huth0's Application

[TomHut98 0]

Out-Of-Character Details

Minecraft Account Name: huth0

How old are you?: 16

Time-Zone/Country of Residence: England

Do you have a good grip on English grammar and the English language?: Yes.

Have you had any previous experience in roleplaying?: WoW RP servers, and Lord of the Rings Online

Have you read and understood and agree to the rules?: Yes, I agree with the rules.

How did you hear about the Lord of the Craft?: Through my friends.

Link any previous applications you have made to the Lord of the Craft: I have not applied before.

Have you posted this application on Minecraft Forum? If not, post it here: http://www.minecraftforum.net/topic/832121-the-lord-of-the-craft-enter-the-world-of-asulon-o-f-f-i-c-i-a-l-l-y-t-h-e-n-o-1-r-p-s-e-r-v-e-r-100-unique-gameplay/! : I have posted. My username is 'tomh98'

Definitions

In your own words, define what the act of roleplaying is: Roleplaying is the act of assuming the role of another person or character. To do this you might change how you act, speak, type or look. While roleplaying it is important to not come out of character, as this can ruin the fun for you and others.

In your own words, define what the act of meta-gaming is: Meta-gaming is when you are supplied with information that your RP character would not necessarily know, So maybe some information that character could only have obtained through asking the person you are talking to, such as a name.

In your own words, define what the act of power-emoting is: Power-Emoting is when you abuse the emotion function and use it to your own gain, such as "Sean picks John's pocket and steals his wallet." (This example was taken from Urban Dictionary, but the definition is in my own words.)

In-Character Details

Character Name: Galalith Black

Character Race: Dwarf

Character biography - Make this at least 2 paragraphs long, which must explain your character’s history, appearance, personality, age and any other details you deem necessary: Galalith was born into a middle-class family in Kal al ŕas. His father was a smith, and his mother a washer-women. He had 7 siblings, of which He was the oldest. He grew up on burned bread and old cheese, but grew strong and tall for a dwarf. He learned the ways of the axe from a kind soldier who would let them use his weapon when we was on watch. On the turn of his fifteenth season, his father took him in as an apprentice in his Forge. Unfortunately, Galalith lost his hand in an smelting accident, rendering him unable to smith any longer.

He joined a band of travellers as a caravan guard, and this took him across Asulon, from the bitter cold of Hanseti to the heat of Halvaska. He learned the trade of food and drink along the way, and after a season with it, he left the caravan to return home. There he found his father had died of a fever obtained from a gouty wound, and his mother had become a ***** to raise money for his remaining siblings (2 had been killed for attempting to rob the castle treasury). While helping his family back onto their feet, Galalith noticed that his family was not the only family in financial trouble. He realised that there was fine line between the rich and poor of the city. He tried to bring the problem to the eyes of the city government, but they ignored him. He desided that he would try to bring equality to the city.

He attempted to protest peacefully against the poverty, and was met with strong support, but also strong support against his movement. He soon realised that the government where trying to oppress the movement because the ministers where keeping the money for themselves. He realised a peaceful protest would do nothing, and violence was the only answer.

He led his rebel troops against the castle, lighting the homes of minister's afire was they went. The city guard sallied out to meet them in the throne room, but soon found themselves outnumbered, so many yielded. Galalith held the castle and the city ministers. But Galalith did not realise that one of the ministers had sent a bird to Kal'Dwain, and their troops were marching. They attacked while the rebels celebrated over their victory. Many were killed and Galalith was taken prisoner.

Galalith was taken to the town square the next day to be executed, when his mother offered to be executed in place of Galalith. The leader of the Kal'Dawinian agreed on the term that Galalith Black must go into exile and never return to the Dwarven lands.

This is where the next chapter of his story begins.

What are your characters ambitions?: To attempt another rebellion against the corrupt government, but until find his feet in the world.

Please provide an in-game screenshot of your skin here: HERE .

Is there anything else you would like to say about your character: He is tall for a dwarf, and has a jolly personality.

Open-Response-Questions

Each question here must be answered with a minimum of one full paragraph, and detail the scene you are given in the way it would happen in roleplay. These questions should be answered in first person. Be detailed, not short.

Upon entering the Mighty Human City of Arethor, you come across a shop-keeper calling out to sell his wares to passers-by. The shopkeeper is not a Human, he is a poor dwarf looking to make a living in a new city. What is your response?

Galalith would go over to the trader and strike up a conversation about his background and his wares. He would also ask him about his views of the corruption of the Dwarven government. He would take him to the local tavern an fill him up on ale, and then ask him if it would be possible to sneak him into the city of Kal al ŕas. The trader would probably decline the offer, as so not to risk his neck. At that point, Galalith would stand up, throw the man a few coppers, thank the bar keep, and then walk into the night.

You’re wandering the Oren Road late at night, when a large Orc begins to threaten a nearby dwarf. There is no help nearby, and the situation looks like it will escalate into violence soon, what does your character do?

Galalith would stand in-between the Orc and Dwarf and ask the Orc what he is doing. The Orc would respons "Non' od you buasiness" and push Galalith. At that point Galalith would punch the Orc hard in the mouth with his stump, while drawing his axe with his hand. He would bring the base of the weapon into the side of the Orc's head and kick him between the legs to keep him down. He would then toss the dwarf a copper coin, and continue on his way.

Whilst walking down the road to Malinor, you stumble upon an old man. His walking stick , looks weak and frail, and just as you are about to ask something, the stick breaks, and the man falls to the ground. As he falls down, a bag of Minas falls to the ground, and splits open. As you watch the multiple coins spill out, you peer down at the defenceless man. What does your character do.. Pick up the old man and lean him against a tree to rest. He would ask if he was injured. He would then collect the coins and place them in his own bag, before handing over the two loads of coins. He would then help the man to the nearest village healer and leave him.

[Volutional 935]

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This was a nice application, but there were some inconsistencies that I need to point out.

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Your formatting was just a little off - but that is definitely not a major concern.

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You cannot perform villainous acts without an accepted villain application - and an accepted whitelist application. I recommend going through your biography and just checking up on those. Including rebellions and such. But a good effort.

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In your open response questions, you did perform some villainous acts. You will need to get accepted first, which I know you will next time - You've done well.

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If you feel I can adapt on my explaination, I will happily tell you and help you more in private messages :)

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Please apply again though, after 24 hours, Good Luck

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[Volutional 935]

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