Kharajyr Application 1 Of 3 Possible

[FlareGunCalamity 213]

MC Username:Flareblaze5678

Rp Username (be sure to include the correct prefix, look up on info thread):Miitska (she does not have a title quite yet).

Character Skillset:She's not very talented at much, but she's good at finding things, and climbing to hard to get places, hiding, and generally getting on everyone's nerves.

Appearance (age, SUBRACE, gender):

Female, 4, kha'cheetrah.

She's a very small, kind of fluffy young kharajyr with a creamy orange coat covered in spots as dark as her hair. Her hair, on that note, is short, wild, and

untameable, with a smooth dark brown hue. her coat is soft and fluffy, but also glossy, untangled and smooth. She has dark green eyes and a pink nose, and she is about 2 feet tall.

Personality: Courageous, unknowledgable, silly, and likes to find out "what if?" and consequences via climbing, exploring, and playing. She's low-mannered and has a sweet tooth, like most kharajyr, and playfully annoying. she doesn't speak much.

Please include a short bio of your character's life:

Miitska was too energetic for her parents to handle. too all-over the place, too annoying. at the age of 3, her mother, full of spite, grabbed her by the scruff and threw her out, onto the streets of the cool night. Miitska, just learning to walk, tried to get back in, but the door had been bolted shut, and alas, she was stranded. sad and tired, she wandered aimlessly, getting scraps of food from people she passed by.

She wandered upon the great human capital known as Oren. being a kitten in a state of ignorance, she tried to get people's attention, not knowing humans in oren frowned upon kharajyr.

Little though she was, she was kicked, hit, and eventually thrown out, not seeing kindness from a single soul. her coat was ratted, her stomach empty, and no help was given.

Near the great city of oren was a kharajyr town. whilst hungrily and aimlessly wandering, she happened upon it. there she found kindness and affection, and was eventually taken in by someone and fed, groomed and bathed to perfection. she was given clothes and shelter.

Miitska can hardly speak, knowing few words at all, and has long untamable brown hair and a glossy orange coat. she generally wears blue and has a fondness for watermelon and sugar, like most of her species. she likes to chew on things, and adventure and explore, climb and find out "what if."

She is two years old and has green eyes.

Character's ambitions: To grow up, thrive, eat food, and be happy. she has little life goals and plans to live simplisticly.

Other then maintaining a good life, she alo wants to be the mother she never had, and wants to be lovin, caring, and kind, and to somewhat try to get rid of the part of her that makes her annoying.

_---Situational Rp Questions---_

1.

As you travel through the Karakatuan jungle, you spot a human trespassing on your nation's lands. He approaches you, obviously distressed, and asks for any food, water, or shelter that you can provide, then tells you that he has been lost in the area for days without any proper supplies. How do you react?: I'm shocked and angered to find a simple ape on our lands. I almost turn around, leave, and try to forget this happened, but he tries to talk to me.

I listen angrily as he explains his predicament. I curl my lips back and growl at him as he finishes his words. "geet awaiy frum mee!" i almost screech, and he seems offended. *Good, i think, because i dont like this man. Again, i growl, and he backs away. Us kharajyr aren't very sociable creatures when it comes to other races. i glare at him, and he glares back, and eventually, scornfully, i give him a fish, raw and wet, and snarl to him the directions out of the jungle, wondering why he came into the jungle in the first place.

I roll my eyes as he leaves, leaving the place smelling with an unwashed rank. I scoff as he disappears into the tangles of leaf and vine. I wish there was something to make you forget awful memories, because that was unpleasant for me and the jungle, as I can presume.

2.

As you romp through the lands of the "apes", you come across a tavern. Inside this tavern, a Dwarf notices you and starts gawking at you, then begins to speak.

"Oi! I gots a bowl of cream for you, Kitty! Ha! I'd bet you would make a nice throw rug, wouldn't ya, ya mangy furball?!"

He continues act generally as racist as possible. What do you do?:growling, I slam my fist to the table. I nearly scream, and almost lunge on his to gut him, but hold myself back, and regret that i did, for he taunts me. i hiss, spit, and turn to leave, looking back at him before i exit. Some bad words cross my mind as i glare at him and bare my teeth. he continues to make racist remarks. i bite my tongue to keep from screaming at him some of the worst words I know, and I leave the tavern with my claws out and my mind clouded with his words.

After i leave, far from the tavern, i look back a few times to make sure that fat ball of racism didn't follow me. This land sucks, and i definitely dont like it, nor its populous.

3.

One of your fellow Kharajyr and a close friend of yours comes to your dwelling in the middle of the night and begins to pound on your door. After you let him in, he confesses to killing another Kharajyr over a slice of cake. What do you do in response? This rubs me the wrong way. I ask him to repeat what he said, and when he does, i ask him to, as politely as i can think of a way to, leave.

I bite my lips, and rub my eyes when he's gone, honestly not knowing what just happened. I try to shrug it off and go to sleep, but the following day he got caught and punished, and i spend that entire day worrying, for his life and mine. Was i really the friend of a murderer? Was I really there with him last night? I want to think that it was a dream, but the experience was like a chisel chipping at my heart.

After a day of confinement, I leave town for a bit. I climb a tall tree, read a book, just try to get it out of my mind. Of course, nothing works, but I stay up there anyways.

Do you swear to follow the Tlatlanni and uphold his law, and do you swear to hold Metztli and all of her actions as sacred? Yes. I swear to uphold every religious and every social law, and to praise my creator.

Please include a screenshot or 3D render of your character's skin[

[FlareGunCalamity 213]

Is it denied? I dont get it! please check this out as soon as possible!

[Wretched 2075]

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Under review.

[FlareGunCalamity 213]

I already play on this server, ive already been accepted, and ive been playin for almost 3 weeks now.

[Wretched 2075]

Before I accept this, I'd like you to either raise your age a little, or re-do your app around the age of '2'. It mentions all sorts of things that a 2 year old would never be able to do, a 2 year old kitten would never be able to survive by themselves, nor be able to swim at the age of 1, where even walking would be an incredible feat.

The application overall lacks detail, try and expand on most of your questions, at the moment they provide me little information on your character. Particulary focus on the bio and situational roleplay questions.

Kharajyr also have an accent, and it'd vastly increase your chances of acceptance if you were to use it. A good guide on how to use a Kha' accent can be found here: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/54779-speakingunderstanding-kharajyr-accents/

Re-apply in 24 hours and I or another KAT member will view your application again. Good luck!

[FlareGunCalamity 213]

Before I accept this, I'd like you to either raise your age a little, or re-do your app around the age of '2'. It mentions all sorts of things that a 2 year old would never be able to do, a 2 year old kitten would never be able to survive by themselves, nor be able to swim at the age of 1, where even walking would be an incredible feat.

The application overall lacks detail, try and expand on most of your questions, at the moment they provide me little information on your character. Particulary focus on the bio and situational roleplay questions.

Kharajyr also have an accent, and it'd vastly increase your chances of acceptance if you were to use it. A good guide on how to use a Kha' accent can be found here: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/54779-speakingunderstanding-kharajyr-accents/

Re-apply in 24 hours and I or another KAT member will view your application again. Good luck!

I was told that to re-apply, you must fix your original, so here it is, on my second out of 3 chances.

[Wretched 2075]

You'll need to repost another app after 24 hours. Don't post it before this time, or it'll be denied.

[Princeton 396]

Moved to the Great Library. It shall be sorted into appropriate category shortly.