Applying To Be A Member.

[Corky789 0]

Out-Of-Character Andrew

Minecraft Account Name: Corky789

How old are you?: 13

Time-Zone/Country of Residence: Ireland

Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?: Yes I grew up speaking English.

Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself: Mildly sporty, fun to be around and likes to have a good laugh.

How much time could you be on the server weekly?: Roughly 14 hours a week.

What do you know about Roleplaying? Give a definition of what it means to you: Acting as a character and taking on the character’s personality.

What experience have you had in Roleplaying, if any?: I played on one before but you could build on that one…

In your own Words, define what the act of Meta-Gaming is: No idea.

In your own Words, define what the act of Power-Emoting is: No idea.

In your own Words, define what Out of Character (OOC) is: Say when you start role playing and when your done you start acting normally again.

In your own Words, define what In Character (IC) is: When you are roleplaying as someone/something.

What do you expect this server will be like?: Good fun and good natured roleplaying.

What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?: I have played on many servers and I have not left many yet.

Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?: Yes.

Do you promise to abide by said rules, and laws? This includes the Server, Forum, and Teamspeak set Rules: Yes.

How did you hear about us?: From a friend.

Have you previously made an Application? If so could you link us to your last Application?: No this is my first App.

In-Character:

Character Name: Odin

What Race are you? (You may only be Human, Orc, Elf or Dwarf!) : Dwarf

What Sub-Race are you? (note, you aren’t required to have a sub-race): Mountain Dwarf

Biography (Please make this at least 2 paragraphs long. This must include the history of your character and his life as well as age, appearance and personality, etc.): As a dwarf whos parents died in a mining accident in an abandoned mineshaft, Odin grew up in a hard life. He had a tendency to tinker with things and did much things for fun. As he was growing up he realised what he wanted to do in life… He did not want to be stuck down some dark dank mine like others of his kind, he wanted to be a guard and guard the mighty palaces of the dwarves.

Now In his 20s he has completed training as a guard and is now guarding the lands of the empire of Paragon Kjell Ireheart.

What are your Character's ambitions?: To become the fiercest dwarf warrior known in all of Asulon!

What is your character’s favorite tool? (sword, pickaxe, shovel, etc): Sword.

What is one of your Character's most skilled talents? His ability in combat and his fierce berserk-bloodlust rage.

A screenshot of your skin (must be in proper format, if you do not know how to acquire one, copy and paste this link into your browser: ( http://tinyurl.com/Lotcscreenshot ):

Other Information about your Character: I am of creeper-dwarf origin after one of my ancestors had a night of drinking… and lets just say beer makes anything beautiful….

Open-Response-Questions

Each and every question must be answered with a minimum of a single full paragraph and entirely in RP.

Whilst traveling from the Cloud Temple you see a small halfling, being harassed by two armed warriors. They appear to be trying to steal money from him, how does your character respond? Being a guard I naturally run over and helps the boy by brawling with the warriors. Odin is a bit of a “do things and ask questions later”

Your character wanders into Alras, and comes across a small stall, behind which a well dressed man is standing. He’s offering various wares, the merchant turns to you and says in a posh accent " 'ello there, what can I do you for today?" What is your character response? A’right bi, You sellin’ some iron or equipment lad?

Whilst wandering in the wilds, your character comes across a small hut, which looks abandoned. Inside it you see a chest containing a few iron bars, and a golden sword. How would your character respond?: “Hmmmmm I suppose if it is abandoned… No one would mind if I “borrowed” some things”…

Hungry and lost in the wilderness, you stumble across a small trading camp nestled among the forest, they greet you in the common tongue, how do you respond? I would try communicate with sign language and if that didn’t work continue on my travels with a polite farewell in my native tongue.

You hear word that bandits occupy the road outside the town in which you have been staying. The town guard have gathered, and are asking for assistance to help eliminate them. The leader of the party is offering a reward for any who offer their support. How does your character act on this information?: I immediately take up arms and go to help the town guards to eliminate the pesky bandits.

Anything else you would like to say?: Please let me be a member this is an awesome server that I would love to play on and I would probably spend more than 14 hours a week if I was a member.

[ShadowoKing 86]

-Need definitions for metagaming and power-emoting, do some research. No coping.

-Wrong definition for OOC.

-Definition for IC need more explaining, not fully explained on what it means.

-Bio could be longer, go on more detail on his life on what you explained. Also recommend adding form of link to our lore mostly places would help also current information.

-No link for skin

-Answers for open response questions is also need of more detail add more speeches/movements. Make it look professional and good.

Make this follow changes and may get in. Please wait 24 hours to re-apply, good luck.

[ShadowoKing 86]

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