", you come across a tavern. Inside this tavern, a Dwarf notices you and starts gawking at you, then begins to speak.

"Oi! I gots a bowl of cream for you, Kitty! Ha! I'd bet you would make a nice throw rug, wouldn't ya, ya mangy furball?!"

He continues act generally as racist as possible. What do you do?:

Ann thinks to her self 'And I thought the 'apes' were bad.'. As much as Ann would love to make some comments back she knows things will only spiral out of control, he is drunk, and she has no back up if something bad were to happen. Finishing her meal Ann pays for it, gives the Inn Keeper he condolences and leaves. Ann believes sometimes its just better to walk away.

3.

One of your fellow Kharajyr and a close friend of yours comes to your dwelling in the middle of the night and begins to pound on your door. After you let him in, he confesses to killing another Kharajyr over a slice of cake. What do you do in response?

Ann attempts to calm down her friend. It's late and she wishes not to wake the family. After a while of contemplating and talking with the friend she decides it is just best to help them with their decision on what to do. The best advice she give is, "If you are in a need of food you should have just come here. If you need to run away I can supply you two days rations. But you need to make haste in your decision. One question that you also must answer, can you live with this on your conscience?".

Do you swear to follow the Tlatlanni and uphold his law, and do you swear to hold Metztli and all of her actions as sacred?

Ann and I swear to follow the Tlatlanni and uphold his law. We swear to hold Metztli and all her actions sacred.

Please include a screenshot or 3D render of your character's skin

All I have added was some leather unto her shoulder for more of a protecting piece.

preview: novaskin.me/YThLI | apply to minecraft now

[Praetor 1550]

DENIED

Reasons:

-Your personality and appearance are very good, and don't need to be changed.

-Your bio is too short, and can not contain anything about apes attacking you, since we never knew of apes before. Also, I do not think there were any other towns than Khalenwyr.

-Your open questions are too short, and you can not include any knowledge of apes in it, they are "creatures" or something of the sort.

Re-apply in 24 hours.

[lazylizard420 0]

DENIED

Reasons:

-Your personality and appearance are very good, and don't need to be changed.

-Your bio is too short, and can not contain anything about apes attacking you, since we never knew of apes before. Also, I do not think there were any other towns than Khalenwyr.

-Your open questions are too short, and you can not include any knowledge of apes in it, they are "creatures" or something of the sort.

Re-apply in 24 hours.

I don't want to come off rude but my topic does say under construction for a reason, although your I put will help me greatly. I will get to fixing it as soon as I can, I am still in school so I'm trying to jugle work, 2 sports, and keeping up-to-date on this. So as soon as I'm able to I will edit this and let you know. But thank your for the input it will help me make this better. :-) And I really did not want to sound rude at all so if i came off that why I apologize.

[lazylizard420 0]

I have edited and hope to hear from you soon.

[Wretched 2075]

Accepted.

Although this app was made 3 months ago and you've just edited now? Just a bit odd :P

Welcome to the Kharajyr, our island has been evacuated and we are taking shelter in the high elf city of Haelun'or, so put in a modreq for a race change and TP to Haelun'or.

[lazylizard420 0]

Accepted.

Although this app was made 3 months ago and you've just edited now? Just a bit odd :P

Welcome to the Kharajyr, our island has been evacuated and we are taking shelter in the high elf city of Haelun'or, so put in a modreq for a race change and TP to Haelun'or.

Thknx and yeah I had sports and school. So for the modreq do I do it on the server or on the forums????

[Praetor 1550]

You do it on the server. :)

[lazylizard420 0]

thnkx

[lazylizard420 0]

its so quiet. No others of the Karajyr appear to be near or in the city.

[Princeton 396]

Moved to the Great Library. It shall be sorted into appropriate category shortly.