Falco's Third Application.

[Elron Tal'ame 2]

Out-Of-Character

Minecraft Account Name:

Spekiz

How old are you?:

16

Time-Zone/Country of Residence:

I live in São Paulo,Brazil. GMT: -3

Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?:

My english is good enough. I have lessons since I was 12 and internet, videogames were good teatchers too..

Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself:

I am a peaceful person, don't like argues and fights. I am also very social, often hanging out with my friends and arranging football matchs. I like RPGs and adventure games since my father gave me my first computer, and later, my first console. Diablo, Legend of zelda and a game not so famous: Little big aventure 2 (really good game from my childhood) were inspirations. I like to roleplay in singleplayer too haha.

How much time could you be on the server weekly?:

3/4 hours every day; 21/30 hours per week. (Sometimes I have to study a lot because of tests).

What do you know about Roleplaying? Give a definition of what it means to you:

Roleplaying is acting a character, being another person, interpretating the character story, ambitions, feelings. Traveling on time and playing the role of a king; a soldier; a space miner and doing things you can't do in real life. “Suddenly, the king standed up, held his golden sword and pointing North, with a bravery face, you could see anger and courage in his eyes. By this time, he started his speech: -My people, citizens of this kingdom. All the men grab you armor, weapon and shield, women take your kids and come inside the palace. Our time has come, if the war can't be ended peacefully, we will defend ourselves, even if blood needs to be spilled.” Roleplaying require details: Conversations together with actions, emotions and expressions.

What experience have you had in Roleplaying, if any?:

When I was younger, I used to play habbo, a social game. Roleplaying in it was kinda nice. Also roleplayed on a minecraft server I was te host with some friends. We built a village, I was a mage/healer, I used to give quests for them, they said I was good at developing quests and storylines.

In your own Words, define what the act of Meta-Gaming is:

Meta-Gaming is like using knowledge you got from real life but not while roleplaying, discover a thing that was not told for you character. For example: A friend tells you on facebook he found a treasure and you, by this information OOC, get there, But you character does not know this. Then, you share the loot, chat OOC and with this, Roleplaying goes away. This ruins RP experience and that's why I seek for a server based in roleplaying and no meta-gaming.

In your own Words, define what the act of Power-Gaming is:

Selfishness. While roleplaying, you are not alone, you are in a community with other players and you must understand that you are not the newcomer with all the powers and a strenght level 1000. You won't kill a person without a reaction. If you do this, it is power-gaming. When you roleplay, wait for the answer of the other individual and give him a chance. Act as a normal guy and not a legend; do things your character would do, inside what is possible.

What do you expect this server will be like?:

My expectations of this server are huge! As I can see it is organized, different from many others. The care with architecture is very important, hope you accept me, I always looked for a server like this.

What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?:

Just a server I was the host. My friends and me, but now they are not playing minecraft anymore.

Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?:

I have read, understood and agreed to the rules.

Do you promise to abide by said rules, and laws? This includes the Server, Forum, and Teamspeak set Rules:

Yes, I promise.

How did you hear about us?:

Google, I was searching for a roleplaying server long ago and found Lord of the craft. I wanted to join but was studying too much. Now I have time

Have you previously made an Application? If so could you link us to your last Application?:

Here it is: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/51151-second-application/ Changed lots of things since my first one and also made a new skin for me. I want to be accepted (:

Have you posted this application on our minecraft forum thread yet? If not, just finish it up on here and then copy + paste is over there. (http://www.minecraftforum.net/topic/832121-%E2%96%91%E2%96%92%E2%96%93-the-lord-of-the-craft-%E2%96%93%E2%96%92%E2%96%91-enter-the-world-of-asulon-o-f-f-i-c-i-a-l-l-y-t-h-e-n-o-1-r-p-s-e-r-v-e-r/):

http://www.minecraftforum.net/topic/832121-%E2%96%91%E2%96%92%E2%96%93-the-lord-of-the-craft-%E2%96%93%E2%96%92%E2%96%91-enter-the-world-of-asulon-o-f-f-i-c-i-a-l-l-y-t-h-e-n-o-1-r-p-s-e-r-v-e-r/page__st__380__gopid__14293116#entry14293116

In-Character:

Character Name:

Elron Mayleaf

What Race are you?:

I'm an elf

What Sub-Race are you?(note, you aren’t required to have a sub-race): I haven't a sub race.

Biography (Please make this at least 2 paragraphs long. This must include the history of your character and his life as well as age, appearance and personality, etc.):

Elron was once a happy kid in his childhood, lived with his parents and sister, girl who was responsible for keeping chickens. His sister teached him everything she knew, this includes taking care of animals and farming. His mother was the farmer and his father a skilled carpenter, who was kinda famous around the land. When Elron was nine years old, his father gave him a bow and some arrows which were carefully made by him. Since that day, the dream of the elf was to become a master at archery, defend armies from the defensive with his sharp arrow. For this reason, he started practising a lot, from day to night.

When Elron was 17, it was a cold night of winter, the family was eating dinner. While Elron was picking a slice of the delicious steak, chickens started to cluck. His mother left the table and went to the poultry to check. Elron went together, carrying his bow and a knife. For their surprise, a wolf invaded the ranch and killed almost all chichens, except his chick named Cojiro, his first chicken, which the evil wolf was about to murder cruelly. His mom hopelessly tried to get rid of it but unfortunately, as a mater of destiny, the evil wolf was too fast, bit her and she started to bleed in front of the little kid. Elron fastly picked up his bow and with a shot right in the wolf's head, killed it, but not fast enough to save his mother. From this day, he gave up on being a famous ranger because he couldn't handle even a wolf and save a beloved person. “Life is disgusting, I don't know if there is a God or not, but I'm sure I don't deserve this. What have I done wrong?” This said the sad elf, with his knees on dirt. Two days later, he woke up by 7 am and left without warning his family and pet. Now he is wandering around the land, depressive. Thinks life and everyone around him are disgusting, maybe if he meets his family and, most important for him, his pet, the elf changes his mind.

Elron is a good farmer and quite skilled at archery. Young, is 21 years old, likes to spend time in taverns and drink to forget his past, different from many drunk people, he keeps his mouth shout, just thinks. Sentimental, what happened to him changed his behaviour, don't talk too much and usually run from big responsabilities because of a fear: fear of failure. For the inside he is courageous but he can't show this courage to other people, fear stops him. Maybe a friend or a listener and Cojiro could change this stubborn elf.

Physical features: Has white hair just like his father, pale skin, black eyes and has pointy ears. Acquired strenght by doing jobs for food and can be considered a healthy person.

What is your Character's ambitions?: As there are no oportunities right now, just wants to starts from zero. Build a house, keep animals and farm. Can't do many things in group, only if he knows and trust a person, therefore he can't handle a guild or companions in his current psychological condition.

What is your character’s favorite tool? (sword, pickaxe, shovel, etc):

His Bow

What is one of your Character's most skilled talents?:

He is a good farmer, still has the bow his father gave him, that's why it is his favourite tool, however, needs to practice.

A screenshot of your skin (must be in proper format):

Other Information about your Character:

Everything was told. Elron is depressive and not happy with his destiny, Hopes to get a better life and stop thinking too much about his past.

Open-Response-Questions

Whilst traveling from the Cloud Temple you see a small halfling, being harassed by two armed warriors. They appear to be trying to steal money from him, how does your character respond?:

Elf stops, grab his bow and aim to one of the warriors, the strongest one. Thoughts about his life and failure comes to his head, and Elron miss the shot. “An arrow, we are being watched” says one of the warriors. Frightened, the warriors leave the temple with some gold they stole from the halfling. Regretful, he leaves without speaking to the stolen and confused short guy.

Your character wanders into Alras, and comes across a small stall, behind which a well dressed man is standing. He’s offering various wares, the merchant turns to you and says in a posh accent " 'ello there, what can I do you for today?" What is your character response?:

He passes by, but then turns back and replies: “Sorry, I was thinking and didn't notice you talking to me. Thank you, but I don't need anything, the only thing I could wish is my pet, Cojiro. I don't even know if he is still alive.” Elron then shakes his hand to greet the merchant and continues on his way

Whilst wandering in the wilds, your character comes across a small hut, which looks abandoned. Inside it you see a chest containing a few iron bars, and a golden sword. How would your character respond?:

Moved by curiosity and greediness, the depressive elf opens the hut door and search the chest. There it was: Iron bars and a golden sword. “-These things do not belong to anyone, I'm not being a burglar, Finders keepers, losers weepers.” After stealing, or better, finding the loot, Elron leaves the hut.

Hungry and lost in the wilderness, you stumble across a small trading camp nestled among the forest, they greet you in the common tongue, how do you respond?:

After greeting the people, Elron first thinks about free food. They notice his condition and offer him a bread and a slice of porkchop. Avoids speaking and answers fast. After finishing the meal, Elron take a look at what is being sold, but don't buy anything, thank the people and leaves.

You hear word that bandits occupy the road outside the town in which you have been staying. The town guard have gathered, and are asking for assistance to help eliminate them. The leader of the party is offering a reward for any who offer their support. How does your character act on this information?:

He hesitates to help, not for the reason, but for the money. Anyway, his fear of failure stops him from taking a step forward. Missing a shot and lose one of the guards life? Too much responsability for a sentimental elf. He responds: “Sorry, but I can't handle even a wolf.” Sarcastic, he says: “If I go, I'll just watch”.

[ScreamingDingo 20568]

This application has been

~DENIED~

Reasons:

-Spelling and Grammar mistakes.

-Open responses are too short.

-Power-gaming definition is "unclear"

-You cannot be a 21 year old elf, Just breaks lore....

-Bio doesn't include lore

Please fix this up and Re-post after 24 hours.

[ScreamingDingo 20568]

Moved to Denied Forum