[Denied]my application for my dwarf gherren

[thaddeus11 75]

Out-Of-Character Details

Minecraft Account Name:Thaddeus12

How old are you?:13

Time-Zone/Country of Residence:est, the u.s.a

Do you have a good grip on English grammar and the English language?: I do have a good grip on it and every once and awhile i wont be able to spell a word.

Have you had any previous experience in roleplaying?:yes, i played on a server called hollow world but that didn't really work out for me.

Have you read and understood and agree to the rules?:I have read the rules and agree to follow them as if i were the one who made them.

How did you hear about the Lord of the Craft?: My friend, also know as arkenos_goldhand in game.

Link any previous applications you have made to the Lord of the Craft: made them all a long time ago.

Have you posted this application on Minecraft Forum? no, i could not find where to do that.

Definitions

In your own words, define what the act of roleplaying is:roleplaying as i understand it is when you only you or another charter ig are acting something out for example i just broke my leg he helps but we rp it first.

In your own words, define what the act of meta-gaming is: meta gaming is when you go out of charter when ig and start blabing your mouth of.

In your own words, define what the act of power-emoting is: is when forcing another charter to do something without a choice also known as god-emoting

In-Character Details

Character Name:Gehrren

Character Race: cave dwarf

Character biography - Make this at least 2 paragraphs long, which must explain your character’s history, appearance, personality, age and any other details you deem necessary: gehrren worked hard for most of his life, doing as his parents asked. As years past he grew even more mature and did every thing he was told and every thing that he wanted to before he got to old. At the age of 25 his mother and father died from murder.

Gehrren now lives with his grandma as she is the only family he has left.As the years past gehrren grew more old and more lonely. One day gehrren left his grandma in search of adventure, he had left with only a few loafs of bread and some seeds for growing his own food.

Gehrren is now 340 and has settled into a nice field where he made his house and garden, he goes hunting in the morning for cows, chickens ,and some pig. After one day of Pickering in his mind gehrren took all his supply's and left to find his place in the world, always studding the arts of mining woodcutting and building, he still could not find nothing that could suet a dwarf like him so he looked for the last thing on his mind, a magic teacher, he is still looking for one this day, and now, now he is heading for for the dwarf city where he is hoping he might find a dwarf magic teacher who is willing to teach him.

What are your characters ambitions?: to find his place in life witch his only choice left is to find a magic teacher.

Please provide an in-game screenshot of your skin here:

Is there anything else you would like to say about your character: no it is all self explanatory.

Open-Response-Questions

Each question here must be answered with a minimum of one full paragraph, and detail the scene you are given in the way it would happen in roleplay. These questions should be answered in first person. Be detailed, not short.

Upon entering the Mighty Human City of Arethor, you come across a shop-keeper calling out to sell his wares to passers-by. The shopkeeper is not a Human, he is a poor dwarf looking to make a living in a new city. What is your response? i take what few minas i can spare give them to the dwarf and tell him keep it and that i do not wish to bye your wares but keep this small donation from me.

You’re wandering the Oren Road late at night, when a large Orc begins to threaten a nearby dwarf. There is no help nearby, and the situation looks like it will escalate into violence soon, what does your character do? as my character slowly sneaks up on to the large orc he takes out a pick.He is now behind the large orc and puts his finger to his mouth towards the dwarf, takes the pick slams it into the orc's head, grabs the dwarf and starts running.

Whilst walking down the road to Malinor, you stumble upon an old man. His walking stick , looks weak and frail, and just as you are about to ask something, the stick breaks, and the man falls to the ground. As he falls down, a bag of Minas falls to the ground, and splits open. As you watch the multiple coins spill out, you peer down at the defenceless man. What does your character do?: My charter helps the old frail man up and then after making sure the man is ok he slowly picks up the minas and puts them back in the pouch and gives it to the man.

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• Weak definitions.
• Poorly thought out ORQ's which provide little to no detail.
• No skin provided.
• Color code answers different from questions.
• Work on grammar and spelling.

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