[Denied]Paintballz's App.

[Paint 51]

Out-Of-Character

Minecraft Account Name:

paintballz

How old are you?:

I am 16 years of age.

Time-Zone/Country of Residence:

Canada eh?

(UTC-07:00) Mountain Time (US & Canada)

Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?:

Yes I think I do, but I am human I will make mistakes from time to time.

Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself:

I am Paint but my real name is Hunter. Free feel to call me either, I'm an good guy and I try to be as calm an positive as I can be. As while being as nice as I can be to everyone.

How much time could you be on the server weekly?:

I can be on the server (depending) anywhere from 10-20 hours. Daily 1-6 hours.

What do you know about Roleplaying? Give a definition of what it means to you:

Well Role-playing is when someone takes a role, such as a character(s) and making a story with the character, and to be me its what I love to do, such as D&D (Dungeons and Dragons)or from my new found love Skyrim.

What experience have you had in Roleplaying, if any?:

Well I have been role-playing since I was a kid, me and my friends use to play a game we called

The Watchmen, we each would make an character and we would go outside and play. Like I was an Rouge and I would being stealing treasure from my friends. It was the best. But, When I found the internet when I was 11, I played on line in a chat room, it was a warriors role play (based on the books by Erin Hunter) after that I did World of Warcraft, then I tryed D&D with my friends.Now my lover Skyrim and soon Guild wars 2!

In your own Words, define what the act of Meta-Gaming is:

Meta-Gaming is when someone gives they're character(s) Information that the character did not know

like for explain someone kills your family and you are gone hunting or something and when you are gone you know it who did it even thou you are not there or saw it happen.

In your own Words, define what the act of Power-Emoting is:

Power-Emoting is when you type a action for your character to do like in WoW when you type

/dance your character dances or it can be in words like

"Jim reaches into the pocket of the merchant and takes his coin purse"

In your own Words, define what Out of Character (OOC) is:

Out of Character is when you go from In Character to talking about something that happened last night or a news story, when you are not in character.

In your own Words, define what In Character (IC) is:

An character is a person or thing for you to play.Like for explain I want to play WoW I make an character like a Orc named fluffypanda (very manly name by the way) and i play as this Character, and i try him a background, like I'm from the blood-brother tribe as the top warrior!

What do you expect this server will be like?:

Well I had walked around a little bit and only one word can descible what I saw:

AMAZING. unlike most servers everyone was roleplaying! it look like a lot of fun and the GM's were really nice and helpful I have never seen such an amazing server.

What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?:

Tethyscraft.net: the tethyscraft is a Hunger Games basiced server with an open arena players fight in very much like the books, on the server i was an Builder, Gamemaster (ran the arena with an team)Head Gamemaster, and finally Admin. The server fate was sad, no admins had the cash to play for the flees of the server.

Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?:

Yes I have read the rules a couple of times :)

Do you promise to abide by said rules, and laws? This includes the Server, Forum, and Teamspeak set Rules:

Yes I do!

How did you hear about us?:

I googled RP servers back in April I believe and made an application and denied and give up. But, when Tethyscraft was shut down I wanted something new some I wanted to try again.

Have you previously made an Application? If so could you link us to your last Application?:

It was so long ago I couldn't find it sorry :(

In-Character:

Character Name:

Kihew

What Race are you? (You may only be Human, Orc, Elf or Dwarf!) :

Elf :)

What Sub-Race are you? (note, you aren’t required to have a sub-race):

N/A pure elf.

Biography (Please make this at least 2 paragraphs long. This must include the history of your character and his life as well as age, appearance and personality, etc.):

I was born 25 years ago I was born I was born with brown hair and eyes the colour of the fresh spring grass. I was an member of a tribe I can not remember till i was 5, when my wonderful mother took me and my best friend Niyaa away from the abuse of my father, to an little eleven town where I spend my children hood learning the art of hunting and learning to embrace nature, Niyaa often would follow the town healer to learn of herbs to later she mastered.

My Life was really good, I later married Niyaa and had one son Keia. Who loved with all my heart but my life would later change when an an sickness ripped its way into my town, Niyaa and Keia got the the sickness, Niyaa send me to the forest to find pine needles and raspberries to try to help out our son. I ran as fast as I could. I found the stuff but it was too late, the sickness took their lives from me, that was when my life was changed, I did not want any help. Friends tried to help, but the only thing that helped was nature, I meditated everyday, but I'm still not sure of my place in the world. I don't want anyone to feel this pain, so I try to help everyone I can..

What are your Character's ambitions?:/color]

What is your character’s favorite tool? (sword, pickaxe, shovel, etc):

The bow and arrow i was trained by my mother when I was a kid.

What is one of your Character's most skilled talents?

The bow and arrow is my best skill, but I'm also an skilled hunter and gather, because I often had to gather food and water for Niyaa, my mother and my son.

A screenshot of your skin (must be in proper format, if you do not know how to acquire one, copy and paste this link into your browser: ( http://tinyurl.com/Lotcscreenshot ):

Other Information about your Character:

Sometimes i trend to push people away from the fear of them getting to close to me and then loosing them.

Open-Response-Questions

Each and every question must be answered with a minimum of a single full paragraph and entirely in RP.

Whilst traveling from the Cloud Temple you see a small halfling, being harassed by two armed warriors. They appear to be trying to steal money from him, how does your character respond?

I pull up my hood then go to found a hiding spot,when I find a hiding spot, were I can see the warriors then I draw two arrows and carefully snipe out the two warriors then I go to the bodys and take the coin purses from the warriors body's "I'm sorry this has happened to you, here take this, I don't need it" hand over the coins to the halfling and shake his hand and run away to the nearest hiding spot. were then I take off my hood, and casual walk away.

Your character wanders into Alras, and comes across a small stall, behind which a well dressed man is standing. He’s offering various wares, the merchant turns to you and says in a posh accent " 'ello there, what can I do you for today?" What is your character response?

"Hello good sir! I would like to buy any food you can offer" then I slip my hand into my coin purse and pull out a handful of coins, that is a lot more then the cost of the food " I hope this is an price you were thinking of." I take the food on the corner then I take the food and take a few steps and say "look, I noticed that you don't have any deer meat? bad hunting spot? try the east woods" and then I walk away.

Whilst wandering in the wilds, your character comes across a small hut, which looks abandoned. Inside it you see a chest containing a few iron bars, and a golden sword. How would your character respond?:

i look for any other items I can take to the poor when I am happy with what I found, I take the items inside of the chest then I journey off to the local town and give the items I found to the poor and tell the poor to go to the market and sell for as much food and water you can then I slip a few coins into the pockets of each of the poor I help.

Hungry and lost in the wilderness, you stumble across a small trading camp nestled among the forest, they greet you you in the common tongue, how do you respond?

"Hello! my misfortune has caused me to get lost, I have some items here I want to trade for a possible bed and some food?" I reply in common tongue and then I pull out the items and show the man the items to the man to try to trade for as much food I can get.

You hear word that bandits occupy the road outside the town in which you have been staying. The town guard have gathered, and are asking for assistance to help eliminate them. The leader of the party is offering a reward for any who offer their support. How does your character act on this information?:

I take up the offer to help out the town guard, and I help with the bandits with as much skill in my shots as I possibly can. After the job is done, I look in the bodies for any items I can either use or give away to help others. When I get the reward I take 25% and then give the coins and the items I can't use to the poor.

Anything else you would like to say?:I can't wait to be-able to join such an amazing server, truly the 5 mins on the server I saw was stunning and amazing.

[Dante 206]

Denied.

Your definition of power-gaming was incorrect. Feel free to look up the definition on an external website or search the forums for it, though make a note not to plagiarize.

Your biography fit into the lore fairly well, but you failed to gloss over your character's appearance or delve into his personality very much. These are absolutely necessary for a well rounded character. Also, I suggest you add more lore to your biography (using actual names of places in Asulon, referring to the infamous plague for the sickness, etc.)

Also, I'd like for you to fix up on you open-response-questions as your first one in particular contained a bout of power-gaming. Being able to kill off two trained warriors without even breaking a sweat, or giving them a chance to react for that matter, is indeed power-gaming. Remember, you're RPing this in-game supposedly, so keep it fair for all players.

Take note of your grammar. It's absolutely necessary to make an engrossing back story.

Please wait 24 hours before re applying.

[Dante 206]

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