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MC Username:

NogtheEmu

Rp Username (be sure to include the correct prefix, look up on info thread):

Do'Razaar Khalahr

Character Skillset:

Bows, Swords and Fishing

Appearance (age, SUBRACE, gender):

21, Panther, male

Personality:

A highly cocky and determined lad, with a passion for exploration and redemption. Often too outgoing and putting himself at risk, Nog somehow always gets himself in and out of trouble sometimes on a daily basis.

Please include a short bio of your character's life:

Trapped in an underground village for most of his life, Nog escapes when he gets the first chance. His father went up to the surface many years ago and never returned or was heard of since, it was his mission to find and reunite with his father. Upon coming onto the surface, Nog finds it can be a harsh and dangerous place, much more than his village was. After the first night of camping under a tree, Nog tragically finds his fathers corpse, recognisable by his distinct cape. Nog takes his fathers cape and wears it with pride, looking to seek out all evils and defeat them with the power of his sword!

Character's ambitions:

Nog wants to do good and repel all evil from the world, he will risk his own life doing so too.Nog also wishes to discover all the world has to offer in all its glorious forms, from mountains to oceans, from cities to ruins.

_---Situational Rp Questions---_

1.

As you travel through the Karakatuan jungle, you spot a human trespassing on your nation's lands. He approaches you, obviously distressed, and asks for any food, water, or shelter that you can provide, then tells you that he has been lost in the area for days without any proper suppliesm How do you react?:

He plans to guide him to the nearest non-Kharajyr Settlement and leave him with the authority of there. But on the way takl to him, asking him about his life, how he got there and thaat sort of topic. However in the deepest part of the forest the man pulls out a knife and slashes at Nog's throat. Nog quickly falls onto his back out of rection and back rolls onto his feet again. Nog pulls a knife from out of his boot and throws it in the general direction of the attacker, piercing his heart and causing him to bleed out. Walk away like a badass.

2.

As you romp through the lands of the "apes", you come across a tavern. Inside this tavern, a Dwarf notices you and starts gawking at you, then begins to speak.

"Oi! I gots a bowl of cream for you, Kitty! Ha! I'd bet you would make a nice throw rug, wouldn't ya, ya mangy furball?!"

He continues act generally as racist as possible. What do you do?:

Big up to the small dwarf and extend claws, dragging them intimidatingly across his face and talking down to him. pierce the skin. He reacts with a attempted grab to the Nogs left ear but Nog quickly counters with an uppercut to the Dwarfs fiery red beard, taking him to the floor. The dwarf scutters along the floor to Nogs legs and attempts to grab them but Nog jumps over the blobby dwarf squabbling on the floor and presses a pressure point on the back of his neck, not doing any long harm. Carry on and order a pint of ale.

3.

One of your fellow Kharajyr and a close friend of yours comes to your dwelling in the middle of the night and begins to pound on your door. After you let him in, he confesses to killing another Kharajyr over a slice of cake. What do you do in response?

The friend tells Nog the whole story, and Nog then goes to the body that was poorly hidden in a rush of fear and adrenaline. The body was originally half buried in his back garden, and as such Nog moved it to a more reasonable place, under a tree across the settlement.Nog then cleans up the mess from the brawl as his friend is still in a deep state of shock. Later, Nog tidies up his friends appearance as he is cut and bruised and creates an alibi for his friend that they were out hunting and he got hurt in an accident.

Do you swear to follow the Tlatlanni and uphold his law, and do you swear to hold Metztli and all of her actions as sacred?

I swear.

Please include a screenshot or 3D render of your character's skin

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It isn't my place to write here, but it'd appear there are alot of "Nog"s around your application, I just thought i'd point this out as it seems like a copy and pasted application, considering the application is for a kha' named Do'Razaar Khalahr.

Thanks. ;)

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It isn't my place to write here, but it'd appear there are alot of "Nog"s around your application, I just thought i'd point this out as it seems like a copy and pasted application, considering the application is for a kha' named Do'Razaar Khalahr.

Thanks. ;)

Nah I'm just not very good at english (the subject) lol I noticed that while writing it.

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I'm afraid this is another denied.

-Make the questions and answers seperate colours, it's very hard to read and understand at the moment.

-Your bio doesn't explain why you would be living in an underground villiage, or why your father went to the surface at all. Plus Kha' would never live underground, they are jungle cats, not Mori.

-Some more length in your bio would be nice, going into great detail on why and how everything happens.

-To expell all evil from the world is a cheesy goal. Try looking for something in particular, something humble and small scale.

-You say your name is "Do'Razaar Khalahr" yet you keep calling yourself Nog.

Re-apply in 24 hours and I or another KAT member will view it again.

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Moved to the Great Library. It shall be sorted into appropriate category shortly.

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Moved to the Great Library. It shall be sorted into appropriate category shortly.

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