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[Odios 0]

Out-Of-Character

Minecraft Account Name:

Odios

How old are you?:

14

Time-Zone/Country of Residence:

Manchester, United Kingdom, +0 GMT

Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?:

kinda :P

Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself:

i really love rp and its like my whole life, not that i spend all my time on my laptop thou lol

How much time could you be on the server weekly?:

i can be on about well all day when i dont have school :P

What do you know about Roleplaying? Give a definition of what it means to you:

Roleplaying is when you take the role of a person in a game and you take it to heart and put in your all

What experience have you had in Roleplaying, if any?:

this is my first time attualy playing :D but i will try my best.

In your own Words, define what the act of Meta-Gaming is:

Meta-gameing is when you use outside of game infomation to aid you or give you an addvantage over outher players playing properly

In your own Words, define what the act of Power-Gaming is:

Power-gameing is when you act like your a king of everything and cant die or throw a world class ***** off when someone kills you for being soo smug

What do you expect this server will be like?:

i hope its the best server i know :)

What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?:

before this server i played on smp servers with friends but nouthing big thou it will be awsome

Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?:

yes i understand the rules and accept them

Do you promise to abide by said rules, and laws? This includes the Server, Forum, and Teamspeak set Rules:

yea i will follow the rules without doubt

How did you hear about us?:

throu a friend but hes not on the server

Have you previously made an Application? If so could you link us to your last Application?:

no this is my first one, and i hope i get in lol

In-Character:

Character Name: my mc name is Odios and keep it as Odios

What Race are you?:

Human

What Sub-Race are you? (note, you aren’t required to have a sub-race):

northener

Biography (Please make this at least 2 paragraphs long. This must include the history of your character and his life as well as age, appearance and personality, etc.):

Odios is a 19 year old adventurer from the wilds back in his home town it was a small, but well placed and kept tidy also the people where nice and one day bandits raided the town and killed his family and took all his money his house and even shoes and clothes before kidnapping him and most of the town but his family and some town folk where butcherd before his eyes "hes a bit messed up but hides it well". they where taken out into the wilds and where walking for 9 days being fed stale bread and dirty water, after most had died from exustion they arrived at a dark looking old shack in the middle of no-where by some lake or river he cant remeber alot about the place as he soon passed out. when he awkoe he was being rowed out into the lake tied up and gagged he stuggled to escape but to no avail he was thrown off the side of the raft and sinking fast he was loseing breath and had to get up now, then he saw he was only a few feet away from some rocks he wiggled over and stood-up and cought his breath, he did this several times untill the boat was gone and he manneged to cut himself free from the rope on the sharp rocks he was finnaly free. after wandering throw the wilds for some time he had enough food for 3 more days at best when a traveling group of traders saw him and gave him a ride water and food back to a city.

the city was old but looked amazing to him, once he catched his breath he checked in thanked the wagon driver and proceded to walk around the new town. at his time at the town he grew up 5 years to 19 and met a girl, but soon after she left him because of his nightmares and mental problems "sometimes he freaks out and attackes things, or sometimes he just crys"

What is your Character's ambitions?:

to get a stedy job and drink more than his friends

What is your character’s favorite tool? (sword, pickaxe, shovel, etc):

sword

What is one of your Character's most skilled talents?

social talking, work

A screenshot of your skin (must be in proper format):

yea big problem about that my friend changed it and mc.net wont let my change it back :L its well naked ill change it asap thou and get armour

Other Information about your Character: he is young BUT he is wise and fair and keeps his head when he is not drunk

Open-Respone-Questions

Whilst traveling from the Cloud Temple you see a small halfling, being harassed by two armed warriors. They appear to be trying to steal money from him, how does your character respond? walk a differnt way and carry on with my jorney

Your character wanders into Alras, and comes across a small stall, behind which a well dressed man is standing. He’s offering various wares, the merchant turns to you and says in a posh accent " 'ello there, what can I do you for today?" What is your character response? see what the man is talking about

Whilst wandering in the wilds, your character comes across a small hut, which looks abandoned. Inside it you see a chest containing a few iron bars, and a golden sword. How would your character respond? he walks in and takes what he can

Hungry and lost in the wilderness, you stumble across a small trading camp nestled among the forest, they greet you in the common tongue, how do you respond? he tries to kill them and take there food

You hear word that bandits occupy the road outside the town in which you have been staying. The town guard have gathered, and are asking for assistance to help eliminate them. The leader of the party is offering a reward for any who offer their support. How does your character act on this information? ignore the racket and return home for drink and food

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Why did I deny you?

Your ORQs were extremely short...

One sentence answers? Is that all that your character would do in that situation? You need to roleplay correctly, and adequately in these sections. You need to go indepth about what your character sees, thinks, smells, feels and hears in that situation. It allows us to picture your character, and shows us that you can roleplay. Without this knowledge of your roleplay, we cannot accept you.

Your definition of powergaming was...strange...

Your definition of powergaming did not make sense at all. It did not show us that you know exactly what it is and when it is incorrectly used, and even included swear words. You must know exactly what it means, and this can be found on the wiki of even in teamspeak.

You need a last name...

Unless their is a specific reason for you not having a last name, you need to have one.

You need a skin...

A skin must be included so we can know that your character skin will fit roleplay and people will not stand gawping at HoneyDew or Notch. You need a skin that fits your character, and that fits into Asulon.

Your ambitions...

Drink more than your friends? This isn't an ambition really, it's more of a small goal. You need to include life goals in this section that relate to your character.

A 5 year old who survives a bandit raid, 9 days of walking and almost drowning?

Your character could not have done those things at 5, that is godmodding. No 5 year old could survive that, especially when the rest of them died from exhaustion.

Your English and formatting

Your English was not great. You should load up a word document and spell check this. It will increase the legibility a lot. Also, the formatting was extremely ugly, all gray. Please try and fix that up, give it more legibility.

Some Places That May Help You

Avoiding Bad Characters: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/27643-how-to-avoid-making-a-mary-suegary-stu/

Fixing Formatting: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/42682-a-guide-for-applicants/page__p__303005__fromsearch__1#entry303005

Some Tips: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/19145-tips-to-include-on-your-application/

A Question Analysis: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/34777-in-depth-analysis-of-the-application-form/

A FAQ: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/30081-application-submissions-faq-proper-etiquette/

Server Rules: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/?page_id=8

Latest Format: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/43580-official-lord-of-the-craft-application-format/

Definitions (Seriously Useful): http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/45364-roleplayingmetagamingpowergaming-definitions/

Please WAIT 24 hours before reposting, failure to do so will result in denial.

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