F0X712 (2)

[F0x712 0]

Out-Of-Character

Minecraft Account Name: F0x712

How old are you?: 11.

Time-Zone/Country of Residence: (GMT 8:00 hours) Pacific

Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?: Yes I do.

Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself: I'm pretty good with computers for a 5th grader. I am a good leader and a kind friend. I will defend my friends no matter what the case.

How much time could you be on the server weekly?: 10-16 hours.

What do you know about Roleplaying? Give a definition of what it means to you: Roleplaying is an enjoyable type of game that creative and imaginative people would like. People who just like slipping into a world where you can be a whole 'nother creature or person. From a loyal slave to a might king to a brave knight fighting a ferocious dragon! I think roleplaying can really stretch someone's creativity and imagination.

What experience have you had in Roleplaying, if any?: I have played numerous roleplaying games like Dungeons & Dragons. I find them entertaining.

In your own Words, define what the act of Meta-Gaming is: Using the info you collect outside of a game to choose your actions in-game. For example, someone could be having trouble in a spleefing match on a minecraft server and sit out for a few rounds. During that time, they would observe what the players do and use the tactics that the winners used and use it when he/she plays.

In your own Words, define what the act of Power-Gaming is: Performing actions that are not possible to humans. Things that a person wouldn't normally be able to do. For example, normal people cannot jump 10 feet into the air without any effort. Nor can a normal person heal themselves with a snap of their fingers.

What do you expect this server will be like?: I have seen my friend play it and I find the server VERY entertaining and exciting. I love how the action never stops and how you can do whatever! I can't wait to play LordoftheCraft (if i get accepted).

What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?: I currently play on BHSMinecraft. I play on my friend's servers though they're not very popular and some are whitelisted. I used to play Epic Mine World but I quit because the rules were unfair.

Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?: Yes, yes, and yes. I have never been banned and I don't plan to.

Do you promise to abide by said rules, and laws? This includes the Server, Forum, and Teamspeak set Rules: Yes, I promise NOT to break the rules.

How did you hear about us?: I saw my friend playing on the server. I found myself attached to him STARING at his laptop screen.

Have you previously made an Application? If so could you link us to your last Application?: No I haven't.

In-Character

Character Name: Tentár Bëndurdwor

What Race are you?: Orc

What Sub-Race are you? (note, you aren’t required to have a sub-race):

Biography (Please make this at least 2 paragraphs long. This must include the history of your character and his life as well as age, appearance and personality, etc.): Tentar is an orc warrior. He was born during a war with the dwarves. His father was killed on a suicide mission to slay the dwarven king. He barely made it to the doors to the king's corridor. Alone and desperate, Tentar's father burst through the doors to see 6 buff, drawven warriors aside the king. Shocked and despaired, Tentar's father fell to his knees and surrendered. Tentar's father was executed 4 days later. When Tentar's mother heard of the news, she was so despaired, she completely forgot about Tentar. Tentar nearly starved to death when his aunt and uncle took him in. His uncle was a farmer. Tentar left to join the orc army when he was 26.

Tentar was in a war against the humans when he heard news that his uncle had fallen ill and died. Without any way to get to the village his aunt and uncle lived in, Tentar couldn't go to his uncle's funeral. Tentar was so distracted, he was almost killed in battle. He was stabbed in the arm by a tall human. Tentar winced in pain and jabbed the human in the stomach with his knee. He stalked back to the orc base to be treated. There, some doctors treated his arm. Ever since then, Tentar's left arm has always been a bit weaker than his right. Tentar is now just another orc warrior.

What is your Character's ambitions?: All Tentar wants to do is loyally serve his country. Nothing more than that.

What is your character’s favorite tool? (sword, pickaxe, shovel, etc): A nice, sturdy sword. Nothing beats slicing through a dwarf or something else alive.

What is one of your Character's most skilled talents? Fighting and building are things Tentar enjoys. He is experienced with it and is very dedicated to his duties.

A screenshot of your skin (must be in proper format): I have attached it.

Other Information about your Character: I have already expressed everything about my character.

Open-Response-Questions

Whilst traveling from the Cloud Temple you see a small halfling, being harassed by two armed warriors. They appear to be trying to steal money from him, how does your character respond?

I charge at the two warriors while drawing my sword and clash into an epic battle with the two warriors. I end the battle heavily damaging one and slaying the other. The one with heavy wounds just barely escapes. I collect everything the dead warrior has and collect what the injured one dropped. I turn to rob the halfling just in time to see it rushing down the road. I decide to let him go for I already too have heavy wounds and I head back home.

Your character wanders into Alras, and comes across a small stall, behind which a well dressed man is standing. He’s offering various wares, the merchant turns to you and says in a posh accent " 'ello there, what can I do you for today?" What is your character response? I plop down a small bag filled with Minas and order, "Give me some food." The man looks in the bag, snickers, and says, "This ain't gonna pay for anything in my shop. Got any more money?" I immediately notice he's trying to cheat me so I grab him by the scruff of his neck and spit, "The rest of the money is strapped to my belt. My sword "pays" by not slicing your head off." The man timidly reaches into some drawers and pulls out some steak. I ****** the steak and walk away.

Whilst wandering in the wilds, your character comes across a small hut, which looks abandoned. Inside it you see a chest containing a few iron bars, and a golden sword. How would your character respond?:

I sneakily steal the items and turn to walk out the door and stop to see an elf pointing his bow at me. He asks, "Who are you and why are you stealing my belongings?" I pretend to reason with him, "I saw this small hut and I thought it was abandoned so-" I swiftly grab his bow, snap it, swipe his legs causing the elf to fall, throw the items into my inventory, and run away.

Hungry and lost in the wilderness, you stumble across a small trading camp nestled among the forest, they greet you you in the common tongue, how do you respond?

Knowing if I respond rudely, I will be turned away, I ask, "Do you have shelter? I am lost and hungry. I have not much money though." The men, interested in my story, invite in a small cottage and feed me. I tell them how I got lost and I go to bed. The next day they give me a bag filled with items and food and directions. I thank them and head off back to my village.

You hear word that bandits occupy the road outside the town in which you have been staying. The town guard have gathered, and are asking for assistance to help eliminate them. The leader of the party is offering a reward for any who offer their support. How does your character act on this information?:

I agree to fight off the bandits. I head off towards the road to see two dwarves being beat by the bandits. I draw my sword and charge towards the bandits. One of them shoot an arrow towards me, just barely grazing my cheek. I strike one bandit down and throw a stick at a bandit about to slice off a dwarve's head. He falls to the ground and I stab my sword into his chest and look towards the other bandits just in time to see an arrow streaking towards me. I roll to the side just barely dodging the arrow. I jump towards a nearby bow, load it, and shoot the archer bandit. A bandit comes up behind me and knocks me unconscious with the hilt of his sword. He is just about to stab me when a team of elves shoot the bandits down and save my life. The two dwarves are taken to a medical station and I am rewarded with diamonds.

Orc LordoftheCraft Skin.htm

[Admiral_Ackbarf 67]

Denied

For 11 years old you are a really good writer but I found some things that didn't go too much.

-There are bouts of Power-Gaming in your application.

-Biography of your character could be expanded a tad bit more.

-Your Meta-Gaming and Power-Gaming definitions are a little off.

You may re-apply in 24 hours.

Good luck!

[Admiral_Ackbarf 67]

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