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MC Username:

Sgtteddybear59

Rp Username (be sure to include the correct prefix, look up on info thread):

Si'Navjir Xanduur [Nav-Eer Zan-Dur] J is silent. He doesn't have a solid profession as of yet, but he will soon.

Character Skillset:

Archery - 60 Swordsmanship - 30 Fishing - 40

Appearance (age, SUBRACE, gender):

35, Tlatlanni, Male

Personality:

Curious: Always seems to want to know more about something and is always tempted to investigate something suspicious... But you know what they say, Curiosity killed the Kharajyr. Hopefully his curiosity will not be his downfall.

Temperament: He has a good temperament for the most part, besides those who mock him or his people. Then he becomes very defensive. He takes great pride of who he is, and for those who say otherwise, he will likely argue with them.

Patient: His patients may be one of his greatest traits. Navjir can wait for a very long time and remain perfectly calm. Sometimes, he may wait days for prey when he was a cub. This makes him an effective and lethal hunter.

Brave: He may not be the strongest of his kind, but he sure is brave, not afraid of a good fight or an opponent that may prove tough. His father has always tought him how to be a true fighter and warrior.

Kind: He is kind to those who are to him. He will be very loyal and do his best to aid his friends or people that don't look to be a threat to him.

Please include a short bio of your character's life:

I play a character named Navjir Xanduur, a Kharajyr. Navjir was born and raised into a small family of no more than 3 in his litter. His brother, whom was the largest, and his sister, whom was the runt of the litter, Navjir would lie in between the two. Navjir's family had decided it would be best to start anew, getting away from their now decimated home. They soon moved to a mountainous region that Navjir was raised in. The harsh, snow covered mountains were tough at times but this did provided a natural defense against any wandering bandits and kept them isolated from most of the world, Which is one reason he is so interested in the newly found races. But ever since he was a cub, all his life he was trained to hunt and survive, hunting the local prey that wandered around their territory. He is very talented with a bow from all the time he had hunting or simply shooting for enjoyment. He now ventures out into the world, leaving his old family behind to make a name for himself. Soon coming upon civilizations that he has never seen before. Large walls made of stone and people that were made of steel! [Guards :P] He for some reason was mostly interested in the smooth-skins, Finding them very interesting. He loved the feel of skin. [basically the reverse of people loving soft fur.]

Character's ambitions:

Navjir plans to rejoin his people that his family had once left behind, hopefully aiding them and joining their war machine. He plans to become a soldier to aid his people in combat and to reclaim the power they once had. His training and natural skills make him a stealthy killer.

_---Situational Rp Questions---_

1.

As you travel through the Karakatuan jungle, you spot a human trespassing on your nation's lands. He approaches you, obviously distressed, and asks for any food, water, or shelter that you can provide, then tells you that he has been lost in the area for days without any proper supplies. How do you react?:

-Navjir would be in a nearby tree, his bow lightly grasped in his hand as he casually relax and scout the ground below. As he heard the sound of flora brushing up against itself as something moved through, his ears shot to it's direction. He moved his head to the side, looking to see a man wandering in their territory. He stood up, not making a sound as he drew his bow, he noticed the man didn't look armed, or for that matter, in good condition. He slowly eased his arrow down and replaced it in his quiver. He made his way down the tree, soon catching up to the man. Though he would do cautiously. He unsheathed his skinning knife from his hip, soon calling out to him with the mans tongue, His accent was present as he spoke. "Don't move a muscle..." As the man stopped and turned to him, he would walk closer, inspecting him for any weapons. The man pleaded "Please help me, I haven't eaten in days, nor a drop to drink." After close inspection, he realized this man was far from a threat. He would sigh and nod. "You are lucky smooth skin... Navjir is merciful. Others would have killed you by now..." He would then reach to his belt and untie a skin of water, handing it to the man. "Save it, don't drink it all at one time... You will live with water for a long time. Now, you need to go back or else my kin will likely kill you." He would then reach for a small satchel on his side, he took out a folded piece of paper, soon handing it to the man. "This is a map... Travel quickly."

2.

As you romp through the lands of the "apes", you come across a tavern. Inside this tavern, a Dwarf notices you and starts gawking at you, then begins to speak.

"Oi! I gots a bowl of cream for you, Kitty! Ha! I'd bet you would make a nice throw rug, wouldn't ya, ya mangy furball?!"

He continues act generally as racist as possible. What do you do?:

Navjir would close his eyes and speak in return. "Your words are weak, Navjir has no time for your pathetic babbling." He would turn his icy blue gaze to the dwarf. "Navjir has survived harsh winters, undying blizzards and being attacked by packs of hungry wolves, all when Navjir was only a cub... Small words will not bother me as much as a fly buzzing around my ear." He would turn and continue on to go on about his buisness, and as he walked off, he would make one final comment. "Now go back to your ale ape, and drink your pitiful life away." His tone would be mixed with a growl as he marched off angrily.

3.

One of your fellow Kharajyr and a close friend of yours comes to your dwelling in the middle of the night and begins to pound on your door. After you let him in, he confesses to killing another Kharajyr over a slice of cake. What do you do in response?

-Navjir would look to him with widened eyes, he turned away and rubbed his chin, he turned back to him and nodded. "Navjir will keep you safe... You should feel lucky that Navjir is your friend." He would allow him inside, talking about the matter to better understand what happened. He would sigh after hearing the story and shake his head. "It isn't wise to lose yourself over a slice of cake... But Navjir understands that anger can sometimes get the better of even the strongest. So long as you didn't kill our kin for the pleasure."

Do you swear to follow the Tlatlanni and uphold his law, and do you swear to hold Metztli and all of her actions as sacred?

"With every drop of Navjirs blood, Navjir swears."

Please include a screenshot or 3D render of your character's skin

FRONT VIEW

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REAR VIEW

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The reason there wasn't much detail is because he was in the shadow. There is more detail closer up, but I hope this will suffice.

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DENIED

Few reasons.

-You do not have a prefix. For example, my name is Tiazar and with my prefix it is Do'Tiazar. It even says to look it up in the question.

-appearance could go into more detail, what exact features do they have?

-Skillset it actual skills. For example, Blacksmithing - 60. Or at least detail on what they are good at.

-Personality could be extended. Tell me more about yourself.

-Bio is good, but it wouldn't hurt to add more.

-Ambitions.... give clear ambitions, this will most likely be part of their proffesion. Proffesion is unclear, which is why you need a prefix.

-And your skin.... is white. Only the Tlatlanni has white fur. Leparda have a more yellow color or brownish.

Edit this post after 24 hours and I or another KAT member will view it again.

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Where could I find the prefixes? :T I was looking for them and I couldn't find any :P

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Alright, I hope that's good enough, if I missed something please tell me and I will correct it. I read it over a few times to make sure it was good. Not sure if I missed anything though. :) And I should have showed you the quiver I put on my characters back, but either way, I like how the newer version came out. I am planning to add more as he becomes more accustom to the new races.

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Edit this post after 24 hours and I or another KAT member will view it again.

This. Post again when it has been 24 hours. I will let this one slide....

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This. Post again when it has been 24 hours. I will let this one slide....

My mistake. I read this as "Edit within 24 hours." My fault :)

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Moved to the Great Library. It shall be sorted into appropriate category shortly.

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