Captain__Fruit's 2Nd App

[Captain__FRuiT 0]

Out-Of-Character

Minecraft Account Name: My Account Name is Captain__FRuiT

How old are you?: I am 18. 19 in May.

Time-Zone/Country of Residence: I live in Ontario, Canada. GMT -5:00

Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?: Yes I Do.

Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself: I play hockey and football but still always have time for lots of minecraft of course! I have a good family good health and good job!

How much time could you be on the server weekly?: Depending on work and school 15-25 a week.

What do you know about Roleplaying? Give a definition of what it means to you: Roleplaying is where you make up a character and play as him. You also get to make decisions to chose the path of your characters life. RPG's are usually in another period of time like Medival Times.

What experience have you had in Roleplaying, if any?: I have a little playing some Lord of the Rings Games

In your own Words, define what the act of Meta-Gaming is: Meta-Gaming is where you take something that your character wouldn't know and put it in the game. For Example:

IRL Man- Hey bro watch out when you go around that corner you are going to get shot.

IRL Man2- Oh! Thanks (Character turns back)

In your own Words, define what the act of Power-Gaming is: Power-Gaming is where you make your self basically invincible or like being cheep while fighting or not giving your opponent a chance. For Example.

Man 1- Gives Man2 a punch to the balls.

Man 2- Trys to punch Man1 back but Man 1 dodges it.

Man 1- Kicks man 2 into a pool of lava.

What do you expect this server will be like?: I think it will be full of people who can RP very well I think it will be lots of fun!

and also a little bit like Lord of the Rings.

What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?: I played on TheBlockTheory but left because they had trouble with staff and hackers and such.

Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?: Yes I have.

Do you promise to abide by said rules, and laws? This includes the Server, Forum, and Teamspeak set Rules: Yes I Promise To Abide by Said Rules and Laws.

How did you hear about us?: I was searching for servers and found you.

Have you previously made an Application? If so could you link us to your last Application?: Yes I have.

APP 1 - http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/50795-captain-fruits-app/

Have you posted this application on our minecraft forum thread yet? If not, just finish it up on here and then copy + paste is over there. (http://www.minecraftforum.net/topic/832121-%E2%96%91%E2%96%92%E2%96%93-the-lord-of-the-craft-%E2%96%93%E2%96%92%E2%96%91-enter-the-world-of-asulon-o-f-f-i-c-i-a-l-l-y-t-h-e-n-o-1-r-p-s-e-r-v-e-r/): No But I Will.

In-Character:

Character Name: HoneyBeard

What Race are you?: Dwarf

What Sub-Race are you? (note, you aren’t required to have a sub-race):

Biography (Please make this at least 2 paragraphs long. This must include the history of your character and his life as well as age, appearance and personality, etc.): My Character is a dwarf so he is only 4' 6 He has white skin but is usually covered in dirt so it looks brown. His skin especially his hands are rough. He was born in a small Dwarf town called StoneWall. in the realm of Bree. He has a Long Beard as he was born he had a long beard his beard is Brown with a little bit of orange.

He is very helpful to his own race but not to other races he will only help them if they help him back. If he comes across a mob he kills it instantly no second thought. The one thing he hates about himself is that he can't really run at all because of his ridiculously short legs. One of his Qwerks is that in the middle of his beard there is a little patch of honey thats why his parents named him HoneyBeard. His best attribute is mining, his parents made him go work in the mine when he was just 7 years old now that he is 79 years old he is out of the mine and on his journey to becoming a great adventurer.

What is your Character's ambitions?: "My ambition is to one day become a great adventurer."

What is your character’s favorite tool? (sword, pickaxe, shovel, etc): The Pickaxe of course

What is one of your Character's most skilled talents? Mining

A screenshot of your skin (must be in proper format): http://www.planetminecraft.com/skin/gimli-the-lord-of-the-rings-768917/ here is the link

Other Information about your Character: He loves cookies!

Open-Response-Questions

Whilst traveling from the Cloud Temple you see a small halfling, being harassed by two armed warriors. They appear to be trying to steal money from him, how does your character respond? Depending on what race the halfling was but if he was dwarf than. He walks up to the soldiers and takes his pickaxe slits there throats and helps the halfing back to his feet.

Your character wanders into Alras, and comes across a small stall, behind which a well dressed man is standing. He’s offering various wares, the merchant turns to you and says in a posh accent " 'ello there, what can I do you for today?" What is your character response?

HoneyBeard- Yes do you have any pickaxes or maybe an iron helmet

Man with posh accent- Yes of course 20 for the pick 40 for elmet

HoneyBeard-Ok there ill take the pick here you go.

Man with posh accent- Thank you eres your pick.

HoneyBeard- Thank you bye now.

Whilst wandering in the wilds, your character comes across a small hut, which looks abandoned. Inside it you see a chest containing a few iron bars, and a golden sword. How would your character respond?: He leaves the loot incase someone does live there.

Hungry and lost in the wilderness, you stumble across a small trading camp nestled among the forest, they greet you you in the common tongue, how do you respond?

HoneyBeard- I have been traveling for days could you spare some food?

People- why of course heres an apple.

HoneyBeard- thank you could you maybe tell me where I am exactly.

People- Why yes you are in Alras.

HoneyBeard- do you know the way do StoneWall

People- yes take this boat over the ocean and stonewall is just on the other side.

HoneyBeard- Thank You!

You hear word that bandits occupy the road outside the town in which you have been staying. The town guard have gathered, and are asking for assistance to help eliminate them. The leader of the party is offering a reward for any who offer their support. How does your character act on this information?: He warns everyone in the town and moves everyone along a safe path.

[Lego XBOX 915]

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You have been Denied. This application presents a couple mistakes or errors.

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These were the main points which were bad or not so good of your application:

~Your biography needs to be worked on, be original, and use correct Lore (the destruction of Aegis and travel to Asulon), be creative and you need to explain your appearance and attitude and what it says in the question.

~You have no lore in your bio, even though I don't deny for this reason, have this in your next application so you please some other very picky application team members.

~Your Open Responses are far too short. You must present the situation and then show all the actions and phrases. As if you were in-game, this is not only dialogue though. Also try not to power-game.

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Once you fix these things you can re-apply but only 24 hours after your latest application. Use your time well and PM me if you have any questions.

[Lego XBOX 915]

Moved to Denied Forum