[Denied] Application

[coosko 2]

Out-Of-Character Details

Minecraft Account Name:coosko

How old are you?:14

Time-Zone/Country of Residence:Canada (pacific)

Do you have a good grip on English grammar and the English language?:Yes

Have you had any previous experience in roleplaying?:Yes

Have you read and understood and agree to the rules?:Yes

How did you hear about the Lord of the Craft?:Youtube

Link any previous applications you have made to the Lord of the Craft:I've made none

Have you posted this application on Minecraft Forum? If not, post it here: http://www.minecraftforum.net/topic/832121-the-lord-of-the-craft-enter-the-world-of-asulon-o-f-f-i-c-i-a-l-l-y-t-h-e-n-o-1-r-p-s-e-r-v-e-r-100-unique-gameplay/! :

Definitions

In your own words, define what the act of roleplaying is:I think role playing means having fun in a game with friends and haveing spirit in the game and not being a lamo

In your own words, define what the act of meta-gaming is:

In your own words, define what the act of power-emoting is:

In-Character Details

Character Name:coosko

Character Race:Dwarf

Character biography - Make this at least 2 paragraphs long, which must explain your character’s history, appearance, personality, age and any other details you deem necessary:My charcter would be a handsome man in his 20's I wanna get all the ladies and be very strong. My parents were killed in a bandit raid on my village when i was 7 i've survived on my own all these years. I want blonde skater hair with a french moustache and goute. I am rough, tough, and scary. I do have a sweet side though and i have won every battle and fight ive ever been in. You wanna pick on me? You'll regret it!

What are your characters ambitions?:To conguer the world and be known to everyone as a guy you dont wanna mess with, i also want a huge army by my command.

Please provide an in-game screenshot of your skin here:Dont have any.

Is there anything else you would like to say about your character:No

Open-Response-Questions

Each question here must be answered with a minimum of one full paragraph, and detail the scene you are given in the way it would happen in roleplay. These questions should be answered in first person. Be detailed, not short.

Upon entering the Mighty Human City of Arethor, you come across a shop-keeper calling out to sell his wares to passers-by. The shopkeeper is not a Human, he is a poor dwarf looking to make a living in a new city. What is your response?I am also a dwarf so i would ask him to come with me back to my kingdom and help serve in my army and a have a nice rich life style.

You’re wandering the Oren Road late at night, when a large Orc begins to threaten a nearby dwarf. There is no help nearby, and the situation looks like it will escalate into violence soon, what does your character do?I walk up to the orc and say "pick on someone your own size!" and tell him to beet it, if he doesnt listen i will draw my weapon and if it comes to it ill attack.

Whilst walking down the road to Malinor, you stumble upon an old man. His walking stick , looks weak and frail, and just as you are about to ask something, the stick breaks, and the man falls to the ground. As he falls down, a bag of Minas falls to the ground, and splits open. As you watch the multiple coins spill out, you peer down at the defenceless man. What does your character do?:Offers him his hand and helps him get a new stick and I pick up his coins for him and slip a few extra in the bag for him :)

[everblue2er101 906]

Your application has been...

Denied.

Explain specifically what previous roleplaying experience you've had.

Need to post on the Minecraft Forums before you can be accepted.

Incorrect Roleplaying definition. Need to provide Meta-Gaming and Power-Emoting definitions and examples. You can find more information on the forums and wiki, but make sure to use your own words.

'coosko' is not a very Dwarven name.

Bio should be in the third person. Include server lore. Make it at least two paragraphs. Extremely cliché to have dead parents. It's extremely unlikely a Dwarven child could survive on their own. Powergaming to win every fight ever been in.

Ambitions are impossibly unrealistic.

Need to provide a skin screenshot.

Expand on all Open Response Questions.

Several capitalization errors.

Wait at least 24 hours after this post to reapply. If you have any questions feel free to send me a PM.

[Swgrclan 2682]

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