Darklord2002 Submission 4

[DarkLord2002 0]

Minecraft Account Name:DarkLord2002

How old are you?:13

Time-Zone/Country of Residence:South Australia

Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?:yes I speak perfect English

Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself: i am they owner of dalasia RP server it is kinda like LOTC My dream is for my server to be like yours. I love role playing games such as skyrim oblivion all them sort of games.

How much time could you be on the server weekly?:10-15 sometimes more

What do you know about Roleplaying? Give a definition of what it means to you: Role Playing Is like haveing a second life your live can be anything to being a slave to being a king.

What experience have you had in Roleplaying, if any?:I have had experience from my servers And This one when i was on HerobrineNotch before digdog hacked it.

In your own Words, define what the act of Meta-Gaming is:Metagaming is taking OOC information and using it IC. Examples of metagaming include receiving a tell from someone and instantly knowing who they are, looking on the who list to see who is on and using that information in your own IC actions - or arranging your IC actions because you know someone is online, using information from biographies that would not be generally known, etc.

In your own Words, define what the act of Power-Gaming is:it means to have "Super Powers" Or to do somthing In game that you cannot do In real life.

What do you expect this server will be like?:Real full on Rping epic role playing cool cities the full on real stuff

What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?:I have played on citywars{Closed} De:serverfactions{still Play on it} The Land Of Dalasia{still play on it because it is mine}

Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?: yes

Do you promise to abide by said rules, and laws? This includes the Server, Forum, and Teamspeak set Rules: yes i do

How did you hear about us?:i herd from darthlamar my CoOwner

Have you previously made an Application? If so could you link us to your last Application?:I have but that was a wail ago and its not there any more

Character Name:Damon

What Race are you?:Human

What Sub-Race are you? (note, you aren’t required to have a sub-race):

Biography (Please make this at least 2 paragraphs long. This must include the history of your character and his life as well as age, appearance and personality, etc.):Damon is a old war captain that was injured in war no one really knows what happened to Damon nor no one cared people never really liked him these days he just tries to live his life by farming and hunting animals one day he hopes to redeem him self. Damon Still weres the Golden armour he ware that day he has tried to sell it but it is worthless

What is your Character's ambitions?: Damon's Ambition is to get back to where he was as a army captain

What is your character’s favorite tool? (sword, pickaxe, shovel, etc):sword

What is one of your Character's most skilled talents? One Handed swords and

A screenshot of your skin (must be in proper format):Sent in attachments

Other Information about your Character:

Open-Response-Questions

Whilst traveling from the Cloud Temple you see a small halfling, being harassed by two armed warriors. They appear to be trying to steal money from him, how does your character respond?:Back Away unseen hoping they wont come for me

Your character wanders into Alras, and comes across a small stall, behind which a well dressed man is standing. He’s offering various wares, the merchant turns to you and says in a posh accent " 'ello there, what can I do you for today?" What is your character response? Im sorry sir im just looking around

Whilst wandering in the wilds, your character comes across a small hut, which looks abandoned. Inside it you see a chest containing a few iron bars, and a golden sword. How would your character respond?:Take The Items and fix up the place and make some protection for my self

Hungry and lost in the wilderness, you stumble across a small trading camp nestled among the forest, they greet you you in the common tongue, how do you respond? Please I need food im soo hungry and im lost please help me

You hear word that bandits occupy the road outside the town in which you have been staying. The town guard have gathered, and are asking for assistance to help eliminate them. The leader of the party is offering a reward for any who offer their support. How does your character act on this information?:Join Them But Try to stay back and alive

[Brokencrowe 111]

Denied.

The application feels rushed, appears as a wall of text and isn't all together easy to read.

Your definition of roleplaying and powergaming is underdeveloped and does not, at all, demonstrate clear understanding of the terms.

Your biography is simply far too short, you do not show that you've read the rules and lore of the realm, and I do not get a feel for who your character is, and how he got to the way he is. "Nobody knows what happened to him," okay nobody knows, but tell us Anyways.

Why is his ambition to become a captain again?

One handed swords and what? Why swords? Who taught him? How did he get so skilled with a blade?

Your open response questions are far, far too short. More effort, please! Open response questions are your chance to show off your mettle as a roleplayer, and give us, the application team, a first taste of your character. Write the response in full roleplay, as you would a short story, and expand upon them as much as possible.

There are several well-written guides by the dedicated members of our server you can look into here on the forums. Do some research, and expand upon all aspects of you application. Aim for something great and spectacular. Go above and beyond, and you will surely be accepted. As it is now, your application feels like it was just thrown together as quickly as possibly. It should be an almost soul searching experience where you learn all you can about your character and then show the world. It should also be a fun experience. Thank you for applying to the server!

You will be allowed to reapply in twenty four hours, if you have any questions regarding your application feel free to drop a PM in my inbox.

Good luck!

-Brokencrowe

[Brokencrowe 111]

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