2Nd Application

[Valor777 22]

Out-Of-Character

Minecraft Account Name:

valor777

How old are you?:Time-Zone/Country of Residence:

Eastern Standard Time

Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?:

Yes

Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself:

I like to play sports and video games. I like to roleplay in all games.

How much time could you be on the server weekly?:

At least a few hours a day, probably more.

What do you know about Roleplaying? Give a definition of what it means to you:

Basically, it is when you create a character and build his personality, then you act as though you were him.

What experience have you had in Roleplaying, if any?:

I have played many other Roleplaying games and a few other roleplay minecraft servers.

In your own Words, define what the act of Meta-Gaming is:

Meta-Gaming is using out of character information to help your roleplying character in the roleplay.

In your own Words, define what the act of Power-Emoting is:

Forcing an action upon another roleplayer without giving them a say.

In your own Words, define what Out of Character (OOC) is:

When you don't act like your character and talk about real things that might not have anything to do with the roleplay.

In your own Words, define what In Character (IC) is:

When you are actually acting as if you were you roleplaying character.

What do you expect this server will be like?:

A fun, large scale roleplay.

What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?:

I've played on a few other roleplaying servers but, none of them were quite as big as this one.

Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?:

Yes!

Do you promise to abide by said rules, and laws? This includes the Server, Forum, and Teamspeak set Rules:

Yes!

How did you hear about us?:

A few different Youtube videos.

Have you previously made an Application? If so could you link us to your last Application?:

http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/64746-valor777-aplication/

In-Character:

Character Name:

Alitaus

What Race are you? (You may only be Human, Orc, Elf or Dwarf!) :

Human

What Sub-Race are you? (note, you aren’t required to have a sub-race):

None

Biography (Please make this at least 2 paragraphs long. This must include the history of your character and his life as well as age, appearance and personality, etc.):

Alitaus grew up with his sister and father. His father was a swordsman in Arethor, which is also where Alitaus grew up. Alitaus was very athletic and acrobatic. His skills helped him at his job as a messenger.

He was always aspiring to be like his father as a swordsman protecting the Holy Oren Empire. When Alitaus was 18 he wanted to quit his messenger job and become a warrior. He had finally made enough money to buy himself a blade and a suit of cloth armor. Alitaus then became a mercenary working around the Holy Oren Empire. One day he got a job from a man that needed help outside of the Holy Oren Empire. The man offered to pay a lot so Alitaus accepted. He soon discovered the man was the leader of a raiding party raiding a small trade camp. Alitaus realized that he woul have made a lot but, he may have to kill innocent people. He then refused to raid with them. The party proceeded to attack him. He was skilled with the sword but, it was seven raiders facing one of him. He was defeated and knocked unconscious. When he woked up he realized the raiders had taken him prisoner and had taken everything he had except for his cloth armor suit. During the night at the raiders camp he tried to make an escape but, was caught by three of the raiders. They charged him as he dodged the first two and rammed his bound hands into the third. He blocked one of their sword with his hands to cut his bindings, then swept the raider's legs. There was only one other man left on his feet. He charged Alitaus, but he parried and disarmed the raider. Alitaus stood there for a moment catching his breath than ran to one of the raiders that was still knocked down and found a map and a few Minas. Alitaus then fled. When he was far enough away he looked at the map. The closest place was The Sanctuary of the Cloud Temple. So the next traveler he saw he gave the Minas he found on the raider for a ride there. He then stayed with the monks until he was ready to travel again.

What are your Character's ambitions?:

To become a great swordsman and fight for the Holy Oren Empire.

What is your character’s favorite tool? (sword, pickaxe, shovel, etc):

Sword

What is one of your Character's most skilled talents?

Acrobatics and Swordsmanship

A screenshot of your skin (must be in proper format, if you do not know how to acquire one, copy and paste this link into your browser: ( http://tinyurl.com/Lotcscreenshot ):

Other Information about your Character:Open-Response-Questions

His suit that he is wearing in the skin picture is the cloth suit he wears as a mercenary for protection purposes.

Each and every question must be answered with a minimum of a single full paragraph and entirely in RP.

Whilst traveling from the Cloud Temple you see a small halfling, being harassed by two armed warriors. They appear to be trying to steal money from him, how does your character respond?

He attempts to convince the warriors to stop, but they attack Alitaus. He uses his acrobatic skill to dodge both of their attacks and attempts to scare them of with his acrobatics. The men are not scared so Alitaus gets around them and flees with the halfling.

Your character wanders into Alras, and comes across a small stall, behind which a well dressed man is standing. He’s offering various wares, the merchant turns to you and says in a posh accent " 'ello there, what can I do you for today?" What is your character response?

Alitaus asks him if he has any armor or weapon immprovements. He does and Alitaus gladly pays his price.

Whilst wandering in the wilds, your character comes across a small hut, which looks abandoned. Inside it you see a chest containing a few iron bars, and a golden sword. How would your character respond?:

Alitaus waits outside the hut for the owner. Eventually the owner comes and Alitaus asks if he could buy the golden sword. The owner of th hut says no because it is his family heirloom and he would not like to sell it. So Alitaus continues his travels in the wilds

Hungry and lost in the wilderness, you stumble across a small trading camp nestled among the forest, they greet you you in the common tongue, how do you respond?

Alitaus walks up and asks if they have food they are willing to trade and he is pointed to a stall selling food. he walks up then realizes that the food is too expensive for him to buy. Alitaus then offers to protect the camp from bandits for the day if he could have some food.

You hear word that bandits occupy the road outside the town in which you have been staying. The town guard have gathered, and are asking for assistance to help eliminate them. The leader of the party is offering a reward for any who offer their support. How does your character act on this information?:

Alitaus offers his assistance to he guards. As they gladly accept the guards lead him to the bandits. As the guards begin the attack he slips behind the bandits and attacks them from behind. After the problem is dealt with the captain of the guard thank Alitaus or the assistance.

Anything else you would like to say?:

Not other than this is my second application

[ShadowoKing 86]

This is not bad for second attempt just make these adjusts and be alot closer to get accepted depends on who is reviewing:

Make your answers for open response questions more detailed like your actions you made, only few need these. But I feel that they all need speeches for better answers and roleplay feel.

Do these, third times a charm. Make any other adjustments if you feel you could do better. Please wait 24 hours to re-apply.

[ShadowoKing 86]

Moved to Denied Forum