Tnoy23S 1St Application After 5 Months

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Out-Of-Character

Minecraft Account Name:

tnoy23

How old are you?:

13

Time-Zone/Country of Residence:

U.S. PST

Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?:

somewhat. my grammar will be ABSOLUTELY HORRIBLE, but youll be able to tell what im saying. (go a little easy on me in that area, i have really bad grammar.)

Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself:

i honestly dont feel comfortable answering this. ill make myself sound WAY better than i really am.

How much time could you be on the server weekly?:

maybe 10-15 hours, but easily ALOT more if i like it, bordering 30 hours.

What do you know about Roleplaying? Give a definition of what it means to you:

roleplaying is acting like its actually happening in real life. not being able to see through walls, not knowing instantly if your house being robbed, ect.

What experience have you had in Roleplaying, if any?:

somewhat. ive played several terraraia rp servers, but i will easily learn very quickly.

In your own Words, define what the act of Meta-Gaming is:

knowing crap you shouldn't know. such as being able to see someones nameplate through a wall and knowing that they are there..

In your own Words, define what the act of Power-Emoting is:

power-emoting, or power-gaming, is force the results of an action. its basically doing an attack at someone and not giving them a chance to do anything back..

What do you expect this server will be like?:

honestly, i have NO IDEA. whenever i expect something its always the exact opposite.

What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?:

i have not played on any other minecraft rp servers.

Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?:yes.

Do you promise to abide by said rules, and laws? This includes the Server, Forum, and Teamspeak set Rules:yes.

How did you hear about us?:planet minecraft

Have you previously made an Application? If so could you link us to your last Application?:Yes i did, but it was 4 or 5 months ago :/

In-Character:

Character Name:

iskast

What Race are you? (You may only be Human, Orc, Elf or Dwarf!) :

Human

What Sub-Race are you? (note, you aren’t required to have a sub-race):

N/A

Biography (Please make this at least 2 paragraphs long. This must include the history of your character and his life as well as age, appearance and personality, etc.

what? you want to know my life story? BAH! begone! i will not share it with the likes of you!

are you still here? fine ill tell you my story. i was born 22 years ago, to a very poor family. the only food we ever saw was from our tiny 3x3 farm. my parents died 8 years ago from hunger. i was left alone to live off my small plot of land.

you would think it would be easy to live off 3x3 farm with only on person. but it only got harder. my land was ransacked by bandits, and i was forced to flee as they burnt it down.

i was forced to wander for months. i lived off of almost purely raw mushrooms. i nearly died many times to the poisonous red mushrooms. i should have been killed many time by them, but i didnt. i am more than lucky for that.i managed to find the old plot and rebuild it, and that is where i currently reside.

there you happy now? no? to bad! now get, i have a farm to tend to.

What is your character’s favorite tool? (sword, pickaxe, shovel, etc):

a hoe.

A screenshot of your skin (must be in proper format, if you do not know how to acquire one, copy and paste this link into your browser: http://www.planetminecraft.com/skin/medieval-peasant-435270/

Other Information about your Character:

iskast has no battle training, from an academy or self-taught, so he will be very clumsy in battle. he is also very generous with his more than limited funds.

Open-Response-Questions

Each and every question must be answered with a minimum of a single full paragraph and entirely in RP.

Whilst traveling from the Cloud Temple you see a small halfling, being harassed by two armed warriors. They appear to be trying to steal money from him, how does your character respond?

as im walking to the cloud temple i see a small halfling being harassed and possibly being robbed by two armed warriors. i run up to them, and say "why are you harassing him?" they reply "he owes us money, and he refuses to pay. why do you care?" i reply "how much does he owe you?" they reply "40 minas." i reply "ill give you 50 to pay off his debt." they look at each other and nod. i give them the money and walk away. the halfling say "thank you! how could i ever repay you?" i reply "dont. here, have some bread to ease your nerves." i hand him a loaf of bread and continue my journey.

Your character wanders into Alras, and comes across a small stall, behind which a well dressed man is standing. He’s offering various wares, the merchant turns to you and says in a posh accent " 'ello there, what can I do you for today?" What is your character response?

I reply, "would you maybe have any use for these?" i ask and pull several loaves of bread out of my pack. he replys "yes.i could buy these for 1 minas each." i reply "no. atleast 3 each." the merchant says "lets meet in the middle. 2 minas each." i accept his offer, and walk out of the market.

Whilst wandering in the wilds, your character comes across a small hut, which looks abandoned. Inside it you see a chest containing a few iron bars, and a golden sword. How would your character respond?:

i marvel at the vast amount of gold in the sword, knowing it must be worth hundreds of minas, more than enough to get him out of this poverty hes been stuck in for so long. just as im about to walk out and sell it in the market, i wait and ask myself if it would be a good idea to take it, even if the hut was abandoned. i decide not to, and i leave everything in the chest.

Hungry and lost in the wilderness, you stumble across a small trading camp nestled among the forest, they greet you you in the common tongue, how do you respond?

i say "please...help me... i haven't eaten in days...here. ill take as much food as this can buy i say, and hand me of them 10 minas. they hurry into a tent, and come back out with 2 cooked porkchops and a loave of bread. i eat them quickly, happy to have something to eat after all this time out here. i ask them which direction the holy oren empire is. they direct me towards it, and i leave hoping not to get attacked by bandits on my way there.

You hear word that bandits occupy the road outside the town in which you have been staying. The town guard have gathered, and are asking for assistance to help eliminate them. The leader of the party is offering a reward for any who offer their support. How does your character act on this information?:

I tell him "i have no way to help you but to simply give you a few loaves of bread for when you get back. i do not want a reward though, i only want to help eliminate them. here take these few loaves of bread, im sure it will help when you return to your homes." the leader thanks me, and i watch as they head out. once they return victorious, i ask them of the battle. he says in a quiet voice "dont tell anyone, but we lost. only reason im telling you is because the bread you gave us will help us recover." i sigh dissapointingly, and go on my way.

Anything else you would like to say?

i hope im accepted, this server looks awesome

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Under Review

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Please wait 24 hours before re-applying or face instant Denial

Reason:

Your grammar was poor. To be on this server you NEED good grammar.

Your Meta-Gaming / Power-Emoting definitions are slightly wrong.

Your biography is too short. Maybe you should expand on the story go into detail on a major event in your characters life.

Your in-character questions are too short. You need to give reasons for your answers.

Your ORQ's are too short. Set them out like role play, by using speech with actions. This is will help you learn how to role play.

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