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Minecraft Account Name:

Soresan

Character Name:

Name to strangers: Aro'Wraith

Name to people who are "Close": Wraith/Aro

Race:

Mori'Quessir

Gender:

Male

Age:

102

Appearence:

Aro'Wraith is a 5'3 Mori that wears a red and black robe with his hood over his head at almost all times. When his hood is down, you can see a dark skined frail young Mori. Even by Mori standards, Aro'Wraith is small weight, weighing around 109 lbs. His fast motabalism causes him to eat more often than other Mori, which can be a hindrance when food is scarce. That said, however, he is quite more agile than most other Mori, if only just.

Personality:

Aro'Wraith is a quiet, kniving Mori. He'd tear out his own mother's spine if it ment gaining a higher position in Mori society. He is also quite intellegent, enjoying reading in someplace safe and quiet, so he isn't ambushed while his nose is stuck in a book.

Biography: Aro'Wraith was born to Mire'Salice in the cavern city of Monorcress, not of any house or notable people. Aro'Wraith was raised by Mire'Salice with an iron fist, making sure her child didn't make any screw ups, and when he did, she wouldn't let him live it down. Around the age of 32, Aro'Wraith had a much higher problem with anxiety and caution than other Mori. He'd often hear a stone drop and jump ten feet in the air (An exaduration). However, this somewhat worked to his benefit. He would normally plan out how things would go, and how things would always go wrong in every single way, save a few ways. Around the age of 53, he noticed something odd that he never took notice to before... He was far weaker than other Mori. He had once been rather abrupt on how he was on being better than

everyone, and promptly five other children began beating him. Being ignorant, and unaware of his frailness, he fought back, but to absolutly no avail. The five children had no problem dealing with Aro'Wraith.

Furious, he blamed his father, an man Aro'Wrait still did not know, for being the weak link in the family. He was furious as to not knowing where he was so he could yell at him personally, and so his anger began to make him think and think and think. How could all other Mori be so much stronger than him and he be so weak? Surely he'd be eaten up and spit out before he was even an adult. He thought more... and then it occured to him. Perhaps he could use his small frame to his advantage. Perhaps, he was not meant to be a Mori on the front lines fighting in front. No, no, no... This would only get Aro'Wraith killed. He pondered this for several days, until he had come up with his solution. Fighting face to face with enemies, even a single oponent, Aro'Wraith was outmatched. However, an enemy can not fight what he cannot see... "Perhaps," Aro'Wraith thought, "If I stick to the shadows, I will remain unseen, and be able to pick my enemies off before they can even see me..." He tried this out the following day, and it worked to some extent. He taunted the boys that had beaten him days before, and promptly ran as fast as he could. Running down a dark alley and purposly being seen, he hides behind crates and other things for the boys to come by. As soon as the one on the very back went past, he snatched him, beating him with a rock again and again. He only greatly wounded the child, the others, however, turned, and saw Aro'Wraith. Knowing he'd be no match against 4 others, immediatly got up and ran.

Due to his small frame, fast metabolism, and shortage of money to buy food in order to survive, Aro'Wraith would often kidnap others to cook and eat. He didn't care who it was, so long as it was someone of equal class or lower, however, there arn't many other Mori's that are lower than he. He does this simply to survive, and doesn't give a damn whom he hurts.

Several years later, around the age of 75 while reading some books he had taken from someone, discovered it was a simple book on magic. He'd seen plenty of Mori use magic, but he had never shown much interest in it himself. He decided to read, and was entrhalled by how it worked, and how powerful one could be with such a tool. Aro'Wraith had grown tired of such a small, pathetic life. He had made the descision to learn magic, become someone that other Mori respected and yet feared, higher than most other Moris.

Your characters ambitions:

Aro'Wraith's ambitions are to become a great mage through to magic of Fire Evocation, and perhaps even a great assasin for hire. HE also wishes to be someone of high status, the absolute top of Mori society, and isn't afraid to slice a few throats to get there.

Why does your character do what he/she does?

The major reason is power. Aro'Wraith has spent literally his entire life being picked on and beaten because of his low class. He has decided that no matter what it may cost, he'd become someone high in society, rich, powerful, feared. He murders those who would anger him, beat others to send a message, or steal things worth stealing. The other reason Aro'Wraith murders is for proper sustinance. Aro'Wraith has not much money, and as such, devours other Moris or any other race as to not die of starvation.

What moral boundaries does your character adhere to, if any?

There isn't a thing Aro'Wraith would not do. So long as ti benefits him, he'll do anything.

What are some notable strengths and weaknesses of your character?

Weaknesses:

Aro'Wraith is very poor, Mori, and as such, cannot buy many things, let alone a house. His small frame makes him much more weak, and could more easily break bones, and as such relies on the shadows, or striking first in a fight. He also does not have much of an education, but learns what he can from books, studying, and things he picks up off the streets, and is a bit of a slow learner.

Strengths:

Though he is a slow learner, Aro'Wraith spends the majority of his time studying somewhere quiet and secluded, learning what he can from books.

His slender frame makes him a bit harder to target with arrows, although it is not at all impossible to hit him.

His slender frame makes him more agile than most.

What role will your character play in Asulon?

Aro'Wraith would serve a title of blade for hire, though only if it benefits him enough, and a power-grabber man.

Is your character loyal or a backstabber?

Backstabber. If Aro'Wraith sees you as a threat, you will not live through the night.

Are you familiar with all server/villain application rules?

Yes I am

Evils to be considered for?

1: Seince Aro'Wraith is very very poor, only having a few minas to his name, he relies on stealing and lock-picking in order to provide for himself, stealing things such as food, weapons, books, materials, and tools.

2a: Aro'Wraith would kill you for some slices of bread and a bag full of minas, or if someone hires him to do so.

2b: Aro'Wraith murders more than just for minas. He requires more than just simple bread to survive. He needs meat. And if Aro'Wraith wants meat, he'd try to kidnap you and cook you up. Plus, he can save the bones and make a nice little bone choker, or a fancy bone dagger.

He'd also be willing to kidnap people in order to get slave labor. Simple things such as a slave makes Aro'Wraith feel stronger, and higher in status.

Why do you as a player wish to and think you deserve to play as a villain?

I deserve to play as a villan because I am a very experienced roleplayer, and feel that I can offer plenty of interesting roleplay to others. I also am not afraid to lose from time to time, or give someone else the upper hand.

===Roleplay Related Questions===

As your character wanders the back-streets of Menorcress, you sight a cloaked figure lurking in one of the shadowed nook behind the Brothel: a rustle of cloth is heard, and the figure ushers you in with a skeletal finger. The hooded figure imparts information involving a conspiracy to over-throw the House of Miiystra, and offers you a hefty sum of coin to partake in the planned attack. How does your character react?

Aro'Wraith looks at the man... He is curious as to why he'd plop just anyone of the streets. Let alone someone as small and weak looking like Aro'Wraith. However, whether the man's intentions were true or not, the minas in his coin purse looked plenty real... He looked at the man, and was surpised at how skeletal-looking he was. As the man explained what his plan was, Aro'Wraith had some questions of his own. From what Aro'Wraith found out, the man had no supports, no other people to aid him, and nothing that would guarantee them success. In Aro'Wraith's mind, this man was an idiot. Idiot or not, however, a man could try and kill you should you say no...

As the man talks, Aro'Wraith slips his hand inside his robe, and quickly pulls a knife out. The man, not expecting such reflexes, stood and took too long to react, for Aro'Wraith had taken the knife out and slit his throat. Feeling he had done the smart thing, Aro'Wraith picked up the bag of "Minas". He blinked, feeling them, and then opened. "... Rocks... They were rocks." Aro'Wraith mummbled to himself. He shook his head, and threw them on the ground.

Your character finds him/herself watching the Alure d'aphyon: the several fighters within the void maze wield only sticks as they prove their prowess as warriors by battling to the death. One of fighters happens to be a close companion of yours, and you witness him being strategically cornered by three of the other fighters and beaten to death. While the crowd cheers in celebration of the violence, and the death of your friend. How does your character react?

Aro'Wraith had come at his friend's request. Reluctant, Aro'Wraith goes. He watches as the warriors fight, however, Aro'Wraith remained unimpressed, convinced he was far superior to some mere brute with a sword and a battle cry. He had seen his friend make several mistakes in the fight, and this one had costed him his life. As the friend gave out his last fiew breathes, his sigh leaving him lifeless, Aro'Wraith twistedly grinned and whispered to the dead man: "Better you than me..."

As you turn the corner into a dimly lit alley, a pair of young female rothe [slave/cattle] instantly run up to you. They are begging for a donation of either coin or bread. How does your character react?

Aro'Wraith, looking at the two, was furious at how he was unprepared for their arival. Angry at his own failure, took it out on them, beating them and claiming they had dared approach him. He observed the two women, who begged for forgivness but still pleaded for a donation. They seemed in good enough shape, as slaves go. Aro'Wraith was hungry, and had not eaten far longer than he would like to. He had plan on taking one and eating her, but then again, friends tend to want revenge... He got down on their level and smiled. "Very well. Come with me to my home, I will give you some minas there." He said, standing and waiting for them to walk infront of him, so he was sure they would not stab him in the back. The two were promptly killed and eaten when they were trapped in Aro'Wraith's own web.

A male and female rivvil [human] and a rivvil child seem lost amidst the alley-ways of byr'shuk [outsider-market]. The woman walks with a long staff, and the man appears to have a scabbard at his side. How does your character react?

Aro'Wraith was around there, looking for something proper to steal. However, he couldn't find a single thing. Dissapointed, he turns to leave, but hears the distinct jingle of a hefty bag of minas. Aro'Wraith, hoping not to be discovered, swiftly hides behind some old rubble, and waits for them to pass. As he observes the three, he sees that the man is elderly, and the woman slightly younger. He assumes that the woman is a mage of some sort, and the man a mere foot soldier. However, they both must have their experience at such an age. When the woman passed, he quickly stabbed her in the back, not exactly looking for a kill shot, but something to suprised her enough to let go of her staff. Quickly grabbing the staff as the man pulls out his scabard, trying to make sense of the situation, Aro'Wraith runs swiftly, the man tending to his wife's wound.

Two guards try to break up a fight between your acquaintance and two members of another qu'ellar [house]. Your 'friend' slays one of the guards as he approaches, causing the others to draw their arms. How does your character react?

Aro'Wraith rolled his eyes, knowing his acquaintance is of lower standing on Mori society, and yet choses a fight with one of a higher status. Knowing his friend a fool, Aro'Wraith chooses to stay out of the fight, and merely observes. As the friend draws his blade and kills the guard, Aro'Wraith stepped farther back as not to get confused that he is trying to get into the fight aswell. As his friend is killed, and the higher house leaves, Aro'Wraith approaches them and as scincere as he can. "I do appologise for my friend's behavior... He does indeed serve his fate, ignorant fool." He said, rolling his eyes at his friend's now dead body. The man scoffs. "Well, then perhaps you are wiser than the body." He said, then walked away with his companion. Through doing this, Aro'Wraith would most likely avoid one of them sending an assasin after him... However, he is not certain.

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Denied.

Mori are unable to learn magic, they do not have the ability to learn it.

Also, I do not think you fully understood the concept of a secret name. It is actually a real name, very different from the normal on in general, but you simply only tell it to those closest to you.

I would appreciate it if you tried maybe adding color of something so I am able to see the questions and the answeres separately.

Try expanding a bit on everything in general as well, it wouldn't hurt.

Good luck on your second try, all in all, you got the spirit of a good Mori in your char.

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Is there a time limit on when I can next apply? BEcause I havn't seen any rules saying I must wait 24 hours. (Sorry for re-posting here, the website won't let me PM you for some reason >_<)

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Moved to the Great Library. It shall be sorted into appropriate category shortly.

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