My Lotc Application

[Commando41999 0]

Out-Of-CharacterMinecraft Account Name:Commando41999.

How old are you?:13.

Time-Zone/Country of Residence:EST/USA.

Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?:Yes.

Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself:Someone who can be friendly but, still stand up for them self.

How much time could you be on the server weekly?:3days and 12 hours.

What do you know about Roleplaying? Give a definition of what it means to you:Roleplaying is playing out a role that is not your self.

What experience have you had in Roleplaying, if any?:I've just roleplayed with friends for fun but i want to take roleplaying to another level.

In your own Words, define what the act of Meta-Gaming is:Using outside knowledge or out of character knowledge and use it in character.

In your own Words, define what the act of Power-Emoting is:When you emote an action that others cannot react to it.

In your own Words, define what Out of Character (OOC) is:When you are not in character and not rolelaying.

In your own Words, define what In Character (IC) is:When you are in character and playing out their role.

What do you expect this server will be like?:I expect that the sever will be like a whole new world with cool new people to meet and roleplay with and have a lot of great scenery.

What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?:I have not played on any roleplaying servers before.

Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?:Yes.

Do you promise to abide by said rules, and laws? This includes the Server, Forum, and Teamspeak set Rules:Yes.

How did you hear about us?:2 of my friends told me about it and talk about the server all the time.

Have you previously made an Application? If so could you link us to your last Application?:No.

In-Character:Character Name:Dinathor Moringtin.

What Race are you? (You may only be Human, Orc, Elf or Dwarf!) :Elf.

What Sub-Race are you? (note, you aren’t required to have a sub-race):Wood Elf

Biography (Please make this at least 2 paragraphs long. This must include the history of your character and his life as well as age, appearance and personality, etc.): Dinathor Mornington was born a Woold Elf. His father was a family man who was a lumberjack and supplied the near by town with their main wood supply he would also go off and get supplies for Dinathor's house. Dinathor's mother was a person who was kind caring and loving she owned and worked her own farm. She also gathers berries and mushrooms of sorts. Dinathor helped her mother tend to the farm and gather the plants and vegetation that was required to his mother. Dinathor as a 13 year old was about 5feet 4inches of height. His skin color was a light brown in the winter and dark brown in the summer. One day a band of bandits and thugs tried to raid the their house of their supplies and valuables. Dinathor and his mother escaped out the back door while his father stood up to the bandits and thieves trying to hold them off as long as possible. DInathor and his mother ran to the village where they live today among different sub-races of elves.

Today Dinathor use to own a smithy . He one day hopes to go back and find his old home he grew up in. He trains himself with a sword to be able to defend to his town he lives in, his home and his mother like his father once did for him. Dinathor fears to go back to his home because of one reason and one reason only, to find out the fate of his father. Dinathor is 6feet 1inch tall and 64 years of age.

What are your Character's ambitions?:To discover his old house and the fate of his father.

What is your character’s favorite tool? (sword, pickaxe, shovel, etc):Sword.

What is one of your Character's most skilled talents?Sword fighting.

A screenshot of your skin (must be in proper format, if you do not know how to acquire one, copy and paste this link into your browser: ( http://tinyurl.com/Lotcscreenshot ):

Other Information about your Character:Is friendly to others as long as the other person is the same to him.

Open-Response-QuestionsEach and every question must be answered with a minimum of a single full paragraph and entirely in RP.Whilst traveling from the Cloud Temple you see a small halfling, being harassed by two armed warriors. They appear to be trying to steal money from him, how does your character respond?Dinathor walks up to the halfling and helps him up while doing that he gets struck from the back with a mindjolting kick and Dinathor falls to the ground. The warriors drag the halfling away and Dinathor gets up and draws his sword. He strikes one of the warriors in the forearm with the middle of his sword and the halfling gets away and runs for his life. Dinathor runs away with the halfling as the warriors chase them through the woods until they lose their breath and give up.

Your character wanders into Alras, and comes across a small stall, behind which a well dressed man is standing. He’s offering various wares, the merchant turns to you and says in a posh accent " 'ello there, what can I do you for today?" What is your character response?Dinathor asks for directions to the nearest blacksmith. The salesman tells him the direstons and Dinathor says "Thank you" and walks away.

Whilst wandering in the wilds, your character comes across a small hut, which looks abandoned. Inside it you see a chest containing a few iron bars, and a golden sword. How would your character respond?:Dinathor approaches the hut cautiously.He gets inside and looks around for traps and when its clear he takes everything in the chest and walks out with the loot.

Hungry and lost in the wilderness, you stumble across a small trading camp nestled among the forest, they greet you you in the common tongue, how do you respond?Dinathor accepts their offer and comes in. Dinathor asks if they could spare a peice of bread for him. The traders spare him a peice of bread and he thanks them gracefully.

You hear word that bandits occupy the road outside the town in which you have been staying. The town guard have gathered, and are asking for assistance to help eliminate them. The leader of the party is offering a reward for any who offer their support. How does your character act on this information?:Dinathor gives support to the party and the party goes to where the bandits are. The bandits see the party coming and try to attack them. Dinathor gets struck in the leg by a dagger and falls to his knees but still manages to stab him in the stomach and the bandit dies. The other bandits in disbeliefe run away and Dinathor recieves medical help back in the town.

Anything else you would like to say?:No.

[ShadowoKing 86]

-Your application was hard to read, there was hardly any spaces and cannot see difference between question and answers. Try to make application more better so can read it.

-Bio needs some form of link to our lore like places.

-Few answers in open response questions need speeches.

This is all so far that you need to improve, was hard to read. Please make following changes and wait 24 hours to re-apply.

[ShadowoKing 86]

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