[Orc Application] Rashnack's Application V2

[Panashea 3326]

Out-Of-Character: Divinejustice

Minecraft Account Name: DivineJustice

How old are you?: 16

Time-Zone/Country of Residence:: EST

Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?:: Yes I’ve spoken English all my life.

Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself:: I am an avid fantasy write and love to make people happy by telling them my stories. I am glad to share some of my stories and hope to become a writer. I have a great imagination and i can make some of the most boring times into stories of excitement or spruce of life. Most people think I’m too happy considering i haven’t frowned.

How much time could you be on the server weekly?: Well due to the fact that it is summer i can play from 9 A.m- 9 p.M or later. During school times it is usually cut by half this time.

What do you know about Roleplaying? Give a definition of what it means to you: Roleplaying is the special act in which someone is almost transferred into an avatar. They are what they ever wanted to be and more. It is viewing the world with new ideas and eyes. Everything around you is warped in the way your character is. Roleplaying means to me a whole lot considering I’m a fantasy novelist. I think of what my characters face by putting myself in their shoes. it gives me a broad view of the world i helped create but not inside of. Roleplaying is the key to unlocking your potential in creative art and thinking.

What experience have you had in Roleplaying, if any?:: I have played on many faction servers and as a faction leader i tried to spruce up faction life by making it more interesting. Castle preparation and different positions. I focused on having a government, economy, and way of life. We lived by certain rules and only accepted those who seemed like they could improve us.

In your own Words, define what the act of Meta-Gaming is: : Meta-gaming is a bothersome quirk

in roleplaying but not as bad as power-emoting. This is when a player uses information they’ve never learned for an advantage. This is almost like a form of cheating in which one player unfairly has the upper hand against another.

In your own Words, define what the act of Power-Emoting is: Power- Emoting is an unfair form of roleplaying in which one player does many things that are incorrect. There are three different versions of this and these are common to happen together or involve eachother. A player will force another player to do something and doesn’t make sense because it takes away the freedom and creativity of the player. Another way is by not giving the other player a chance to react. Players need time to think and figure out to do something. The third and personally worst, pulling things from random. In most roleplaying situations characters who feel weaker than others decide to use things that don’t exist or don’t have to win. I will show you an example,

Ex:

Kamina: Hello fine sir! I am a traveling salesman in need of gold, might i ask you to purchase something?

Beastman: Put your hands behind your back, I’m robbing you!

Kamina: You and what army, scum!

*Beastman pulls out an iron dagger

OCC: ( Dude! Where did you get the dagger from?0

OCC:( Randomly, now give me the items!)

This is a huge lack of creativity and a annoying part of roleplaying, Luckily i hope this server prevents against these kinds of things.

What do you expect this server will be like?:: I expect this server to be refined and everything i hope for. The excitement, the flow of emotion and one great ball of fun. However, there are rules everyone has to abide by and will people who play have the ability to change or make the server better.

What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?:: Servers that i played on for long periods of time get shut down. Though a frequent minecraft faction player i don’t keep track of those server and only recently i have been playing on a zombie server but due to the frequent crashes i decided to look for a more stable, suitable server.

Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?: Yes i understand all rule and will follow them to the most i can.

Do you promise to abide by said rules, and laws? This includes the Server, Forum, and Teamspeak set Rules: I promise to follow laws the rules and laws.

How did you hear about us?: I searched through many roleplaying servers with no avail. However, LOTC was a common mentioned and after reading through it i believe this server is everything i believe i enjoy.

Have you previously made an Application? If so could you link us to your last Application?: i haven’t made any other applications but i hope to apply for a Villain app and in the future a charter.

In-Character: : Rashnack

Character Name: Rashnack Vruugdish

What Race are you? (You may only be Human, Orc, Elf or Dwarf!) : Orc

What Sub-Race are you? (note, you aren’t required to have a sub-race): River Orc

Biography (Please make this at least 2 paragraphs long. This must include the history of your character and his life as well as age, appearance and personality, etc.):

Rashnack is young orc about 16 and a warrior on the Black Dubloon. He was a swordsman but a cocky and headstrong one. He fought until his last breath and had to be repaired many times. Under his clothing he had many scars and bandaged wounds. Before he was pirate he worked for his family hunting animals and attacking nearby cities for their bounties. His family was poor living with his two brothers and parents. Most orcs consider him strange considering he never set foot in the desert. His parents committed a crime, being whitewash and were banished from Sanjezal. His family raised him with orc culture but forbid him to go into the desert. They knew that if a Vruugdish stepped into Orcish Territory they would be hunted. Then family Then after years of pillaging villages some towns in Aegis had. About 25 soldiers rushed to his house and set it to a flame. His family quickly rushed out and tried to fight back. Rashnack was only 12 but he decided to fight as much as possible. Then one of the guards took his father by surprise. He cut Rashnack’s father and as he fell stabbed him in the back. Rashnack’s father screamed pain. His older brother looked at his father in rage. He lost his mind and went into a bloodlust. He cut open the soldier and he battled the soldiers. Then one stabbed his back infront of Rashnack. It pierced through and killed his brother. The brother with his dying breath handed him the sword and whispered to him, “ Run.” Rashnack rushed into the forest. in the first time in his life he was scared He hated everything around him for his lost. Most importantly, he blamed himself. His mind was twisted and corrupted, he couldn’t trust anyone. Then one day while walking in a harbor he joined the Black Dubloon and finally made friends. He became relaxed and understood why he should find the race that did this and pay them back. He traveled on the Black Dubloon for 4 years learning the way of the sword. Then the day he once lost everything again happened.

In the far destroyed regions Aegis before the undead siege Rashnack was a false merchant who scammed along the coast by plundering and raiding. He went through the rivers charting unexplored land and hunting those who were solitary. His band thieves burned and sliced through the shorelines destroying harbors and towns. Then one day on war early morning they decided to siege a strong town known as Septora. Their military was one of the best in the region. They were known for publicly humiliated and murdered pirates. They had tons of bounty from the pirates they killed and lived a peaceful life. As their large ship cruised into town their black skulls were quickly spotted by the shore guard. They fired shots toward the ship and exploded on site. They hit the ships side and the ship quickly turned into the harbor and crashed onto the shoreline. They lept of their boat and rushed into battle. They clashed against the soldiers and cannons fired off. As they fought the guards more soldiers came in. The city was burning and smelled of dead people. A cannon went off and the explosion launched a rock toward Rashnack’s head and knocked him out. His knees weakened and he fell to the ground. The pirates quickly retreated as possible and fled to a boat in the dock. Rashnack quickly awoke with a large headache he tried to get up but a soldier grabbed him and called some other soldiers and they grabbed him and picked him up. Two soldiers had to hold him while they repeatedly beat him up. They punched and kicked him while he couldn’t do a thing. Then they dragged him to the hanging area. As they set up the noose around his neck a cannon fired off. he was relieved as he saw his flags attacking Septora. He quickly took advantage of the situation and ran toward his new repaired ship. A guard saw him hurrying after his boat. The guard dived for him tackling him and started to punch him in the face. Rashnack flipped him over and stabbed him in the chest. His shortsword, Sevein easily mortally injured the guard and he took off. Rashnack felt a warm feeling over his rib and looked down. The guard had stabbed him. He turned around and saw the blood trailing behind him .He thought and remembered he blacked out during the beat up. He walked toward the shore and his knee began to shake. He sunk into the water and the lack of energy caused him to stop moving. Then after weeks of drifting across shore he woke up on some large island. Though angry, and embarrassed he lets some monks take care of him till he was healed. He quickly took off to the nearest river. He stared t the water and thought. Everything he ever had was gone. His friends and family could be anywhere. His sadness turned into anger. He hated the fact he was stuck on a forsaken island without anyone. He realised it was the Elves fault! Septora was an Elven town but none the less aggressive. He planned to murder any elves and those who got in his way. He grinned to himself and sat beside a tree in the shade. He couldn’t survive on his own. In this newfound land he realised that all past rules had disappeared. Just as he fought for his survival he guessed others did too. He fled toward the desert seeking his kin hoping they forgot about the past.

What are your Character's ambitions?:

Rashnack wishes to pillage and destroy all enemies around him. He wishes to hunt elves and kill them for what they did to his parents. He is relaxed around most races but around elves he is irritated, angry and headstrong. He also wishes to find some his friends from the Black Dubloon. He wishes to find friends but most dislike how relaxed he is.

What is your character’s favorite tool? (sword, pickaxe, shovel, etc):

He is swordsman by heart and his father’s sword was his best weapon. It was his trusty sword and made him a fearsome opponent. He also is a strong fistfighter and agile fighter. He never learned how to use tools such as pickaxe, shovel, or other tools because of the fact they were pirates allowed Rashnack never able to read,write, or learn ny education. However he is skilled cartographer and star finder.

What is one of your Character's most skilled talents?

Rashnack as a scout he has a large amount of acrobatic skills enabling him to do feats such as dodging and weaving around tasks. As a former pirate he understands star lining, and cartography.

A screenshot of your skin (must be in proper format, if you do not know how to acquire one, copy and paste this link into your browser: ( http://tinyurl.com/Lotcscreenshot ):

Other Information about your Character:

Open-Response-Questions

Whilst traveling from the Cloud Temple you see a small halfling, being harassed by two armed warriors. They appear to be trying to steal money from him, how does your character respond?

Rashnack, “ Stuu’pid ‘aflin! dat one deserves to get klomped! Nub 2 races should make baby! Lat deserved to get klomped.

(Rashnack could care less about other races but halfing’s make him sick. two races together disgusts him.

Your character wanders into Alras, and comes across a small stall, behind which a well dressed man is standing. He’s offering various wares, the merchant turns to you and says in a posh accent " 'ello there, what can I do you for today?" What is your character response?

Rashnack : Gi’ me all latz shines! Or get klomped.

Trader: E’cuse me?

Rashnack: Latz heard me! pulls out a sword. and trusts it toward the merchant.

The merchant pulls out a bow

Merchant: Me ‘eard of you bandits. Curse you to hell!

The Merchant throws down his sachel and prepares to fight. Rashnack smiles as the merchant becomes scared. Rashnack shiethes his sword and gets into a boxer’s stance.

Merchant: You stupid orc. You need dat sword to beat me!

Rashnack: HA! Latz weak and will ged klomped eda way.

Rashnack rushes toward the merchant with his fists. The merchant launches an arrow into his arm and Rashnack crumbles to the ground. He winces once while the merchant smiles.

Merchant: Told you fool. The merchant flees As Rashnack gets up from the wound.

Rashnack: SKAH! Me too ‘tuupid. Less blah more klomp.

Whilst wandering in the wilds, your character comes across a small hut, which looks abandoned. Inside it you see a chest containing a few iron bars, and a golden sword. How would your character respond?:

Rashnack: Hehe me needed to make me zult bub’osh dis is bub’osh! Letz me tak dis to a smidy to make me zult bub’osh.

As Rashnack walks out of the house an elf appears to be walking toward the house. He quickly puts the items on the ground and stares at the elf.

Elf: Thief!

Rashnack: So? Wub dat mean?

Elf: You will die for your crimes beast!

The Elf rushes at Rashnack with an iron Rapier and thrusts it into Rashnack. Rashnack collapses to the ground. With the sword still in his chest. He winces as he pushes against two different points in opposite directions causing it to snap. The elf froze in disbelief

Rashnack: I learn dat one on Black Dubloon. He stands up holding his wound in one hand and punches the elf with the other, breathing heavily. The Elf drops down cold and doesn’t get up.Rashnack staggers toward the items but passes out before he can do anything

Hungry and lost in the wilderness, you stumble across a small trading camp nestled among the forest, they greet you you in the common tongue, how do you respond?

Rashnack: Wub da Skah ar latz blabin! Ged da skah outta me sight! Unless latz gimme grub me klomp all o latz!

Me need bread and meatiez.

Traders; You are going to have to pay though. This is the wilds and we need to earn our pay.

Rashnack: Latz stuu’pid latz think me gonna pay? if latz nub gimme me gonn take!

Traders pull out crude slingshots. Traders : Either pay or get out of our forest. We don’t want stupid thieves like you in our forest.

Rashnack: Me nub theif! Me urk who klomp latz!

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Rashnack pulls out his sword and launches after them.

A battle begins and about an hour later Rashnack is on the ground spitting out blood.

One trader on the ground moans: Fine, you win take what you want

Rashnack: Hehe i told you!

Trader: I curse you to hells

Rashnack: Me jus doin wub me need ta do!

He stands up and walks over to the storage. He winces as he bites into some bread and food.

Rashnack: Now all me needs to do is ged out o da skahin forest.

He bites his teeth: SKAH! dem slingshots ‘urt.

You hear word that bandits occupy the road outside the town in which you have been staying. The town guard have gathered, and are asking for assistance to help eliminate them. The leader of the party is offering a reward for any who offer their support. How does your character act on this information?:

Rashnack: Bub’osh me need som shinez. ‘ow much ar latz payin me for dem skahin bandits! me needz da money.

Guard: About 50 shines you want.

Rashnack: Nub a chance! gimme all da monies of da town agh me decide.

Guard: 500 shinies? its all we have.

Rashnack: Latz get me more if latz want to life skahin guard!

Guard: Sir i cannot give you anymore we are poor.

Rashnack: Den fo’get about it latz were stuu’pid anyway

Guard begins to laugh

Guard: Guys did you hear that? An orc called me stupid, an orc!

Rashnack turns around and launches toward the guard with a fist ready. He punches the guard once sending him spralling on the ground. Rashnack gets close and spits on his face. The guards rush toward their friend and look at he orc. They pull out spears and prepare to fight.

Rashnack : Latz lucky da smidy has me zult.

Guard: By Order of our leader you are under arrest. Come with us.

Rashnack: Lik me giv a skah.

Guard: For swearing at an official you will be taken to the brig. Guards take him away.

Two guards rush toward Rashnack but Rashnack grabs them both and smashes their skulls together. The rest of the guards are scared and fearful.

Guard: We uhh, give you mercy. You are uhh, free to go!

The guards quickly scramble way as Rashnack chuckles walking to the next town.

Anything else you would like to say?:

I am excited to play on LOTC and hope with revision i can make it so i can make LoTC better and so i can play on this wonderful server.

[Goldrim 1422]

Under Review Accepted

Your application is decent, I have also read through your previous application and you have improved on the fields I requested you to, now that you are accepted I do not wish for you to murder any Elves unless provoked, keep in mind that you need an Accepted Villain Application for that.

[Goldrim 1422]

Moved to Accepted Forum

[Viper3X 1056]

Implemented!