[Denied]Realdeal1010's Character Applicaion

[realdeal1010 1]

Out-Of-Character Details

Minecraft Account Name:

realdeal1010

How old are you?:

I am 15 years of age

Time-Zone/Country of Residence:

Canada. Eastern standard time.

Do you have a good grip on English grammar and the English language?:

I have a very good grip on the english language. I have also very good grammar. I am human however and I tend to make minor mistakes.

Have you had any previous experience in roleplaying?:

I have a very large span of experience in roleplaying on different servers.

Have you read and understood and agree to the rules?:

I have read and agree to, all the rules and regulations you have provided

How did you hear about the Lord of the Craft?:

I have heard of your server through a friend of mine, who attented minecon in Vegas I beleive. He heard of your server, was accepted and then told me to do the same.

Link any previous applications you have made to the Lord of the Craft:

I have made an application about a year or 2 ago.

Have you posted this application on Minecraft Forum? If not, post it here: http://www.minecraftforum.net/topic/832121-the-lord-of-the-craft-enter-the-world-of-asulon-o-f-f-i-c-i-a-l-l-y-t-h-e-n-o-1-r-p-s-e-r-v-e-r-100-unique-gameplay/! :

I did not post it, however I do still have it on hand.

Definitions

In your own words, define what the act of roleplaying is:

The act of roleplaying, is when a player assumes the role of a made-up character, acting through the game as if it was their everyday life.

In your own words, define what the act of meta-gaming is:

Meta-gaming is when a player takes advantage of previously gained knowledge, to get an advantage over another player.

In your own words, define what the act of power-emoting is:

When a player interacts in the most exploitative, and goal-maximising way, ignoring other aspects of the game entirely, such as roleplaying.

In-Character Details

Character Name:

Thomas Jefferson

Character Race:

Human

Character biography - Make this at least 2 paragraphs long, which must explain your character’s history, appearance, personality, age and any other details you deem necessary:

Thomas Jefferson, was the son of a strong leader of a small, remote community on the outskirts of a desert. This desert was home to a large, hostile ork settlement. Although the population faught hard to stay alive, they ran out of food constantly and was never ready for sudden ork attacks. One day, when the whole settlement decided to join a city and start a new life, Thomas' father was killed by a venmous snake whilist patrolling the desert, just days before they were ready to leave. After him and his mother weapt for weeks, Thomas was made leader. He told the populace, that no matter what happened, he will put himself first to defend the settlement. After years of training, surviving, and learning, Thomas became a strong and confident young man. He now sets off to find a new land for his people to thrive, destroying any orks that will get in his way.

Thomas is now of the age of 23 years old. He is a tall 6'2", with a reletively strong build. He has blue eyes with brown hair. He is the kind to rush into things too quickly, without thinking first. He is overall a friendly person, and enjoys to work alone, yet likes the pressence of others. He can have quite the temper if gone without food or water for a while.

What are your characters ambitions?:

He wishes to find a new settlement for his people to live in. Maybe even find a girl along the way.

Please provide an in-game screenshot of your skin here:

(in attachment) I have tried to post an attachment, but the file is too large. I will try to make a link to it somehow.

Is there anything else you would like to say about your character:

I would like to ask if this character is overpowered or not. I will indeed change if he seems so.

Open-Response-Questions

Each question here must be answered with a minimum of one full paragraph, and detail the scene you are given in the way it would happen in roleplay. These questions should be answered in first person. Be detailed, not short.

Upon entering the Mighty Human City of Arethor, you come across a shop-keeper calling out to sell his wares to passers-by. The shopkeeper is not a Human, he is a poor dwarf looking to make a living in a new city. What is your response?

"Hello there good sir! What is your trade? I seem tobe in need of some supplies."

He responds "Hello sir! Well, we have the finest tools around! I do appologize for the high prices, I am just getting started with this new buissness. You will get your money's worth, I will say that!"

I respond, "Hm. These are good quality iron tools. I shall let others know of your talent! You seen to be in need of some advertising. I think your buissness has potential!"

He says, "Thank you sir! Now, I have a good deal going on today. If you buy a full set of iron tools, I'll throw on a nice iron chestplate! Would you be interested?"

My character thinks a little bit. Then tell the dwarf, "I think that will be a fair deal. Here is your full payment. Plus a little extra. Good luck to you!"

The dwarf puts the items on the counter, takes the money and says, "Good day to you! And may God bless you for all eternity!"

You’re wandering the Oren Road late at night, when a large Orc begins to threaten a nearby dwarf. There is no help nearby, and the situation looks like it will escalate into violence soon, what does your character do?

I would intervine right away. I will ask them politly to stop, without touching any of them yet. If one of them try to attack me or try to harm me, I will draw my sword and warn them one last time to stand down. If they advance, I will knock him/her with the hilt of my sword. I will ask them both to calm down again, and begin to reason with them. I then send them on their way. If the attacker is injured, I would politly help them dress their wounds, and carry on my way.

Whilst walking down the road to Malinor, you stumble upon an old man. His walking stick , looks weak and frail, and just as you are about to ask something, the stick breaks, and the man falls to the ground. As he falls down, a bag of Minas falls to the ground, and splits open. As you watch the multiple coins spill out, you peer down at the defenceless man. What does your character do?:

I would first collect the coins and tie the bag back up. Then I would go over the the old man to talk to him. If he is injured, I would help him back up and walk him the rest of the way to his destination. If he offers me a reward for helping him, I will not accept it. I will instead help him cover up any wounds he has and go find or buy him a new walking stick. I would then say good bye, offer my blessings to him and leave.

[everblue2er101 906]

Your application has been...

Denied.

Need to post on the Minecraft Forums before you can be accepted.

Power-Emoting definition isn't really correct and needs to be tweaked. You can find more information on the forums and wiki, but make sure to use your own words.

Please come up with an original character name.

Add server lore to the bio such as events, dates or places. You can find these on the forums and wiki.

Need to provide a skin screenshot. Use THIS GUIDE as a reference.

Character doesn't appear to be overpowered at all.

Add dialogue to the second and third Open Response Questions.

Wait at least 24 hours after this post to reapply. If you have any questions feel free to send me a PM.

[everblue2er101 906]

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