elderceleo's 2nd applacation

[ClassyDryad 2367]

Out-Of-Character Details

Minecraft Account Name:Elder_Celeo

How old are you?:15

Time-Zone/Country of Residence:America

Do you have a good grip on English grammar and the English language?:Yes

Have you had any previous experience in roleplaying?:Very little

Have you read and understood and agree to the rules?:Yes

How did you hear about the Lord of the Craft?:YouTube

Link any previous applications you have made to the Lord of the Craft:App 1

Have you posted this application on Minecraft Forum? If not, post it here: http://www.minecraftforum.net/topic/832121-the-lord-of-the-craft-enter-the-world-of-asulon-o-f-f-i-c-i-a-l-l-y-t-h-e-n-o-1-r-p-s-e-r-v-e-r-100-unique-gameplay/! :yes

Definitions

In your own words, define what the act of roleplaying is:To act out a adopted role.

In your own words, define what the act of meta-gaming is:To cheat by using information your character does not.

In your own words, define what the act of power-emoting is:Forcing the result of one's actions on another character and not letting them stop it.

In-Character Details

Character Name:Donovan

Character Race:Dark Elf

Character biography - Make this at least 2 paragraphs long, which must explain your character’s history, appearance, personality, age and any other details you deem necessary:Donovan is an odd elf. He has violet eyes which is rare among elves. Donovan has dark grey hair under his hood. He is 30 years of age. Donovan always has his father’s trusty Sword at his side.

Donovan grew up in the Wilds with his father, Jarvis. Jarvis was a soldier of Laurelin until the Destruction of Aegis and new many sword fighting skills. Jarvis always told Donovan stories of pushing the undead back, and the undead gaining ground. Jarvis also told Donovan of the brave solders he fought with. Jarvis showed Donovan how to wield a sword wisely and how to survive in the Wilds. Jarvis told Donovan that it's best to not go anywhere alone. He also taught Donovan the religion of the reformed church. On the day of Nature’s Boon, they planted many flowers and saplings. To make minas, Jarvis and Donovan go to Arethor to sell their game. Donovan had many good days with his father. But one day when Donovan came back from hunting one night, Jarvis was gone. The only thing left was his father’s sword swaddled in fine yellow cloth. Donovan pledged that he would find out what came of his father.

What are your characters ambitions?:Hunting, sword fighting, and searching for clues of his father’s disappearance.

Please provide an in-game screenshot of your skin here:My Skin

Is there anything else you would like to say about your character:No.

Open-Response-Questions

Each question here must be answered with a minimum of one full paragraph, and detail the scene you are given in the way it would happen in roleplay. These questions should be answered in first person. Be detailed, not short.

Upon entering the Mighty Human City of Arethor, you come across a shop-keeper calling out to sell his wares to passers-by. The shopkeeper is not a Human, he is a poor dwarf looking to make a living in a new city. What is your response?"Hello dwarf" I say"hello"says the grumpy dwarf"Can I see your Wares “I say with a smile “Oh Sure “says the dwarf in a jolly manner as a smile lights up his once sorrow face. The dwarf eagerly pusses his wares forward. hmmm , I think,of the items, only those boots seem useful. “I will take the pair of leather boots "I say"Ok 40 minas “says the dwarf. I give him the minas and get on my way.

You’re wandering the Oren Road late at night, when a large Orc begins to threaten a nearby dwarf. There is no help nearby, and the situation looks like it will escalate into violence soon, what does your character do?I pull my sword on the orc and yell with anger in my voice "I will have your hide orc","I'll crush your skull "says the ork The orc grins with confidence, thinking there was no way he could lose. We clashed and started Fighting. Eventually I parry his blade and knock him to his feet .The orc looks up at me with a sad face, “please….. mercy” the orc crys. I should give him his mercy, I think. ”fine, have your petty mercy”. The orc gets up and stumbles away. "Thanks elf" says the dwarf with a happy smile. “you’re welcome” I say as I turn and get on my way.

Whilst walking down the road to Malinor, you stumble upon an old man. His walking stick , looks weak and frail, and just as you are about to ask something, the stick breaks, and the man falls to the ground. As he falls down, a bag of Minas falls to the ground, and splits open. As you watch the multiple coins spill out, you peer down at the defenceless man. What does your character do?:I think of, how I can help this old man …..I will fix his walking stick and help him up. I rap cloth around the break in his walking stick and help him to his feet. “Thank you...can you help me pick my minas “says the old man with a large happy grin. “Shure “I say with a light grin on my face. I pick up all the minas and the old man says with a wide grin, “thank you, I think you deserve this’ he puts 20 minas in my hand. ”oh thank you” I say with a happy grin. After we bid are farewells I continue on my journey.

[Queen of Aegis 174]

- Your defenitions need expanding

- Your bio is very short

- A 30 year old elf is like a little child/baby. It is extremely powergaming if he can hunt and kill or even handle a sword

- A 30 year old person can never have been in Aegis as Asulon is about 60 years old now

- The ORQ's are too short and need expanding

You may reapply in 24 hours from this post

If you have any questions feel free to PM me

~BoomBox~

[Queen of Aegis 174]

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