[Denied][D] Application By Rico

[ricostenger 0]

Out-Of-Character Details

Minecraft Account Name:Rambo_the_killa

How old are you?:16

Time-Zone/Country of Residence:Denmark

Do you have a good grip on English grammar and the English language?:Yes

Have you had any previous experience in roleplaying?:a little

Have you read and understood and agree to the rules?:Yes

How did you hear about the Lord of the Craft?:One of my friends played it alot, and said it was just something for me

Link any previous applications you have made to the Lord of the Craft:this is my first

Have you posted this application on Minecraft Forum? If not, post it here: http://www.minecraftforum.net/topic/832121-the-lord-of-the-craft-enter-the-world-of-asulon-o-f-f-i-c-i-a-l-l-y-t-h-e-n-o-1-r-p-s-e-r-v-e-r-100-unique-gameplay/! :

Definitions

In your own words, define what the act of roleplaying is:you play a roll, and you act like you are an orc or a human or elf ect. and you help your race win against the others.

In your own words, define what the act of meta-gaming is:you can't tell people to come to other places in the chat, for example "hey dude, come over here"

In your own words, define what the act of power-emoting is:power moting is for example "Wollis takes his sword, and throws it on the ground". u can't tell what someone is doing

In-Character Details

Character Name:Bilbo

Character Race:Dwarf

Character biography - Make this at least 2 paragraphs long, which must explain your character’s history, appearance, personality, age and any other details you deem necessary:he is a dwarf, from a little town called "Dresdas". he travels around looking for adventures, and has alot of experience in fighting. he's 37 years old, and his family burned in a fire many years ago. he has a personal hate for orcs, because they were the once who burned his family's house down that autumm night.

What are your characters ambitions?:he loves gold and emeralds, and he really loves dimonds

Please provide an in-game screenshot of your skin here:http://www.minecraftskins.com/skin/754177/elgranden-archer/

Is there anything else you would like to say about your character:not really, i think i have said it all

Open-Response-Questions

Each question here must be answered with a minimum of one full paragraph, and detail the scene you are given in the way it would happen in roleplay. These questions should be answered in first person. Be detailed, not short.

Upon entering the Mighty Human City of Arethor, you come across a shop-keeper calling out to sell his wares to passers-by. The shopkeeper is not a Human, he is a poor dwarf looking to make a living in a new city. What is your response? i walk over to the shop, and i notice that he is crippled, and i ask him how it happened. he said that it was an orc, that had taken his leg in battle, and as much as he wanted revenge, he couldn't even kill a fly in this condition. i tell him that i also seeked revenge over the orcs, and that i was willing to take revenge over them, if he gave me some of the delicious steak he was selling. he was greatful, and then i ventured out to slay the orcs that had taken his leg.

You’re wandering the Oren Road late at night, when a large Orc begins to threaten a nearby dwarf. There is no help nearby, and the situation looks like it will escalate into violence soon, what does your character do? i walk over to the dwarf, and i try to understand why the orc is so mad. he rudely tells me, that the filthy dwarf in front of me had stolen one of his gold coins, and he wouldn't give it back. i look at the dwarf, and i see that he is shaking of fear. i realize that i need to do something quick, so that the orc doesn't crush the dwarf. i search my backpack, and i find a leather chap, and quickly gives it to the dwarf, and finally the dwarf gives the orc back his gold coin, and walk away.

Whilst walking down the road to Malinor, you stumble upon an old man. His walking stick , looks weak and frail, and just as you are about to ask something, the stick breaks, and the man falls to the ground. As he falls down, a bag of Minas falls to the ground, and splits open. As you watch the multiple coins spill out, you peer down at the defenceless man. What does your character do?:i help the old man on his feet again, and pick up all the coins that had spilled out of the little bag. i put them into the bag again, and give the bag to the old man aagain. he greatfully thanks me, and then i pick up the broken stick, ang look if there is anything to fix it with in my backpack, and luckaly there is a bit of string in it. i wrap the string around the broken stick, and i hand him the stick again. he greatfully looks me in the eyes, and hands me a gold coin from the little leather bag.

[Thu'um 530]

You may re-apply after a period of 24 hours.

Verdict:

Your application lacks proper formatting.

Your role-playing definition is Incorrect.

Your meta-gaming definition is incorrect.

Your power-emoting definition is Incorrect.

Your application seems to lack significant detail and effort.

Some of your open response questions are intended to use dialogue, but you do not use any quotations to indicate where the dialogue happens.

Your biography does not meet the minimum requirement of two paragraphs.

Your biography is cliche, having your parents killed by orcs is common, try to be more unique if possible.

As always, if you have any queries, please direct them to me in a Private Message -- I am a Guide and also an Application Team Member!

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