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Out-Of-Character Details

Minecraft Account Name:itsnotmemario

How old are you?:12

Time-Zone/Country of Residence:USA (gmt-05:00) Eastern Time (US & Canada)

Do you have a good grip on English grammar and the English language?:I do

Have you had any previous experience in roleplaying?:I have had a bit from a faction tekkit server

Have you read and understood and agree to the rules?:I have

How did you hear about the Lord of the Craft?:I hear of Lord of the Craft from youtube

Link any previous applications you have made to the Lord of the Craft:I would but i cant find them

Have you posted this application on Minecraft Forum? If not, post it here:http://www.minecraftforum.net/topic/832121-the-lord-of-the-craft-enter-the-world-of-asulon-o-f-f-i-c-i-a-l-l-y-t-h-e-n-o-1-r-p-s-e-r-v-e-r-100-unique-gameplay/!:yes

Definitions

In your own words, define what the act of roleplaying is: roleplaying is the act of acting as a character would not as you in real life would.

In your own words, define what the act of meta-gaming is: The act of meta-gaming is when you have knowledge that you could only find out outside of the roleplay world.

In your own words, define what the act of power-emoting is: The act of power-emoting is when you emote on a person without there knowledge like "hydrayan chops marelan's head off" it limits what a person is able to do since of the emote.

In-Character Details

Character Name:hydrayan

Character Race:Elf <Wood Elf>

Character biography - Make this at least 2 paragraphs long, which must explain your character’s history, appearance, personality, age and any other details you deem necessary:Many moons ago a group of knights came to our town and conquered our lands without any consent from us, but then again since when do conquerors care

about the people they're conquering or the places they're pillaging, the only thing they care about is themselves. Going back to what I was saying, during this

takeover of our town a few of us townsfolk gathered at the town leader's home so that we could ready ourselves to rebel against the knights. When we

finally finished our preparations we charged out and planned to kill any knights in sight, but the weird thing was that when we got outside the knights had

all left us for no reason whatsoever, we never found out what really happened that day but after it all happened we just went on with our lives like nothing

had ever happened.

Not many years later at that very same town another strange thing happened, but this event was much weirder and much worse then the one before. It started

with villagers randomly disappearing into thin air, then when someone finally saw what really happened with these people she ran as fast as she could to tell

the townsfolk what had happened;as it turned out there was a man going around straight out of the ground grabbing people in the dead of night and

taking them back down the manhole, covering it as he went down. The lot of us, once more united, attempted to find this man and find the villagers that had

gone missing. What we did not expect was that the man turned out to be a good guy, just a man who wanted to have a few friends is all. The man was allowed

to live in the village in exchange for all of the people he had taken and of course the man did this happily since he would be allowed to live above ground for

once and not be forced to live underground all the time.

Since these events have happened I have made it my goal to find as many odd events as possible before I die, for if I am to become injured and unable to

continue my search then I know that I shall continue on crippled. Not as a explorer, but as a family man.

If you haven't figured it out by now my name is

Hydrayan, a good sized wood elf with dark grey hair, but not many people see me as this since I am usually wearing my cloak because it helps me to escape from

bandits should I ever be caught.

What are your characters ambitions?:My character's ambitions are to find as many odd happenings before his death as possible.

Please provide an in-game screenshot of your skin here:couldn't get it working so here http://www.minecraftskins.com/skin/22375/elf-assasin-with-blue-eyes/

Is there anything else you would like to say about your character:my character is an explorer, an explorer of the great unknown. I made it my

goal to find many strange happenings and find I shall!

Open-Response-Questions

Each question here must be answered with a minimum of one full paragraph, and detail the scene you are given in the way it would happen in roleplay. These questions should be answered in first person. Be detailed, not short.

Upon entering the Mighty Human City of Arethor, you come across a shop-keeper calling out to sell his wares to passers-by. The shopkeeper is not a Human, he is a poor dwarf looking to make a living in a new city. What is your response?"Welcome sir!" the dwarf says as he brings his head up to greet me. "good morning fine dwarf" I say with a smile "I believe you may have what I have been

searching for." "Well what may that be?As you can see we have a great variety of wares here!" he says while bringing his arms around to show me the wares.

"Well its not really a object you would find on any normal shop. I am looking for Diamond sword, I have heard that the dwarves are masters at the arts

"Do you know if you have one of these blades in stock?" I whisper, while looking around the room. The dwarf is startled to hear me say such words "Are you

insane?! A Diamond sword? You must be insane! Those types of swords can only be crafted by master dwarfs!" "Well I for one believe in you sir, and I know

you can do it!" "Well the best I can give you is that I will try, I am NOT saying I will succeed in this but I shall try." he exclaims at once. "Thank you

fine dwarf.Here" I say while giving the man a few minas. "consider this an early payment. You shall get the rest when it's finished." "Thank you sir!" the

dwarf says as he starts to write down the materials he will need.

You’re wandering the Oren Road late at night, when a large Orc begins to threaten a nearby dwarf. There is no help nearby, and the situation looks like it will escalate into violence soon, what does your character do?:When I see the orc threatening the dwarf I yell over to get his attention "HEY! OVER THERE!", although somehow it seems that neither of them can hear me. So I

come up with a new plan of action, one that hopefully doesn't involve anyone getting hurt. And then it hits me! I could simply get the dwarf out of there.

Even though it may not be the most honorable way to do things it is a way to solve things without violence. As I put my plan into effect suddenly the dwarf

pulls out of what seems like nowhere some kind of old looking cane and cracks it over the orc's head. Startled with this act and also seeing that the orc is

now unconscious I decide it's time for me to take my leave.

Whilst walking down the road to Malinor, you stumble upon an old man. His walking stick , looks weak and frail, and just as you are about to ask something, the stick breaks, and the man falls to the ground. As he falls down, a bag of Minas falls to the ground, and splits open. As you watch the multiple coins spill out, you peer down at the defenseless man. What does your character do?:As I see the bag of minas just sitting there, coins lying around it, a thought pops into my head. "He can't do anything to me, I could take these coins right now...

but I shouldn't, this is probably all this man has in life." I then quickly gather up the money and put it back into the bag while the old man groans "Please

don't, those minas are all I have nowadays!", but to his surprise I then put the money into his pocket again and lift him as best I can to the nearest tree

where I sit him down. "Listen, I'll be right back, I just have to grab something." I say, looking straight into his eyes. I then hurry off to my home where

I have a few weapons set up. I figure that a staff should work as a cane for awhile until I can make a proper walking stick. I then hurry back to the

man who is now just sitting there mumbling to himself. "Excuse me, sir? I believe that this might work for awhile" I say as I hand him the staff. "You're...

you're... helping me? But why? Nobody nowadays cares about old men like us." the man says with enthusiasm in his voice. "Well I kind of like you so come on

back to my house, you can stay there for awhile until you are ready to move on again" I say with a smile on my face.

[mmat 7460]

- Your second open response question contains powergaming.

- Your power emoting definition misses a key element.

- Your biography needs to contain server lore.

- The link to your skin is not working.

- Your application is very hard to read because of the matching colours, it would be helpful if you could change this.

Correct these errors and reapply in 24 hours.

[mmat 7460]

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