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MC Username:Flareblaze5678

Rp Username (be sure to include the correct prefix, look up on info thread):Miitska (she does not have a title quite yet).

Character Skillset:She's not very talented at much, but she's good at finding things, and climbing to hard to get places, hiding, and generally getting on everyone's nerves.

Appearance (age, SUBRACE, gender):

Female, 4, kha'cheetrah.

She's a very small, kind of fluffy young kharajyr with a creamy orange coat covered in spots as dark as her hair. Her hair, on that note, is short, wild, and

untameable, with a smooth dark brown hue. her coat is soft and fluffy, but also glossy, untangled and smooth. She has dark green eyes and a pink nose, and she is about 2 feet tall.

Personality: Courageous, unknowledgable, silly, and likes to find out "what if?" and consequences via climbing, exploring, and playing. She's low-mannered and has a sweet tooth, like most kharajyr, and playfully annoying. she doesn't speak much.

Please include a short bio of your character's life:

Miitska Was on a vacation of sorts with her parents, she was traveling along with her father and mother, no cares in the world. she was excited for what she would see, never having left her town before,and was attentive as a hawk. She took in sights, and marveled at large forests and cities. she never left her parents' side, them fearing something bad would happen to their kitten. Exactly one month prior to modern day, they reached the lovely destination, a small kharajyr town neighboring the holy human capital called New Oren. For 3 weeks, she stayed with her uncle, until a very strange day for miitska indeed. That say, she simply woke up, and her parents were gone, missing, just simply not there. she didn't feel any sorrow, because for all she knew, they could be getting something. Since then, she's been living with her uncle, visiting oren and other neighboring towns periodically via sneaking out.

To this day, she hasn't seen her parents.

Miitska can hardly speak, knowing few words at all, and has short untamable brown hair and a glossy orange coat. she generally wears blue and has a fondness for watermelon and sugar, like most of her species. she likes to chew on things, and adventure and explore, climb and find out "what if."

She is two years old and has green eyes.

Character's ambitions: To grow up, thrive, eat food, and be happy. she has little life goals and plans to live simplisticly.

Other then maintaining a good life, she alo wants to be the mother she never had, and wants to be lovin, caring, and kind, and to somewhat try to get rid of the part of her that makes her annoying.

_---Situational Rp Questions---_

1.

As you travel through the Karakatuan jungle, you spot a human trespassing on your nation's lands. He approaches you, obviously distressed, and asks for any food, water, or shelter that you can provide, then tells you that he has been lost in the area for days without any proper supplies. How do you react?: I'm shocked and angered to find a simple ape on our lands. I almost turn around, leave, and try to forget this happened, but he tries to talk to me.

I listen angrily as he explains his predicament. I curl my lips back and growl at him as he finishes his words. "geet awaiy frum mee!" i almost screech, and he seems offended. *Good, i think, because i dont like this man. Again, i growl, and he backs away. Us kharajyr aren't very sociable creatures when it comes to other races. i glare at him, and he glares back, and eventually, scornfully, i give him a fish, raw and wet, and snarl to him the directions out of the jungle, wondering why he came into the jungle in the first place.

I roll my eyes as he leaves, leaving the place smelling with an unwashed rank. I scoff as he disappears into the tangles of leaf and vine. I wish there was something to make you forget awful memories, because that was unpleasant for me and the jungle, as I can presume.

2.

As you romp through the lands of the "apes", you come across a tavern. Inside this tavern, a Dwarf notices you and starts gawking at you, then begins to speak.

"Oi! I gots a bowl of cream for you, Kitty! Ha! I'd bet you would make a nice throw rug, wouldn't ya, ya mangy furball?!"

He continues act generally as racist as possible. What do you do?:growling, I slam my fist to the table. I nearly scream, and almost lunge on his to gut him, but hold myself back, and regret that i did, for he taunts me. i hiss, spit, and turn to leave, looking back at him before i exit. Some bad words cross my mind as i glare at him and bare my teeth. he continues to make racist remarks. i bite my tongue to keep from screaming at him some of the worst words I know, and I leave the tavern with my claws out and my mind clouded with his words.

After i leave, far from the tavern, i look back a few times to make sure that fat ball of racism didn't follow me. This land sucks, and i definitely dont like it, nor its populous.

3.

One of your fellow Kharajyr and a close friend of yours comes to your dwelling in the middle of the night and begins to pound on your door. After you let him in, he confesses to killing another Kharajyr over a slice of cake. What do you do in response? This rubs me the wrong way. I ask him to repeat what he said, and when he does, i ask him to, as politely as i can think of a way to, leave.

I bite my lips, and rub my eyes when he's gone, honestly not knowing what just happened. I try to shrug it off and go to sleep, but the following day he got caught and punished, and i spend that entire day worrying, for his life and mine. Was i really the friend of a murderer? Was I really there with him last night? I want to think that it was a dream, but the experience was like a chisel chipping at my heart.

After a day of confinement, I leave town for a bit. I climb a tall tree, read a book, just try to get it out of my mind. Of course, nothing works, but I stay up there anyways.

Do you swear to follow the Tlatlanni and uphold his law, and do you swear to hold Metztli and all of her actions as sacred? Yes. I swear to uphold every religious and every social law, and to praise my creator.

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And yes, i have been implemented, i do play, and i have played for near 3 weeks now!

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Sorry but from reading your biography I find it very hard to believe that your Kharajyr would have been able to survive in Oren especially if you claim that it was that young, it would have died. Also at one point you say you are four, then you say you are three then you say you are two years old, it's rather confusing. This biography is highly unrealistic and it seems like you are trying to roleplay your way into becoming an Ape-Kha, which is highly frowned upon and lore breaking. Please re-apply in 24 hours with either a more updated backstory, a simpler and more realistic (And Kharajyr) plot or increase the age of your character, try to have them be with the Kharajyr community rather than some Oren noble's pet. After all that's why we are Kharajyr.

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Sorry but from reading your biography I find it very hard to believe that your Kharajyr would have been able to survive in Oren especially if you claim that it was that young, it would have died. Also at one point you say you are four, then you say you are three then you say you are two years old, it's rather confusing. This biography is highly unrealistic and it seems like you are trying to roleplay your way into becoming an Ape-Kha, which is highly frowned upon and lore breaking. Please re-apply in 24 hours with either a more updated backstory, a simpler and more realistic (And Kharajyr) plot or increase the age of your character, try to have them be with the Kharajyr community rather than some Oren noble's pet. After all that's why we are Kharajyr.

I was told to simply fix your old one when you need to edit it out of denial. she hasnt been kicked out, she didnt live on her own ever. there. you happy?

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Moved to the Great Library. It shall be sorted into appropriate category shortly.

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