[Under Review - Aryon] Jroh80 5Th Application

[jroh 0]

Out-Of-Character

Minecraft Account Name:

jroh80.

How old are you?:

I am 14 years old.

Time-Zone/Country of Residence:

I live in the us and pacific standerd time.

Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?:

Yes i have a good grip on english, but like every one my spelling dose slip sometimes.

Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself:

I am a teenage boy that loves sports and gaming, my favorite sport is football i play it every year and actually got to go to Florida to play for my state. outside of sports my second favorite thing is minecraft and i can not seem to find a really good experience on it, the only real fun i have had on it is when im on a rp server, and my friend's love to make fun of me for it, but i will continue to do what i love.

How much time could you be on the server weekly?:

i can spend up to 30 hours on this server ,15 hours at the least.

What do you know about Roleplaying? Give a definition of what it means to you:

Roleplaying is pretending to be something that you are not ,it's actually playing a different role. sometimes in game you will have to do things that you as a person would not normally do, but you're in character so this means you will do things that the character you made up will normally do. Roleplaying is making up a character and sticking to it.

What experience have you had in Roleplaying, if any?:

I have played on a old role-play factions server a long time ago, and thats when i fell in love with minecraft and Role-play at the same time, this was not the best server because many players did not have a skin fit for the setting or role-play style of this server.

In your own Words, define what the act of Meta-Gaming is:

Metagaming is using ooc or out of game information to influence your character's decision, like if some one said in occ that they had just got a diamond sword, then you see him in game, he happens to be a enemy race, then all of a suden you and him are ready to do battle, then you remember his sword

and you say in the ic chat " woooow no way sir you have a diamond sword" and you run, but he never pulled the diamond sword out, and thats meta-gaming because you used information that you learned in occ and not in game.

In your own Words, define what the act of Power-Gaming is:

power gaming is doing a unstop able action to a player for example:

walking up and instantly attacking another player. this is power-gaming because you did not give the other player time to react to this situation. one way of avoiding this situation is bumping in to a player and your character says "back off im warning you." this is not power-gaming simply because you gave the player time to react.

What do you expect this server will be like?:

I expect this server to be a game changer to all role-play servers in minecraft. I also expect the server will be very fun and addicting.

What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?:

I have played on a faction server that was really fun, but had to leave this server because their were way to many hackers.

Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?:

yes

Do you promise to abide by said rules, and laws? This includes the Server, Forum, and Teamspeak set Rules:

I promise

How did you hear about us? Did someone refer you?:

I spent days looking for a good role-play server with no application needed, but then i found lord of the craft and knew that I hade to be on this server.

Have you previously made an Application? If so could you link us to your last Application?:

Yes this is my 5th one! This application is very similar to my last because all I have to change is my Open-Response-Questions by making them longer and cut out the power-gaming in my last one www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/54834-4th-application-for-jroh80/page__p__424151#entry424151

Have you posted this application on our minecraft forum thread yet? If not, just finish it up on here and then copy + paste is over there. (http://www.minecraftforum.net/topic/832121-%E2%96%91%E2%96%92%E2%96%93-the-lord-of-the-craft-%E2%96%93%E2%96%92%E2%96%91-enter-the-world-of-asulon-o-f-f-i-c-i-a-l-l-y-t-h-e-n-o-1-r-p-s-e-r-v-e-r/):

In-Character:

Character Name:

Livlin Grant.

What Race are you?:

Elve's.

What Sub-Race are you? (note, you aren’t required to have a sub-race):

Dark elves.

Biography (Please make this at least 2 paragraphs long. This must include the history of your character and his life as well as age, appearance and personality, etc.):

I was born in my parents house 20 years ago it was around the time when the people of Asulon were geting used to Asulon. I remember as a child I would always go with my father down to Normandor and would be amazed by all its beauty, so many people were there ,I would always be afraid that I would lose track of my father, but as I grew I learned the place by heart and loved going down there as I saw all the trading before my eyes I was always thinking that most people had to become rich by all the stuff they sold. Finally my family bought a house in Normandor and I was never bored. I never got the chance to see a elf that was my age I guess thats because elf children are so rare, so I played with the humans. We would run around using sticks as sword's and "fight to the death". After all of this play time I grew to become really good with a sword. I did see older elf's that were all about patience and archery, but as a dark elf i dont have the best patience, its in my blood.

As I got older i noticed that my mom was very religious, my family worships the beloved Velulaei, truth is I dont know much about that stuff except for the saying "Darkness does not always equate to evil". All of that stuff gets me thinking about am I to do something great? Does every one have a role that they were made to fill? I was thinking about this when my father finally brought me to the wild, I was only 16 but I was ready to work, my father said it was a free way to get what we could find, what he didn't say was that it was filled with bandits. I remember him cutting down trees and seeing a bunch of people. My father was knocked to the ground and the bandits told him to give him every thing he had on him and they would spear his life. He told me to run but thats the opposite of what I was about to do. I remembered Normandor, Velulaei ,and playing as a kid. I picked up my fathers sword, all the bandits looked at me."Go away and leave my family alone" I said all the bandits laugh. "well kid if this is what you want we would be happy to fight you!" The biggest bandit said. "well then lets fight" I said, i was scared out of my mind, but I charged them and got one of them in the leg, the rest charged back, I pretended it was nothing more then playing with sticks like I used to. I hit one in the face and swung away.. when I opened my eyes they were all gone, except for one, The biggest one "well kid looks like you would be good if you stuck with me" He said, i looked at my father he was on the ground watching it all happen "No! never, ill just finish you off like the others" after those words came out of my mouth i knew i said to much. He picked me up with one arm "looks like im going to have to finish you off" He swung at my leg, I dont remember much but my father did save me that day and killed the biggest bandit out of that group that attacked us. After that day i knew what I wanted to do with my life, I wanted to help any one in need ,I wanted to save people like how I saved my father. I moved out to chase my dream, so now I am nothing but a dark skinned elf with red young eyes hoping to make my dream come true.

I have no plans for what comes next the only thing I can do is pray to Velulaei and take chances. I hope that once I become what I want to be I will go back to my father and we can finish what we started in the wilderness, and thats to do whatever I can to help.

What is your Character's ambitions?:

I wish to become any thing I can to help people of Asulon and help people get their way. Opening up my own shop will be nice as well.

What is your character’s favorite tool? (sword, pickaxe, shovel, etc):

My favorite tool is a sword, I love the fact that it's so easy to use, not like a bow of any kind. I know that most elevs love to use bow's, but Dark Elevs are different, they love the art of the sword.

What is one of your Character's most skilled talents?

I find that I am good with people, so trading is very easy to me. I also handle a sword very well.

A screenshot of your skin (must be in proper format):

(( My computer is not letting me put in a picture of my skin so I have put my skin as my profile picture and avatar))

Other Information about your Character:

I have another small dream that would be nice to see come true, I wish to work in a shop or maybe run one.

Open-Response-Questions

Whilst traveling from the Cloud Temple you see a small halfling, being harassed by two armed warriors. They appear to be trying to steal money from him, how does your character respond?

"Hey leave that boy alone!" i say, the warriors look at me, "ok lets pick on someone our own size" one of the warrior's said, they came for me "Go get help, hurry" I say to the halfling, he runs of, I turn back to them "leave that halfling alone!" I said shouting at them, "yah and what if we dont?" one of the warriors said. i looked at him, he could tell that i was getting mad "If you dont ill have to send you back to the Cloud Temple.. the hard way" I said trying to sound as powerful as a could. "Then what are you waiting for?" he said. Before i could speak one of the warriors hits me. I felt like I was going to die. Then I puled out my sword, I turn around SMACK I hit one in the face with the back of my hand. "Are we really going to do this?" I said to them, they took that as a yes, they ran to me, I tripped one but the other got me good in the leg, I limped around and saw that one was on the ground the other was being attacked by a bunch of halfling's. The young halfling came up to me "thank you" he said and walked away. I then stayed to see the warriors get what they deserved.

Your character wanders into Alras, and comes across a small stall, behind which a well dressed man is standing. He’s offering various wares, the merchant turns to you and says in a posh accent " 'ello there, what can I do you for today?" What is your character response?

As i know that alras is full of shops and dose not take sides to any wars I know that this man is harmless. "i have been out in the wild for i long time i managed to cut up my leg pretty bad, I think some food will do the trick, do you have any?" I say. The man looked around in a huge chest. "hmmm i got a few turkeys with your name on it" the man says. I chuckle, "well thanks ill be sure to come back next time im in Alras" I say , as i walk out i see many shops and I think this would be a good place to run my own.

Whilst wandering in the wilds, your character comes across a small hut, which looks abandoned. Inside it you see a chest containing a few iron bars, and a golden sword. How would your character respond?:

Im confused by the things in the chest, why would some one leave this here? I stay one night to see if any one will come back to the house, because only the bravest stay a night in the wild. A day passes and nothing, it looks like this is abandoned I thought. I take every thing, until i hear i voice in the distance "What are you doing? I new the wild wasent a good place to set up camp darn bandits". I turend around to see a northerner running my way. "Hey take it easy i promise you I am no bandit" i said, I see the man is still scared "look ill show you" i drop all of his belongings in the chest. "See now would a bandit do that?" i said, the man looked relieved "good for a second their i thought things would turn out bad"he said, the man walks over to his chest picks up his things and walks off "ware are you going?" I shout at him "to the nearest city!" I chuckle and walk off too.

Hungry and lost in the wilderness, you stumble across a small trading camp nestled among the forest, they greet you you in the common tongue, how do you respond?

About to pass out I look up and see a trading camp! I go as fast as I can to the closest person "please can you please spare some food" I say to the man. He looks at me worried "oh my, get this man some food, hurry!!" the other rush to me throwing pork, I eat until im full. Then I give all of them every thing i have on me, its the best I could do. The traders are nice and let it slide. "thank god" I say as i lay down in the middle of the camp enjoying ever last bite of pork.

You hear word that bandits occupy the road outside the town in which you have been staying. The town guard have gathered, and are asking for assistance to help eliminate them. The leader of the party is offering a reward for any who offer their support. How does your character act on this information?: At first I was scared to say something, then I remembered the time when i saved my father from all the bandits once in the wild. I walk up "I would like to join" I say. The man looks at me and hands me a sword and a few pieces of armor, I put on what he gave me, a few other join too. As we marched to the bandits one man steps back, we all watch him run off. Now its just 3 against 5. More bandits then us, I grew tired and said to the bandits "Leave this place at once!" the bandits dont seem to care about what I say "Leave now!" i say as i stand my ground looking as powerful and strong as I can. The bandits mumble to each other, "or els what?" one bandit asks "Or els me and my friends will show you the way out!" the bandits didn't like that 'well we will just have to see wont we!" they ran for me. I had no other chose but to run back. One jumped out of my way but not the other, I knocked one down and stunned the other. The one that got knocked down did not get back up. The other bandits did not like this. They held me up and took swings at my torso. I remembers fighting in the play grounds with my human friends and all of the stick battles we had. One bandit falls from a hit to the face. Now it's just one on one, I jump out and hit him with the edge of my sword. I looked around and no more bandits. Now town was back to normal.

[Aryon 679]

Accepted.

I can tell you have read the lore and such, and it is a good application. Though what made me reluctant to accept this, is that you do not capitalize your I's, and sometimes your grammar is lacking.

None the less; Please be patient, and wait for a GM to implement you.

[Aryon 679]

Moved to Accepted Forum