Mr. Mystery's 3Rd App

[Mr. Mystery 0]

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Out-Of-Character

Minecraft Account Name: mistere6619

How old are you?:13

Time-Zone/Country of Residence:Eastern time USA

Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?:Yes I do

Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself: I love playing rpg and combat video games. I am very creative in most games.

How much time could you be on the server weekly?:10 hours maybe more or less.

What do you know about Roleplaying? Give a definition of what it means to you: It is to act out as someone else or everyone has a role.

What experience have you had in Roleplaying, if any?: I played some rpg games such as The Elder Scrolls.

In your own Words, define what the act of Meta-Gaming is: It is hwen you use knowlegde not available to the in-game character (usually from out-game)and changes the way the character in-game plays.

In your own Words, define what the act of Power-Gaming is: It is when a player does something without giving the other player any time to react to that action.

What do you expect this server will be like?: I expect this server to be exploring the lands of Asulon.

What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?:I quit the server shadowraze beacuse many people kept killing me in the wilds.

Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?: Yes

Do you promise to abide by said rules, and laws? This includes the Server, Forum, and Teamspeak set Rules: yes

How did you hear about us?:Planet Minecraft

Have you previously made an Application? If so could you link us to your last Application?:

App 1

App 2

In-Character:

Character Name: Mystery

What Race are you?:Dwarf

What Sub-Race are you? (note, you aren’t required to have a sub-race):N/A

Biography (Please make this at least 2 paragraphs long. This must include the history of your character and his life as well as age, appearance and personality, etc.): Mystery was given the name "Mystery" beacuse he was found in the middle of a abandoned cave.He was a short and black- haired dwarf always dreaming to be a soldier. So he was brought to the village blacksmith and trained in the arts of war and crafting. As he slowly became older he learned the mysteries of the world such as the famous ore diamonds.

After becoming 250 years old his village was destoryed. Apparently someone was out to get him. As he was walking around what was left of his village he spotted a light blue shine in the corner of his eye, it was a diamond axe! He quickly picked it up and got ready for his journey to the far land of Asulon.

What is your Character's ambitions?: Mystery's ambitions are to obtain the legandary ore known as diamonds and craft the finest tools.

What is your character’s favorite tool? (sword, pickaxe, shovel, etc): I favor the Axe, pickaxe, and the sword.

What is one of your Character's most skilled talents? Cutting down trees and mining.

A screenshot of your skin (must be in proper format): At Top

Other Information about your Character: He loves being with other people.

Open-Response-Questions

Whilst traveling from the Cloud Temple you see a small halfling, being harassed by two armed warriors. They appear to be trying to steal money from him, how does your character respond?

Mystery: (Going down the road enjoying the fine day)

Halfling: "Someone please help!"

Bandits: "Ha ha nobody can hear you right now."

Mystery: (Comes running to the source of the noise) "Are you sure about that?"

Bandits: "What are you gonna do 'bout it?"

Mystery: (Draws axe) "I could do this!" (Starts slahing towards the bandit)

Bandits: (Draws sword and also starts attacking).

Mystery: (Battles bandits till bandits are pleading for their lives)

Bandits: "Please dont kil us!"

Mystery: FIne, then leave him alone!"

Bandits: (Runs away dropping halfing's property)

Mystery: "Here you go" (Gives items back to halfing)

Halfing: "Thank you so much!" (Then walks back to his home).

Mystery: (Continues walking trough Asulon.)

Your character wanders into Alras, and comes across a small stall, behind which a well dressed man is standing. He’s offering various wares, the merchant turns to you and says in a posh accent " 'ello there, what can I do you for today?" What is your character response?

Mystery: "Hello" "do you have any porkchops in stock?"

Merchant: "Why yes i do!" "How many would you like?"

Mystery: "3 would be nice"

Merchant: (Takes three porkchops and places them in a bag) "Here you go that will be 30 minas"

Mystery: (Hands merchant 30 minas) "Thank you!"

Merchant: "Your welcome, have a nice day!"

Mystery: (Walks away from stall looking at other stalls)

Whilst wandering in the wilds, your character comes across a small hut, which looks abandoned. Inside it you see a chest containing a few iron bars, and a golden sword. How would your character respond?:

Mystery: *Ohh look a hut* (Walks in)

Mystery: (Takes a look at the chest(containing iron bars and a golden sword).

Mystery: *I'll take the iron bars but leave the golden sword" (Takes iron bars)

Mystery: *And if the owner comes back* (Leaves 20 minas)

Hungry and lost in the wilderness, you stumble across a small trading camp nestled among the forest, they greet you you in the common tongue, how do you respond?

Mystery: " Hello there may i buy some fresh food?"

Trader: "Here have a look" (Shows warm food)

Mystery: "May I buy that it look delicous!"

trader: "That will be 10 minas please"

Mystery: (Hands 10 minas) "Thank you for the food"

Trader: "Come again"

You hear word that bandits occupy the road outside the town in which you have been staying. The town guard have gathered, and are asking for assistance to help eliminate them. The leader of the party is offering a reward for any who offer their support. How does your character act on this information?:

Mystery: "I will help but I want a certain reward"

Leader: "Anything, what is it?"

Mystery: I would like some food and an axe"

Leader: (Walks away then comes back with the reward) "Here you go!"

Mystery: "Thank you, now lets go get those bandits"

(Mystery and party leader go to the bandits)

[Volutional 935]

Sadly, although as I hear you specifically asked for me?

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I recommend working on your biography, making it fit with the lore of Aegis and Asulon alike.

Keep in mind we moved to Asulon not less than 30 years ago.

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Although your open response questions were adaquete, to increase your likelihood of being accepted next time, I'd go into a little more detail, yours looks more like note-work than a description. I do like it however it is acceptable.

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Also, your skin is a slight overused and I'm not sure how the community would react, considering it is from a very well known game. Although the skin is a mere approval of your ability to find one for your character, I'm not one hundred percent sure why a Stormcloak Soldier would suit a Dwarf.

[Volutional 935]

Moved to Denied Forum