Application Submission

[ryanp329 0]

Out-Of-Character

Minecraft Account Name:

ryanp329

How old are you?:

16

Time-Zone/Country of Residence:

East Coast United States

Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?:

Yes

Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself:

I am a trustworthy, hardworking individual who will help and completely obey my superiors.

How much time could you be on the server weekly?:

About 30-40 hours.

What do you know about Roleplaying? Give a definition of what it means to you:

Roleplaying is where you get to be someone that you are not, and can be perhaps similar or the opposite of yourself. It is a second life.

What experience have you had in Roleplaying, if any?:

I used to roleplay on another server, and I roleplay on Red Dead Redemption.

In your own Words, define what the act of Meta-Gaming is:

Using knowledge in real life to help you in-game.

In your own Words, define what the act of Power-Emoting is:

When you use words to describe actions?

What do you expect this server will be like?:

Hopefully, it will be like a medieval role play where you can have towns, castles, and farms.

What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?:

I currently play on a server called RLminecraft. I haven't left it.

Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?:

Yes.

Do you promise to abide by said rules, and laws? This includes the Server, Forum, and Teamspeak set Rules:

Yes.

How did you hear about us?:

I saw you on a server website, and i am very into this kind of thing.

Have you previously made an Application? If so could you link us to your last Application?:

No, I haven't made a previous application.

In-Character:

Character Name:

Gorobrine

What Race are you? (You may only be Human, Orc, Elf or Dwarf!) :

Elf

What Sub-Race are you? (note, you aren’t required to have a sub-race):

Biography (Please make this at least 2 paragraphs long. This must include the history of your character and his life as well as age, appearance and personality, etc.):

My mother died when i was 4, when a band of raiders burned down our house and stole our livestock. I havent seen my father in 10 years, as he left as soon as i was able to take care of myself to hunt the savages that ruined his life. He never had a keen liking for me. I am currently 22 years old, have dark skin, blue eyes, and a strong, fit body. I am mostly a kind soul, but when somebody gets on my bad side they need to worry.

I am currently searching for a new home, as the barn i was living in was torn down after there was a silverfish infestation. I have experience as both a hunter and a farmer. My main goal in life is to become the father that my father never was.

What are your Character's ambitions?:

To become a better father than his father.

What is your character’s favorite tool? (sword, pickaxe, shovel, etc):

The bow.

What is one of your Character's most skilled talents?

He is great with a bow.

A screenshot of your skin (must be in proper format, if you do not know how to acquire one, copy and paste this link into your browser: ( http://tinyurl.com/Lotcscreenshot ):

Other Information about your Character:

none

Open-Response-Questions

Each and every question must be answered with a minimum of a single full paragraph and entirely in RP.

Whilst traveling from the Cloud Temple you see a small halfling, being harassed by two armed warriors. They appear to be trying to steal money from him, how does your character respond?I have an entire heart filled with hatred towards these two guards. I loathe people that prey on the weak, just as my father did to me. I pull out my bow and shoot a single arrow into the ground at their feet. They look up as I draw another arrow into my bowstring. I tell them to walk away, and they do. I help the halfling up and escort them back home.

Your character wanders into Alras, and comes across a small stall, behind which a well dressed man is standing. He’s offering various wares, the merchant turns to you and says in a posh accent " 'ello there, what can I do you for today?" What is your character response?

Hello, i would like to purchase 12 arrows and a hoe. Do you or another salesman nearby have these items?

Whilst wandering in the wilds, your character comes across a small hut, which looks abandoned. Inside it you see a chest containing a few iron bars, and a golden sword. How would your character respond?:Leave the chest, as it doesn't belong to me.

Hungry and lost in the wilderness, you stumble across a small trading camp nestled among the forest, they greet you you in the common tongue, how do you respond?I have been wandering this land for days. Could you please spare a few porkchops and a place to rest for the night?

You hear word that bandits occupy the road outside the town in which you have been staying. The town guard have gathered, and are asking for assistance to help eliminate them. The leader of the party is offering a reward for any who offer their support. How does your character act on this information?:I am glad that I have this opportunity to rid the world of this scum.

Anything else you would like to say?:

none

[ShadowoKing 86]

-Power-emoting definition is wrong

-Bio could be longer, add more detail on past and why does he want to follow this path. Does and some form of link to our lore like places.

-Few answers for open response questions need more depth, add speeches to them and few need more stuff. Also first not feel total realistic.

Please wait 24 hours to re-apply

[ShadowoKing 86]

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