Flameo0's 2Nd Application

[FireSword 0]

Out-Of-Character

Minecraft Account Name:Flameo0

How old are you?:11

Time-Zone/Country of Residence:USA

Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?:I think so, but I some times rush and then my grammar gets bad.

Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself:I am tall,and skinny.I have light brown eyes and white skin color.

How much time could you be on the server weekly?:3-4 days a week.

What do you know about Roleplaying? Give a definition of what it means to you:I think Roleplaying is where you have to do what you're supposed to do. You have to meet your goals and expectations.

What experience have you had in Roleplaying, if any?:I've had no experience in Roleplaying, but I think I've got the idea.

In your own Words, define what the act of Meta-Gaming is:I think Meta-Gaming is where you use strategy.You use your oponnents weaknesses to your advantage.

In your own Words, define what the act of Power-Emoting is:I think Power-Emoting is forcing a player to do thing for your own will.Power-Emoting makes you practically invincible.

What do you expect this server will be like?:Great with a good storyline.

What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?:Realmcraft, and I left it because everything was expensive.

Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?:Yes.

Do you promise to abide by said rules, and laws? This includes the Server, Forum, and Teamspeak set Rules:I do.

How did you hear about us?:Minecraft server list.

Have you previously made an Application? If so could you link us to your last Application?:Yes.Link:http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/61482-fireswords-application/

In-Character:

Character Name:Flame Whitestorm

What Race are you? (You may only be Human, Orc, Elf or Dwarf!) :Elf

What Sub-Race are you? (note, you aren’t required to have a sub-race):No sub-race.

Biography (Please make this at least 2 paragraphs long. This must include the history of your character and his life as well as age, appearance and personality, etc.):Flame's story begins at his village.He was 80 at the moment.He was ready for his archery class.It was his favorite class since he was so good at it.This time he made 4 perfect shots.As Flame was walking home he saw a piece of gold in a river.It was lodged in between 2 rocks.He tried to get it out ,But it was too hard.So he hit it with big rock and destroyed the 2 rocks.He took it with him.During the journey home he examines the rock.It was shiny and sent a strange aura.He later discover it was worth a lot of money. He gave it to Redoran, his father, the piece of gold.Redoran and Rose, Flame's mom, Sold it. Afterwards they moved to a City in Malinor.He continues to practice archery and he wonders for what fortunate reason he found the gold shard.He decides to go on.52 years passed in Malinor and Flame decides it's time to go.He left at 132 years old to a better life.

What are your Character's ambitions?:To become a mage and get an enchanted bow.

What is your character’s favorite tool? (sword, pickaxe, shovel, etc):A bow.He likes the bow because you can hurt people from far away and not be heard or seen.

What is one of your Character's most skilled talents?Archery, for most elves are great with bow and arrows.

A screenshot of your skin (must be in proper format, if you do not know how to acquire one, copy and paste this link into your browser: ( http://tinyurl.com/Lotcscreenshot ):

Other Information about your Character:He has brown hair and long legs.

Open-Response-Questions

Each and every question must be answered with a minimum of a single full paragraph and entirely in RP.

Whilst traveling from the Cloud Temple you see a small halfling, being harassed by two armed warriors. They appear to be trying to steal money from him, how does your character respond?I'd say" Stop it!He's a helpless halfling and your taking advantage of him.If they ignore me I'd shoot one with an arrow to scare them off.Then I would help the halfling and bring it home.

Your character wanders into Alras, and comes across a small stall, behind which a well dressed man is standing. He’s offering various wares, the merchant turns to you and says in a posh accent " 'ello there, what can I do you for today?" What is your character response?"Well I'd like my bow repaired,please,"I'd say.After he repairs I pay him.Then I'd give him a tip for helping out."Hope I do more business with you!"I say.

Whilst wandering in the wilds, your character comes across a small hut, which looks abandoned. Inside it you see a chest containing a few iron bars, and a golden sword. How would your character respond?:

Hungry and lost in the wilderness, you stumble across a small trading camp nestled among the forest, they greet you you in the common tongue, how do you respond?I'd stop and become friends with them."I owe you one, guys.If you ever need anything,Ask me."Then I'd say goodbye go on my way after asking for directions.

You hear word that bandits occupy the road outside the town in which you have been staying. The town guard have gathered, and are asking for assistance to help eliminate them. The leader of the party is offering a reward for any who offer their support. How does your character act on this information?:I join the group and say "Sure,of course I'll help out.We want everyone to be safe!I go with them.So first we surround the band it.We ask him to surrender.If he doesn't I jump out of a tree and handcuff him.I give the reward for someone who needs it most.(I would!)

Anything else you would like to say?:Nope,except that I hope to see you guys in LOTC!BYE!

[ShadowoKing 86]

Denied

-Metagaming definition you gave is wrong

-Can you go in more detail on what power-emoting, add example.

-For bio it got alot of pauses, and needs to be more detailed. Since your character is old how was getting to Asulon was like and adventure there since we only been there for like 49.

-theres no link or image of skin.

-Your answers for open response questions needs movements from your character and make them feel realistic. Add flaws e.g.

Please wait 24 hours to re-apply.

[ShadowoKing 86]

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