[Orc Application] Albattal's Legit Server Application

[Battal 2]

Out-Of-Character

Minecraft Account Name:

Albattal

How old are you?:

11

Time-Zone/Country of Residence:

Pacific Time

Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?:

Yes, i was very close to winning a spelling bee, and i get A's in grammar, and punctuation

Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself:

I am a very mature, but young boy, to be honest, i am addicted to my computer, and hoping to becoming addicted to this server. I am very helpful if anyone, for some reason needs help. I am very smart to.

How much time could you be on the server weekly?:

As i said, i am addicted to my computer, so i can play a lot, so i can rougly play about 36 hours a week.

What do you know about Roleplaying? Give a definition of what it means to you:

I love Roleplaying for the fact, that everything is your choice, you wanna go raid that base or not? it's all your choice, you go where you want, you do what you want, and that's what makes it enjoyable, also for the fact, it is always a challenge, you can't expect to go fight some enemies, without a challenge.

What experience have you had in Roleplaying, if any?:

I have had a great experience in Roleplaying games, I used to play a famous game named, World of Warcraft, I was a level 78 Orc Hunter, so i leveled up pretty high in that game, and i know the basics, fighting tactics, appearance, homeland, etc. so i am sure, it won't be the easiest thing in the world once my app is accepted on the server but i at least have an experience

In your own Words, define what the act of Meta-Gaming is:

Meta-Gaming, is using your real life smarts to survive in a game, for example using math to overcome enemies is Meta-Gaming.

In your own Words, define what the act of Power-Emoting is:

Power-Emoting is an unfair way of putting someone's actions on someone else, for example Player 1 kills Player 2, Player 1 hits Player 2, Player 1 steals a amount of something from Player 2,

What do you expect this server will be like?:

I expect there will obviously be people who are not helpful and annoying, but based on what I have seen as a wandering soul, everyone has been extremely helpful, so I am sure the majority of the people will be helpful, or at least not bug me.

What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?:

SavageRealms Roleplaying server

This server seemed great at the beginning, but when I figured out about this one, oh my gosh, the server was practically garbage to me!

Why do i hate SavageRealms compared to this one, that's not even a question: No races, Storyline, Helpful People, Challenge, and it was rushed, so I completely hate that server, and I am definetly looking forward to this wonderful server

Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?:

Yes, of course.

Do you promise to abide by said rules, and laws? This includes the Server, Forum, and Teamspeak set Rules:

Yes, I do.

How did you hear about us?:

A famous youtuber name "Petri Da Gamer Nerd" introduced me to it, I was amazed to see and hear about how amazingly hard everything is worked on it, he gave such positive terms for this server, and i totally agree with him

Have you previously made an Application? If so could you link us to your last Application?:

No, I haven't

In-Character:

Character Name:

Drek'Thar Fulten

What Race are you? (You may only be Human, Orc, Elf or Dwarf!) :

Orc

What Sub-Race are you? (note, you aren’t required to have a sub-race):

I do not wish to have a sub race

Biography (Please make this at least 2 paragraphs long. This must include the history of your character and his life as well as age, appearance and personality, etc.):

Drek'Thar Fulten, unlike other fierce warriors, comes from a rich family, by the name of the Fultens Drek'Thar's Father Erffrumndalo'sfratee (Yeah it is very long) was a rich tradesman, but Drek'Thar's whole family had to much guards, so they didn't practice fighting at all, so they were extremely weak, and Drek'Thar, was the toughest out of all of them, the oddball of the family, so he was ashamed, he reported right to his father, stating that they must practice the arts of fighting, his father disagreed to everything, and Drek'Thar didn't want to be put in a weak family, so he challenged his father to see who is stronger, Drek'Thar defeated his father, but did not kill him, for the fact he wanted to spare his life, his father was filled with anger, and was a sore loser, so he payed the Government enough money to banish him for what he has done, Drek'Thar, then set a journey, for himself.

Drek'Thar Fulten, was searching for a trainor, to teach him how to fight for he was still weak, he never found one. so after a year he gave hope and begged to his father for mercy of return, but his father was disgraced of him and said no. but one day Drek'Thar was strolling down a walk, in a carriage, and a courier came, the courier gave him a message, not knowing what anything means, the courier only said "Here you go", and left. Drek'Thar then stopped the carriage and read the message, it stated "I KNOW COMPLETELY, SHAME, AND BLOOD REVEALS THE TRUTH" Drek'Thar, didn't know what to say, he didn't understand what the message could possibly be for. he thought since a courier traveled miles, on foot, it must be important.

Years and years later, Drek'Thar thought there was no more hope in life, he had no money, food, or water, and he was running out of energy, Drek'Thar, one day went on his bed, and cut himself slowly, committing suicide, he looked down, and a blood drop went on the note, it then faded away, and revealed new words, he then thought of the notes words: 'SHAME AND BLOOD REVEALS THE TRUTH' and he thought of his fight against his father, for how shameful it was fighting, and winning against him, so he sliced the note in half, and then the note magically shined in light, he put the two pieces together, and it said "I am your trainor, go to the sacred cave, located under your bed", he never new of this cave, he lifted up his bed, and something amazing was under.

It was a cave, filled with Gold and Riches Drek'Thar ran towards all the riches, but they would dissappear, he then hear footsteps and followed it he reached a bearded Orc, he asked if he was the one who sent the message, the Orc nodded, and sat down, Drek'Thar asked for his name, the Orc said: "Bolgosh, Bolgosh Intfar". Drek'Thar asked, are you going to be my trainor, Bolgosh nodded. Drek'Thar asked Bolgosh, why are you doing this for free, and treating me so well, Bolgosh said, "I am a sinner, I do sins, that are not good, but I do it for a good cause." Drek'Thar: "What does that explain"? Bolgosh: "I will tell the future, defying the laws that the divines can only do, and i told the future for you, and deep in your future, you are a fierce warrior, that will destroy those who oppose greatness, and defy balance. I, will train you." Drek'Thar: "What makes you think you're the rightful one that should train me"? Bolgosh: "Because you possessed an item i have been searching for years!"

Drek'Thar was amazed, Drek'Thar's Thoughts: "If he has been searching for this item for years, it must be valuable!" Drek'Thar: "What is it? what's the item". Bolgosh: "The Sacred Knife of Erffrumndalo'sfratee". Drek'Thar: T-t-that's my fathers! Bolgosh: Incredible! bu- oh no, let me tell the fortune, things are looking terrible. Bolgosh inspects the orb of fortune. It displays: Erffrumndalo'sfratee: "It is time, we do our plans". Drek'Thar's Mother Tardo: "Yes, we have to take over Asulon, we are the most worthy, and we will trea- the orb, suddenly breaks Bolgosh: "What the"? Drek'Thar: "What hap- Oh my gosh!" Bolgosh: This is it! this is the time where they start there plans to destroying this world! Drek'Thar: But didn't you tell the FUTURE? not the present"!? Bolgosh: They new I was fortune telling, and they destroyed my orb"! Drek'Thar: "I now know my destiny" Bolgosh: "DESTINY ISN'T IMPORTANT RIGHT NOW"! Drek'Thar: "I have to kill my family".

Drek'Thar: "Can't you tell the future with your mind"? Bolgosh: "Yes, but it is rough readings. Wait let me try" Bolgosh sees the number 4 and the letter Y and puts it together it is 4Y. Bolgosh: "I got the number and letter 4Y"? Drek'Thar: "Don't you know all of this, find out the riddle stuff"!? Bolgosh: "Not this one. Well looks like I must train you know". Drek'Thar: While we're being attacked!? non-sense"! Bolgosh: "Your future says you will have the Sacred Knife, you don't have it yet, and not until a long time, you have lots of time". Drek'Thar: That's true"!

3 Years later Drek'Thar mastered the arts of the fighting man from Bolgosh. That day was the day, him and his family fight face to face. hours later at about 6:25 o'clock the family and him face eachother, Drek'Thar slays them all and get's the Sacred Knife. Afterwards there is a bloody war between who was with the family, and who wanted Asulon protected.

1 Year later... Asulon set a assembly for Drek'Thar, Drek'Thar told them the whole story and in front of everyone gave Bolgosh the Sacred Knife, Bolgosh: "You saved the world, it is you're honor" Drek'Thar: "Don't you realize, i couldn't have done it without you, AND ALL OF YOU BRAVE SOLDIERS! THANK YOU"!

THE END!

PRESENT DAY AGE: 29

PERSONALITY: TOUGH, ROUGH, MEAN, AND ALL ABOUT HONOR

APPEARANCE: VERY DARK SKIN FOR HE WENT OUTSIDE ALOT

What are your Character's ambitions?:

My character's ambitions are to keep the realm of Asulon safe

What is your character’s favorite tool? (sword, pickaxe, shovel, etc):

Drek'Thar mastered the fighting man, and wishes to use it more, so it is the sword.

What is one of your Character's most skilled talents?

My character's most skilled talent besides swords, is oddly lying, he is a great liar.

A screenshot of your skin (must be in proper format, if you do not know how to acquire one, copy and paste this link into your browser: ( http://tinyurl.com/Lotcscreenshot ):

http://imgur.com/EC7QB

Other Information about your Character:

He may seem mean out of war, but in war, he is the most honorful caring person ever

Open-Response-Questions

Each and every question must be answered with a minimum of a single full paragraph and entirely in RP.

Whilst traveling from the Cloud Temple you see a small halfling, being harassed by two armed warriors. They appear to be trying to steal money from him, how does your character respond?

Drek'Thar would run there as quick as he could, then he would get the warriors attention, he'd throw one of his sword at the halfing so it can grab it, then the halfling would come and hit one of the warriors from behind and kill him, then they will both be versing one of the warriors, so the warrior would probably run away, the halfling would try to throw his sword at him and probably miss, the Drek'Thar would run as quick as he can, find a high elevation, and jump in front of the warrior, and thrust him in the face.

Your character wanders into Alras, and comes across a small stall, behind which a well dressed man is standing. He’s offering various wares, the merchant turns to you and says in a posh accent " 'ello there, what can I do you for today?" What is your character response?

I would say: Drek'Thar would say "I didn't ask you anything, but how can i help you? if you need any thing i can fight off, i'll gladly do it, but for something, like any various wares, would be good." Then the man would probably shake his head, so Drek'Thar would try to bargain for any items from him, so Drek'Thar can buy some more fighting equipment for when I need to fight.

Whilst wandering in the wilds, your character comes across a small hut, which looks abandoned. Inside it you see a chest containing a few iron bars, and a golden sword. How would your character respond?:

I'd take a little portion of it, for fighting needs, then I will try to find out who the rest belongs to, but if no one answers by a week, i will take the loot. once i take the loot, i would keep the Golden Sword, for various fighting occasions, then sell the other bars, for some fighting equipment.

Hungry and lost in the wilderness, you stumble across a small trading camp nestled among the forest, they greet you you in the common tongue, how do you respond?

Drek'Thar will ask for some goods for them to spare, and then leave. and if one day Drek'Thar has the ability, he will help the camp as much as he can. Then they will gladly give Drek'Thar more items to fight more, but Drek'Thar would only use those items for helping them, then give it back, to stay even.

You hear word that bandits occupy the road outside the town in which you have been staying. The town guard have gathered, and are asking for assistance to help eliminate them. The leader of the party is offering a reward for any who offer their support. How does your character act on this information?:

Drek'Thar would honorfully fight for the town, to help, he definetly wouldn't run away like a coward, that will only bring Drek'Thar into more trouble. For he will lose all his honor as a fighting man, and people will have a amount of less respect for him. All of Drek'Thar's reputation will forever be ruined, and we know how tragic that is for a Orc

Anything else you would like to say?:

I think i explained enough, i really appreciate the fact you read this long thing i was very dedicated to being accepted for THANK YOU! :D

[Anore 2015]

In your bio, though long and with detail which was really enjoyable to read some of these things are not allowed. Such as:

-Your character would not have been allowed to have saved the world before arriving in Asulon, for that event was never in the Lore of the server.

Some Tips for when you re-apply and eventually get accepted.

-When using dialogue for your orc, use the Orcish language. You do not want to be considered white-wash.

-In your bio, include things that relate your character's history to the World of Asulon/Aegis, such as events and locations.

You may Re-apply in 24 hours.

Good luck. And again, sorry you had to wait so long for your app to be reviewed

[Anore 2015]

Moved to Denied Forum