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[Redcake11 4]

Minecraft Account Name:redcake11

How old are you?:12 almost 13

Time-Zone/Country of Residence:Time-Zone 1+ GMT/Country Netherlands/Holland

Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?:I am still learning so it could do better.

Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself:I won't get angry fast and i am an nice guy but i can be an not so nice guy too.

How much time could you be on the server weekly?:More then 1 hour.

What do you know about Roleplaying? Give a definition of what it means to you:Playing inside an character and living with what he knows and what he does.

What experience have you had in Roleplaying, if any?:I have no experience in Roleplaying.

In your own Words, define what the act of Meta-Gaming is:Using out of character information by your roleplaying character.

In your own Words, define what the act of Power-Gaming is:Forcing someone to do something and giving him no chance to resist it.

What do you expect this server will be like?:Awesome and beautiful.

What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?:I play on Omegacraft with some friends.

Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?:Yes i do.

Do you promise to abide by said rules, and laws? This includes the Server, Forum, and Teamspeak set Rules:Yes i do and i don't even got teamspeak.

How did you hear about us?:Youtube.

Have you previously made an Application? If so could you link us to your last Application?:http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/user/39028-redcake11/

In-Character:

Character Name:Leonidas Redsword

What Race are you?:Human

What Sub-Race are you? (note, you aren’t required to have a sub-race):No Sub-Race.

Biography (Please make this at least 2 paragraphs long. This must include the history of your character and his life as well as age, appearance and personality, etc.):Leonidas Redsword likes to be called Leo or Red,he has blue eyes and black hair,6ft tall,can't understand orc language. Leonidas has 2 twin brother of him.They where born in the nation of reventus.His father was an town gaurd named Steven.His mother is an farmer called Maria.He helped his mother on the farm with his 2 brothers Steve,Stewie.They got enough money per month for something extra like clothes,meat.His dad was trained in swords Leo always wanted to see him fighting.Steve got more interest in traveling and Stewie just wanted to help his mom on the farm.Once in an while Steven goes away from the village to protect some merchants to the next town for some extra money but those travels are quite dangerous.A couple years pass Leo steve and stewie are now 9 years old.On their birthday there was an cake and for present they get to choose what they wanna do for later.Leo chose the path of the gaurd steve chose the path of the merchant and stewie chose the path of the farmer.On one day his father didn't get back from an protecting trip.They where shocked to hear that their father died when they where attacked by some hostile orcs.Leo was fulled with rage to hear that his father died.Then he decided to become an gaurd like his dead father.He took hard training for 2 years.They where now 12 years old.Steve was going on an journey as an merchant now only Leo and Stewie and his mom Maria where left home.Leo was going on some swords training for about 1 and an half year.He was now allowed to have an sword in town then an group of bandits came the town gaurds asked for assistance Leo said:I'll help you defending the town against some bandits.They were with an small group with almost no skill.When he was 16 his brother Steve died by some bandits in the cold north.Then Leo's mind was clear he was going on an journey he picked some minas and an couple of breads and his sword and then setted off while journeying to the cloud temple he met an the group of orcs that killed his father he was so angry that he killed them all and his sword turned red of the orc blood and that's why he is called Redsword.And now his journey continues to the cloud temple...

What is your Character's ambitions?:Being loyal and helpfull to friends and innocent people .

What is your character’s favorite tool? (sword, pickaxe, shovel, etc):Sword.

What is one of your Character's most skilled talents?using an sword.

A screenshot of your skin (must be in proper format):

Other Information about your Character:

Open-Response-Questions

Whilst traveling from the Cloud Temple you see a small halfling, being harassed by two armed warriors. They appear to be trying to steal money from him, how does your character respond?Leo walks in the cloud temple and sees that an little halfling is being robbed he yells HEY YOU WHAT DO YOU THINK YOU'R DOING? They answered nothing you should know.He answered well maybe i should know Leo grabs his sword.The bandits sees his sword and give the money back to the halfling and run off

Your character wanders into Alras, and comes across a small stall, behind which a well dressed man is standing. He’s offering various wares, the merchant turns to you and says in a posh accent " 'ello there, what can I do you for today?" What is your character response?Hello there well dressed man do you have some Bread? He answers yes that will be 4 minas.Ok there you go Leo gives the minas to the man and takes the bread.See you later.

Whilst wandering in the wilds, your character comes across a small hut, which looks abandoned. Inside it you see a chest containing a few iron bars, and a golden sword. How would your character respond?:He would close the chest and say to himself:That is from someone else and walks off.

Hungry and lost in the wilderness, you stumble across a small trading camp nestled among the forest, they greet you you in the common tongue, how do you respond?Hello there do you guys have some food for me i am willing to do anything for it even pay money..

You hear word that bandits occupy the road outside the town in which you have been staying. The town guard have gathered, and are asking for assistance to help eliminate them. The leader of the party is offering a reward for any who offer their support. How does your character act on this information?:He would help the gaurds with their plan and take the reward so he can buy a new sword.

[Admiral_Ackbarf 67]

Denied

You were denied because of the following.

-Your ORQ's are too short.

-Your definitions of Meta-Gaming and Power-Gaming are too short.

I realize you said your working on your grammar but you seem to have significant errors. I recommend posting your app into Microsoft Word and correct everything that's misspelled.

You may re-apply in 24 hours.

[Admiral_Ackbarf 67]

Moved to Denied Forum