[Denied]Application

[FlareGunCalamity 213]

Out-Of-Character Details

Minecraft Account Name:Flareblaze5678

How old are you?:For personal reasons i would prefer not to answer this question.

Time-Zone/Country of Residence: USA Central Time

Do you have a good grip on English grammar and the English language?: I do, thank you very much.

Have you had any previous experience in roleplaying?:I don't know if my sources count, but yes.

Have you read and understood and agree to the rules?:yes. i wish every server had these rules.

How did you hear about the Lord of the Craft?: My brother. he recently signed up as well.

Link any previous applications you have made to the Lord of the Craft:no.

Have you posted this application on Minecraft Forum? If not, post it here: http://www.minecraftforum.net/topic/832121-the-lord-of-the-craft-enter-the-world-of-asulon-o-f-f-i-c-i-a-l-l-y-t-h-e-n-o-1-r-p-s-e-r-v-e-r-100-unique-gameplay/! :

Definitions

In your own words, define what the act of roleplaying is: Using a game to write a story.

In your own words, define what the act of meta-gaming is:using external sources to strategize in a game

In your own words, define what the act of power-emoting is:Actions against a player without said players consent.

In-Character Details

Character Name:Sabrina Motenhal (MOW-ten-hall)

Character Race:Siren

Character biography - Make this at least 2 paragraphs long, which must explain your character’s history, appearance, personality, age and any other details you deem necessary:Sabrina was born to a small family on the side of a sea. she spent her life learning to dance and sing, but in secret performed the dark arts. she was extremely beautiful. a Murderer killed her family when she was 14 and scarred her face. she usually wears dark cloaks to hide the long scar from her eyebrow to her cheek. She is a talented mage and singer.

What are your characters ambitions?:To become the best singer of all time, and to avenge her family.

Please provide an in-game screenshot of your skin here:

Is there anything else you would like to say about your character:Extreme intravert.

Open-Response-Questions

Each question here must be answered with a minimum of one full paragraph, and detail the scene you are given in the way it would happen in roleplay. These questions should be answered in first person. Be detailed, not short.

Upon entering the Mighty Human City of Arethor, you come across a shop-keeper calling out to sell his wares to passers-by. The shopkeeper is not a Human, he is a poor dwarf looking to make a living in a new city. What is your response? Though sirens where i am from are strong enemies to the dwarves, i see how much he needs my money and how much he needs food. his wares look affordable and nice. not only to i buy a boiling pot but leave him a loaf of bread, and hurry on my way. i do not make any i contact or speak, and i do not show my face or skin to him, for we do not trust dwarves.

You’re wandering the Oren Road late at night, when a large Orc begins to threaten a nearby dwarf. There is no help nearby, and the situation looks like it will escalate into violence soon, what does your character do? I don't want to sit and watch this. i throw a spear between the two. as the orc gets angry,i sing a loud and high note. the orc stumbles, trips, and falls over dead. although i was only trying to help, the dwarf threatens me and runs in fear. sighing, i carry on.

Whilst walking down the road to Malinor, you stumble upon an old man. His walking stick , looks weak and frail, and just as you are about to ask something, the stick breaks, and the man falls to the ground. As he falls down, a bag of Minas falls to the ground, and splits open. As you watch the multiple coins spill out, you peer down at the defenceless man. What does your character do?: i collect the fallen objects and wrap them in a spare cloak, and tie it with string like a parcel. i help the man up and hand him his goods.

"would you like me to find you a branch to make do until you can find a cane?"

the man nods. i find him a branch, and, felling generous, i give him the money to buy a new cane. he looks at me and his face lights up. he thanks me, and i direct him to a nearby store.

[Hylian the Heretic 233]

Denied:

-Roleplaying definition needs to be expanded upon.

-Metagaming and powergaming definitions are incomplete/incorrect.

-Siren is not a valid race. Please read the server lore.

-Bio is far too short, contains no server lore, and is cliched.

-You cannot start as a mage.

-Second ORQ contains extreme powergaming.

-Killing requires a villain application

Please read over some other applications, the server lore, and re-apply in 24 hours. :)

[Hylian the Heretic 233]

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