Doughnuts

[DOUGHNUTS 0]

Out-Of-Character

Minecraft Account Name:XxshadowcookiexX

How old are you?:14

Time-Zone/Country of Residence:U.S.A nc

Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?:Yes

Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself:funny Smart andlucky

How much time could you be on the server weekly?:4 days(96 hours)

What do you know about Roleplaying? Give a definition of what it means to you:a fun game i play with my friends

What experience have you had in Roleplaying, if any?:larp

In your own Words, define what the act of Meta-Gaming is:A common term used in Role-Playing game that tells real life details or something that goes beyond the limits or environment set by the game.

Often frowned apon in Role-Playing.

In your own Words, define what the act of Power-Emoting is:the abuse of this system when players use emotes to describe an action that takes away the ability of another player to respond or prevent it.

What do you expect this server will be like?:super fun and cool a good role playing experience

What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?:none

Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?:yes

Do you promise to abide by said rules, and laws? This includes the Server, Forum, and Team speak set Rules:yes

How did you hear about us?:server surfing

Have you previously made an Application? If so could you link us to your last Application?:no

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In-Character:

Character Name:Dustanz winterloom

What Race are you? (You may only be Human, Orc, Elf or Dwarf!) :Elf

What Sub-Race are you? (note, you aren’t required to have a sub-race):none

Biography (Please make this at least 2 paragraphs long. This must include the history of your character and his life as well as age, appearance and personality, etc.):my white haired blue eyed elf. 5 feet tall. favorite color orange funny dude fun to hang around. 14 years old My Father died in an unfortunate smelting accident when i was 7 my mom was kidnapped by a Dwarf 2 years later from that point i've been on my own ever since

What are your Character's ambitions?:My goal is to eater find my mom or kill the person who killed her.

What is your character’s favorite tool? (sword, pickaxe, shovel, etc):bow &arrow

What is one of your Character's most skilled talents?spells and archery

A screenshot of your skin (must be in proper format, if you do not know how to acquire one, copy and paste this link into your browser: ( http://tinyurl.com/Lotcscreenshot ):http://www.planetmin...olas-greenleaf/

Other Information about your Character:none

Open-Response-Questions

Each and every question must be answered with a minimum of a single full paragraph and entirely in RP.

Whilst traveling from the Cloud Temple you see a small halfling, being harassed by two armed warriors. They appear to be trying to steal money from him, how does your character respond?ask wats going on if bad help the halfling if good take halfling to jail

Your character wanders into Alras, and comes across a small stall, behind which a well dressed man is standing. He’s offering various wares, the merchant turns to you and says in a posh accent " 'ello there, what can I do you for today?" What is your character response?mey i see what wares you have for sale

Whilst wandering in the wilds, your character comes across a small hut, which looks abandoned. Inside it you see a chest containing a few iron bars, and a golden sword. How would your character respond?:see if anyones there if not wait for an owner who will i hope reward me with a iron bar for not taking anything.

Hungry and lost in the wilderness, you stumble across a small trading camp nestled among the forest, they greet you you in the common tongue, how do you respond? hello sir/ma'm do you have any spare food.

You hear word that bandits occupy the road outside the town in which you have been staying. The town guard have gathered, and are asking for assistance to help eliminate them. The leader of the party is offering a reward for any who offer their support. How does your character act on this information?:help the guards fight the bandits

Anything else you would like to say?:no

[ShadowoKing 86]

Have to say this application was poorly made, but you can make improvements. Here is the list of these:

-Roleplaying definition is wrong, not explained much.

-Metagaming definition looks like you copied it from somewhere, does not explain much of what it means.

-For previously made application part, should of sounded around that you did make one, cannot remember or have no link to it. Be alot easiler.

-Bio needs to be longer, more history that shaped your character and need some form of link to our lore like places. Ambitions need spelling/grammer check. For skilled talents, you said spells. Sadly cannot, have to learn these IG.

-Skin link broken

-Answers for open response questions need to be more longer, throw in more speeches and movements to make sense to whats going on.

-Oh missed two new questions, look at the application topic to see the changes.

Do not give up, please wait 24 hours to re-apply.

[ShadowoKing 86]

Moved to Denied Forum