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MC Username: Zilldude

Rp Username (be sure to include the correct prefix, look up on info thread): Scicle

Character Skillset: Stealth, swordsmanship, archery, and writing.

Appearance (age, SUBRACE, gender): Scicle is 20, male, and is a Leparda.

Personality: Scicle is a quaint and peaceful Kha, but is easily angered. He does know how to fight, but prefers not to because he does not believe in violence (and he is also a wimp). He loves writing books and studying the philosophy of Kylar Lars. He does not travel much and only likes to live in small homes with one torch.

Please include a short bio of your character's life: Not much is known of Scicle's childhood. He was the age of 3 when a two Kha's found Scicle in the jungles and they began to raise him as their own. At the age of 5, Scicle took up an interest in writing and began to write books. When Scicle was only 15, he was hunting out in the jungles and saw a man dressed in dark green robes walking through the jungle. The man would later become Scicle's teacher, but that is for the future. Scicle stayed with his adoptive parents until the age of 16. At age 16, Scicle left to explore all of Asulon. When Scicle arrived in the Oren Empire, he was ridiculed and mocked for his race. He was hiding behind a tavern trying to evade some drunken guards when a the man in the green garbs found him. The man was Kylar Lars, and he helped Scicle out by teaching him math, science, magic history, human history, and even a basic understanding of physics. Bu the most interesting topic was literature, which both Kylar and Scicle took a liking to. Kylar taught Scicle the Philosophy of the Erkely and even gave Scicle his own green robes. But, when Scicle was 20, Kylar mysteriously vanished, leaving Scicle alone to watch Kylar's home. Scicle never found the book where Kylar had wrote the philosophy, but he still remembered it. Scicle soon set out again to explore the rest of Asulon and hopefully ease the tension between Kha and humans.

Character's ambitions: Scicle wishes only to learn and teach Kylar's philosophy. Scicle also wishes to write his own philosophy based off of Kylar's.

_---Situational Rp Questions---_

1.

As you travel through the Karakatuan jungle, you spot a human trespassing on your nation's lands. He approaches you, obviously distressed, and asks for any food, water, or shelter that you can provide, then tells you that he has been lost in the area for days without any proper supplies. How do you react?:

Human: Please, I am in desperate need of supplies, Kha!

*Scicle smokes on his pipe*

Scicle: Well, you do not seem like a danger... fine, I shall give you some supplies. But, do not come back or tell any other Kha I helped you out! If you do... you will regret it.

2.

As you romp through the lands of the "apes", you come across a tavern. Inside this tavern, a Dwarf notices you and starts gawking at you, then begins to speak.

"Oi! I gots a bowl of cream for you, Kitty! Ha! I'd bet you would make a nice throw rug, wouldn't ya, ya mangy furball?!"

He continues act generally as racist as possible. What do you do?:

Scicle: Hey, dwarve, silence! I do not want your remarks now or ever, for you have no right nor reason! You spend all day in your mines, digging away at what? The hope for a new future? Well, I write and learn, giving me a better one. Who is the real idiot here, dwarf?

3.

One of your fellow Kharajyr and a close friend of yours comes to your dwelling in the middle of the night and begins to pound on your door. After you let him in, he confesses to killing another Kharajyr over a slice of cake. What do you do in response?

Scicle: I'm sorry, but I cannot help you. You broke a law, and I do not have the ability to just abandon my responsibility to them for you. If you leave, I will not tell them I saw you. If you do not, I shall fetch the guards!

Do you swear to follow the Tlatlanni and uphold his law, and do you swear to hold Metztli and all of her actions as sacred? I do.

Please include a screenshot or 3D render of your character's skin

http://i.imgur.com/FcwQV.jpg

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. . . Under review . . .

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Your application has been . . .

DENIED

- These two rules from the Kharayr application rule post have been broken with this application:

Rule 7~

-You may not make a Kharajyr that is born outside the empire without special permission.

Rule 8~

-Kha' lore clearly states their hostility towards other races. Do not make an application that involves your Kha' liking, loving and socialising with non Kharajyr. This is something that must take place in game with correct lore behind it.

- Kharajyr usually use an accent, you can find it here (this will help your chances of acceptance, but you may be accepted without it.):

http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/54779-speakingunderstanding-kharajyr-accents/

- Your situational RP questions are very short and give me next to no information on your character.

- Your skin actually looks green itself. Try and 'yellow it up' a bit. And you state you are Kha'leparda, yet the skin has stripes? A Leparda has black/brown spots with a creamy/yellow fur.

Re-apply after 24 hours and I or another KAT member will view your application again. Good luck!

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Your application has been . . .

DENIED

- These two rules from the Kharayr application rule post have been broken with this application:

- Kharajyr usually use an accent, you can find it here (this will help your chances of acceptance, but you may be accepted without it.):

http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/54779-speakingunderstanding-kharajyr-accents/

- Your situational RP questions are very short and give me next to no information on your character.

- Your skin actually looks green itself. Try and 'yellow it up' a bit. And you state you are Kha'leparda, yet the skin has stripes? A Leparda has black/brown spots with a creamy/yellow fur.

Re-apply after 24 hours and I or another KAT member will view your application again. Good luck!

Thank you very much for reviewing my application and helping me better understand the rules. I shall fix these and also add more background on his life.

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Moved to the Great Library. It shall be sorted into appropriate category shortly.

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