[Pending]BathRugMan Application

[BathRugMan 564]

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Out-Of-Character Details

Minecraft Account Name: BathRugMan

How old are you?: 12

Time-Zone/Country of Residence: Hong Kong, GMT+8

Do you have a good grip on English grammar and the English language?: I do

Have you had any previous experience in roleplaying?: Yep, I played world of warcraft once and other related games. I have also joined servers which require role playing

Have you read and understood and agree to the rules?: Yep

How did you hear about the Lord of the Craft?: Through searching servers.

Link any previous applications you have made to the Lord of the Craft: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/75025-bathrugman-application/page__p__616197__fromsearch__1#entry616197

http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/74972-bathrugman-application/page__p__615728__fromsearch__1#entry615728

http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/74895-bathrugman-application/page__p__615100__fromsearch__1#entry615100

http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/74766-bathrugmans-application/page__p__613545__fromsearch__1#entry613545

Have you posted this application on Minecraft Forum? If not, post it here: http://www.minecraftforum.net/topic/832121-the-lord-of-the-craft-enter-the-world-of-asulon-o-f-f-i-c-i-a-l-l-y-t-h-e-n-o-1-r-p-s-e-r-v-e-r-100-unique-gameplay/! : I have

Definitions

In your own words, define what the act of roleplaying is: To change your behavior to fulfill a character with his own characterizations to explore a fantasy world

In your own words, define what the act of meta-gaming is: Using out of game information to create an advantage for an abusing player.

In your own words, define what the act of power-emoting is: By using emotes to describe an action which doesn't let another player to respond or prevent it. For example, "A throws a bottle at B" "A then stabs with his stained dagger into B" "B then bleeds to death on the floor" "A searches B's body and runs away"

In-Character Details

Character Name: Evredan

Character Race: Elf

Character biography - Make this at least 2 paragraphs long, which must explain your character’s history, appearance, personality, age and any other details you deem necessary:

Age:21. appearance: Long blond hair, pale skin, green eyes and has features a little rougher than the typical elf.

Evredan was born too a human mother and elf father in the middle of nowhere, protected by the giant cliffs that was they're home, nobody knew they were they're. When Evredan was at the age of 12, his father taught him the exercise of strength and mind while his mother taught him the arts and language, they practiced everyday until he was capable of being independent at the age of 16.

One day while his father was out gathering supplies, his mother realized that they had no more food, since their was news of orcs in the country side, Evredan accompanied his mother, weapon in hand to gather food. But when they came back, they found their father dead and the house burnt to ashes, suddenly, a large host of orcs apear'd from the outskirts of the trees. Already weaken'd by the sight of her husband dead, the appearance of the orcs caused her to faint. Though her mother lost conscious, Evredan took ahold of his wits and dragging her mother's limp body. Seeing as he was still a 16 year old child, he had not the strength to do extensive labour, let alone drag a 50 kilogram body. He quickly found himself facing to choices, keep his mother company to the last breath of his life or abandon his mother too the mercy of the orcs and live. He chose the later, abandoning his mother and father, he ran blindly away from the orcs, crying and cursing himself for his cowardice.

Arriving finally at the borders of Malinor, his pursuers stopped following him. Grief stricken by his mothers death and cowardice, he strove to become braver. Their in malinor, he nearly starved to death if not for a elderly elf who taught him the ways of the bow. After 2 years of training, he was a good enough shot to match up with his kin. But to this day, he regrets leaving his mother.

What are your characters ambitions?: To one day visit his home and rebuild it and raise a family. He also wants to properly mourn the passing of his mother and father.

Please provide an in-game screenshot of your skin here: http://www.minecraftskins.com/skin/490483/elf-hunter/

Is there anything else you would like to say about your character: He also has a taste for beef and strives to build the best ever house.

Open-Response-Questions

Each question here must be answered with a minimum of one full paragraph, and detail the scene you are given in the way it would happen in roleplay. These questions should be answered in first person. Be detailed, not short.

Upon entering the Mighty Human City of Arethor, you come across a shop-keeper calling out to sell his wares to passers-by. The shopkeeper is not a Human, he is a poor dwarf looking to make a living in a new city. What is your response?Evredan asks the shop keeper, "do you have any beef I could buy?" the dwarf replies "I believe I do", he than proceeds to walk to his storage room and arrives back with a bag of game. "That would be 10 minds for the lot" Says the dwarf. I ask him " Are their any smiths in the city? I need to repair my armor." The dwarf smiles and exclaims, " No need to go anywhere my lad! Dwarves are masters of steal and stone! And I happen to be one!", "Oh than how much do you charge to repair an piece like this?" Evredan proceeds to take of his steel chain mail and slides it over to the dwarf. "hmm…" Examines the dwarf, "It is slightly damaged and it won't cost much, maybe 10 minas?". "hmmm, okay" Says Evredan "shall I pick it up tomorrow?" "ok, it will not take long!" The dwarf replies. They both shake hands and Evredan continues on his way to the local inn.

You’re wandering the Oren Road late at night, when a large Orc begins to threaten a nearby dwarf. There is no help nearby, and the situation looks like it will escalate into violence soon, what does your character do?

Evredan walks up to the orcs and taps him on the shoulder, than Evredan realizes the sheer size of orc and instantly regrets his decision. The orc turns around an peers down at him with squinted eyes. "watch'r warnt" asks the orc? Evredan replies with a trembling voice, "Stop picking on the dwarf." "'ey littler marn, watcha doo about it?" replies the orc. Evredan trembles,realizing he can do nothing. Seized by fear, he apologizes to the orc "Sorry for meddling" And then he briskly walks away without a second glance, dripping with guilt while the orc grumbles behind him.

Whilst walking down the road to Malinor, you stumble upon an old man. His walking stick , looks weak and frail, and just as you are about to ask something, the stick breaks, and the man falls to the ground. As he falls down, a bag of Minas falls to the ground, and splits open. As you watch the multiple coins spill out, you peer down at the defenceless man. What does your character do?: "Hey old man need some help?" Evredan says while holding the man's head up. "oh thank you dear elf" Says the old man sitting on the ground, "I haven't eaten for days!", "here" says Evredan, "eat some bread" He hands him a loaf of bread to him. "Thank you, I can't tell him how grateful I am." And the old mean grabs the bread and starts eating like a wolf. Evredan kneels down and watches him eat. "Old man, where are you going all alone?" he asks. "mmmh ermm mar ormm mmhm" Mummers the Oldman with his mouth open showing his lack of dental hygiene, he swallows with a large gulp and wipes his hand across with the back of pale and frail hand. "My town was attacked by a group of rogues, I was just going to malinor to ask for help." "Oh I see, I was just going to malinor myself! Let me accompany you for the rest of the journey" Exclaims Evredan, suddenly leaping up from the dusty road. " Here, take my hand" And the old man hoists his skinny body up with his stick and looped his arm around Evredan's shoulder. And they hobbled awkwardly at the direction of Malinor.

[Rom 59]

Your application has been put on pending. This is because, as it is your fifth application, this is your last attempt at applying. Had it been an earlier application, I may have denied it. Now, what needs fixing is this:

-The second ORQ is a little powergamey, in the way that you say you "grab the dwarf and run." Simply picking up a dwarf wouldn't be so simple, and there is also nothing saying he was on the floor, and how he got there. You have 5 hours to change this, or your application will be denied.

[Skippy 2466]

You've fixed the 2nd ORQ, and as Rom is currently offline (3 AM for him), I'll move this to accepted. :)

[Skippy 2466]

Moved to Accepted Forum

[Cappy 1599]

Implemented