[Denied]Application Of Damp #2

[Damperstorm 3]

Out-Of-Character Details

Minecraft Account Name: damperstorm

How old are you?: 17 +9 months

Time-Zone/Country of Residence: -8 PST/USA

Do you have a good grip on English grammar and the English language?: Better than most online, sadly.

Have you had any previous experience in roleplaying?: Random rp with friends, Twitterponies, Skyrim in Mine craft a bit, and some forum-based rps.

Have you read and understood and agree to the rules?: I read, I understood, I agreed. And still do.

How did you hear about the Lord of the Craft?: Third from top of the MMORPG list when searching on PlanetMinecraft.

Link any previous applications you have made to the Lord of the Craft: http://www.lordofthe...224#entry670224

Have you posted this application on Minecraft Forum? If not, post it here: http://www.minecraft...nique-gameplay/! : http://www.minecraftforum.net/user/842586-damperstorm/ Scroll down, click on the Posts, then top one.

Definitions

In your own words, define what the act of roleplaying is: You play the role of a character in a place that is usually different than your and yourself. It is called IC/In Character when you keep to this character you play.

In your own words, define what the act of meta-gaming is: It is where you take knowledge gleamed from OOC/Out Of Character/sources that your character could not match if this wasn't just fiction and use it to your while IC.

In your own words, define what the act of power-emoting is: Also known as power-gaming; you claim you are greatly powerful and/or you don't allow the other person to step in and maybe even surprise you. I.e. You sneak up on a guy and back stab them in rp. The real way would be to attempt to sneak up and see if the player decides their character could and does detect you, then attempt to back stab, where they can end up reacting and stopping you,

In-Character Details

Character Name: Bolrung

Character Race: Uruk (Orc)

Character biography - Make this at least 2 paragraphs long, which must explain your character’s history, appearance, personality, age and any other details you deem necessary:

Bolrung is an average orc living an average life in his village. Until the civil war tear apart his entire village and he is left as the only known survivor. Thrust into the conflict, he has traveled around, learning what he can of both the war and the two sides. Adjust his learning, he has trained so that he can wreck vengeance upon the ones who are to be blamed for making his home a ruined pile of junk.

He stands at a solid 9 feet, is green, prefers lighter leather and axes, and short black hair. He was 15 when the war reached his home almost 3 years ago, and yet he still has no clue who is to be blamed. Big decisions are ahead and Bolrung must pick a side if he wants revenge.

What are your characters ambitions?: To find who caused the battle at his town and to kill them.

Please provide an in-game screenshot of your skin here: http://www.planetminecraft.com/skin/orc/

Is there anything else you would like to say about your character: http://www.minecraft...0#entry20174270

Open-Response-Questions

Each question here must be answered with a minimum of one full paragraph, and detail the scene you are given in the way it would happen in roleplany. These questions should be answered in first person. Be detailed, not short.

Upon entering the Mighty Human City of Arethor, you come across a shop-keeper calling out to sell his wares to passers-by. The shopkeeper is not a Human, he is a poor dwarf looking to make a living in a new city. What is your response?

*watches the dwarf carefully as I walk past, snarling at him as he speaks out to me*

You’re wandering the Oren Road late at night, when a large Orc begins to threaten a nearby dwarf. There is no help nearby, and the situation looks like it will escalate into violence soon, what does your character do?

*approach the commotion but keep my distance as I watch*

1) *laugh as the dwarf gets beat up* "Ash stowts glob agh flat!" (That's "One dwarf stupid and dead!" in human.)

2) *rush to the orc's aid to turn the fight against the dwarf* "Stowt glob! Stowt flat!"

3) *stop the dwarf as he tries to escape past me and toss him to the other orc* "Nubhosh stowt!" (nubhosh = bad)

Whilst walking down the road to Malinor, you stumble upon an old man. His walking stick , looks weak and frail, and just as you are about to ask something, the stick breaks, and the man falls to the ground. As he falls down, a bag of Minas falls to the ground, and splits open. As you watch the multiple coins spill out, you peer down at the defenceless man. What does your character do?:

*laughs at the human and walks past, kicking the coins as they get underfoot* "Weak quick spawn!"

[Rom 59]

-Snip-

Just realised it was an Orc app. My bad.

[Skippy 2466]

Denied.

Your biography seems to break orc lore. There are no orcish villages other than the War Uzg. If there would be an orcish village other than the War Uzg, it'd be raided by them. Orcs also haven't been in any Civil Wars other than the one against Rex Tythus and against Rex Shar'ku. No other Civil Wars have occurred. Along with that, your skin is overused and seen on many orcish applications. Please try to find another one, or better yet, request a custom one to be made for you. Lastly, your ORQ's lack detail and length.

Reapply in 24 hours.

[Skippy 2466]

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