Mitchroks10 Application

[mitchroks10 0]

Minecraft Account Name: mitchroks10

How old are you?: I am sixteen years old

Time-Zone/Country of Residence: West side of the United States of America.

Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar? Yes, I believe I do have a good grip on the English language/grammar.

Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself: I am a regular teen that loves to play video games such as, Minecraft, Skyrim, Call of Duty and play spots when I'm not playing video games.

How much time could you be on the server weekly?: Maybe 3-7 days a week of 16 hours into those days.

What do you know about Roleplaying? Give a definition of what it means to you: Roleplaying to me is letting go from real life, and being a character that you've created. You always stay in-character, no-matter what. If you get out-of-character in any kind of way, that isn't roleplaying. Never do something you're character can't do. As you create an Avatar or your character your assigned or given you must stay in that roll at all times which is called roll playing.

What experience have you had in Roleplaying, if any?: Ive played world of warcraft And played the RP Servers and i was Dreadking the Deathknight of many slaves.

In your own Words, define what the act of Meta-Gaming is: Meta-gaming is something you should never do on a role playing server. Meta-gaming is learning something in a out-of-character way, and using it in-character. You could learn something of an out-of-character way and using it in an in-character way from, The Fourms, OOC, or Teamspeak etc. I believe this is against the rules.

In your own Words, define what the act of Power-Gaming is: Power-gaming is also something you should never do. Power-gaming is when you enforce something onto a player. It's just like having no time for them to respond to your action. More specific-like, they have no time to react to what you are saying/doing to them. For ezample if Tian was mining uo some ore and Enock ran up to Tian and pushed in some lava that is power gaming.

What do you expect this server will be like?: I really think this server will be great. It'll be an awesome experience because I LOVE to roll play its just like acting ,and its fun. It seems really addicting and fun from videos I have seen on youtube.

What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?: LOTR online Beta Hunger games Gazamo and i left them because I wanted to find a server that would keep me for a while.

Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?: Yes.

Do you promise to abide by said rules, and laws? This includes the Server, Forum, and Teamspeak set Rules: Yes

How did you hear about us?: I have found you guys on this one channel i forgot the name but it seemed cool.

Have you previously made an Application? If so could you link us to your last Application?: no

In-Character

Character Name: Arthas Menthil

What Race are you?: I'm a human.

What Sub-Race are you? (note, you aren’t required to have a sub-race):

Undead

Biography (Please make this at least 2 paragraphs long. This must include the history of your character and his life as well as age, appearance and personality, etc.): Along time ago in the Land far away in a place called Strathlome lived a young prince by the name of Arthas Ruled by his father the King Menthil He ruled the lands he walked on and conquered all that he fought against he was Most known in battle for his Voice His father had some sort of magic vocal cord that when he screamed the whole battle field heard it and knew who it was. They destroyed the orc's territory besides their last resource area and they were outnumbered by mile but an undead came and gave them a chance they asked where the man by the name of Rutar Menthil was (which was Arthas's dad). They told them Every sort of information they could tell them and later that knight the Undead attacked Strathlome Killed everyone in it Rutars last words where is screech and he died leaving his sword behind and Arthas only 16 years of Age alone. The Undead where about to strike him and they felt a presence they have never felt before they Felt Arthas's Heart. It was a mix of Anger, Confidence, Evil, Hate and Sadness. This is what they needed for a Champion of the undead So they gave him a curse to make him an undead The curse was changing him into one of their great champions they put as many spells as they could on him to make him their new champion They even cursed his fathers sword with the Darkest magic they had. But before they could take Arthas they had company. From the Orcs they double crossed the Undead and the Undead ran. Leaving the orcs with the Cursed 16 year old teen Human/Undead with the Sword Their leader new there was an evil in him and locked him in the castle in a room. But later an Archeologist found That the room was open and Arthas's body was nowhere in sight. But there was a portal in the room with undead markings The Archeologist went inside it and it took him to the nether he saw Arthas with the Undead. The Archeologist ran out as fast as he could but Arthas chased him out the portal and out the kingdom and he killed the Archeologist and later an orc found the Archeologists Notebook and now the world knows his name Arthas. He wished to kill anything living but his greatest enemies are the orcs!

Heres a screenshot of my skin

[Brokencrowe 111]

Denied.

First of all you completely cut out the open response questions from your application.

Arthas smells of warcraft three, please make an original name.

Please don't break lore in your biography, and actually read the wiki page.

You might be putting effort into it from a very skewed angle, but you are not taking any of the steps required to make a powerful application. You need to dig deeper, and read what needs to be read. You cannot just throw powerful magics and make an over powered character. You also have to spend more than a few moments skimming over the lore. You need to put it into your biography, and show that you are a good enough roleplayer, that you can contribute to the community and not be these monstrous thing that is only going to bring down everyone else's fun.

Further more you didn't do the open response questions, which just annoys me, you need to put more effort into the application, and more time, and more feeling. This isn't a joke, a lot of people on this serer take things very seriously. Now if you want to be a part of this community, then show it through your next application.

You will be allowed to reapply in twenty four hours, if you have any questions concerning your application you may drop a message into my inbox. Thank you for applying to Lord of the Craft!

Good luck!

-Brokencrowe

[Brokencrowe 111]

Moved to Denied Forum