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Out-Of-Character Details

Minecraft Account Name:Memilesb

How old are you?:14 almost 15

Time-Zone/Country of Residence:EST/Australia(Victoria)

Do you have a good grip on English grammar and the English language?:Yes

Have you had any previous experience in roleplaying?:Yes

Have you read and understood and agree to the rules?:Yes

How did you hear about the Lord of the Craft?:A google Search for best RPG minecraft server

Link any previous applications you have made to the Lord of the Craft:

Have you posted this application on Minecraft Forum? If not, post it here: http://www.minecraftforum.net/topic/832121-the-lord-of-the-craft-enter-the-world-of-asulon-o-f-f-i-c-i-a-l-l-y-t-h-e-n-o-1-r-p-s-e-r-v-e-r-100-unique-gameplay/! :Yes I have

Definitions

In your own words, define what the act of roleplaying is:Taking the role of a person other then yourself for enjoyment purposes

In your own words, define what the act of meta-gaming is:Using knowledge that your character would not know to influence your choices inside the game

In your own words, define what the act of power-emoting is:It is the act of using an emote that your opponent can not block such as "Memilesb cuts billy's head off" which billy would have no way to block as he is already dead where as the proper way would be to say "Memilesb swung his sword at billy's head" so that billy could could respond and have a chance to stop me

In-Character Details

Character Name:Ares

Character Race:Orc/Uruk

Character biography - Make this at least 2 paragraphs long, which must explain your character’s history, appearance, personality, age and any other details you deem necessary:Ares son of Kratos was born to Heren daughter of Nergren. At the age of 39 he stands at 9 feet tall with dark green skin brown hair and arms the size of a humans thigh he is a hulking mass of destruction with a harsh upbringing. As a young boy up untill his parents where killed in a skirmish with a neighboring Urak clan he led a nomadic life stile where once he turned 10 he didn't eat if he didn't catch his food still alive at the age of 15 and the top fighter among his peers he was aggressive persistent and smarter then average.

One day in Ares 19th year coming back from a day hunting laden with meat and animal skins keeping a steady pace jogging up and down the sand dunes, as he topped a sand dune he suddenly smelled smoke glancing ahead Ares could see a pillar of smoke on the horizon coming from about where he judged where the camp site was, lowering his head dropping his load and then suddenly sprinting along the sand at 30km/h he was at the camp site in 30 minutes just in time to run into a full scale battle diving straight into the first enemy he saw at 30km/h immediately crushing the wind out of him but also snapping his spine in two grabbing his sword and rushing full pelt at more opponents swinging his wicked curved sword slashing heads off hacking at limbs crushing skulls between his feet and skewering enemy's like pigs the tide of battle turning with Ares' help still it took 4 hours before the battle was over with lots of casualties looking around for his loved ones Ares saw Heren and Kratos lieing in the dust with huge puddles of blood surrounding them Feeling weak at the knees Ares let loose a blood curdling roar before sprinting off into the horizon not to be seen since

What are your characters ambitions?:To become a famous warrior

Please provide an in-game screenshot of your skin here:

Is there anything else you would like to say about your character:Nothing comes to mind

Open-Response-Questions

Each question here must be answered with a minimum of one full paragraph, and detail the scene you are given in the way it would happen in roleplay. These questions should be answered in first person. Be detailed, not short.

Upon entering the Mighty Human City of Arethor, you come across a shop-keeper calling out to sell his wares to passers-by. The shopkeeper is not a Human, he is a poor dwarf looking to make a living in a new city. What is your response? I'm walking into the human city of Arethor and i see a puny dwarf calling out trying to sell his wares I look at him in disgust and move on by giving him no further thought as I look for somewhere to sleep and a place where i can crack some skulls for money rubbing my hands in anticipation a wicked smile on my face just thinking of the thrill of a good fight

You’re wandering the Oren Road late at night, when a large Orc begins to threaten a nearby dwarf. There is no help nearby, and the situation looks like it will escalate into violence soon, what does your character do?Strolling down a road late at night looking around for a place to bed down I see another Orc along the road arguing with a dwarf who is fingering a wicked looking battle axe while the Orc has nothing but a loincloth as I walk up I pull the Orc out of there and talk some sense into him after a while he comes around to what I'm telling him nods his head a starts to walk off the dwarf comes up to me "Hey big guy thanks for that I owe you" I peer down at him and grunt "I didn't do it for you" brush past him and walk off the road and into a nearby field for a while I feel the dwarf's eyes on my back before he turns away and walks off.

Whilst walking down the road to Malinor, you stumble upon an old man. His walking stick , looks weak and frail, and just as you are about to ask something, the stick breaks, and the man falls to the ground. As he falls down, a bag of Minas falls to the ground, and splits open. As you watch the multiple coins spill out, you peer down at the defenceless man. What does your character do?:Walking along day dreaming about just hunting out in the desert alone when I see an elder walking down the road leaning heavily on a cane just as I turn my back on him and start to pick up my pace I hear the crack of a stick breaking and then a thud I turn and see the elder on the ground is cane broken coins spilled out of a purse at his belt I walk over scoop up some coins and start to walk off I hear a groan I turn walk over to a nearby tree reach up and break a branch walk over drop it next to the elder and jog off as to not feel any more guilty

[LeRenardNoir 413]

You were denied for the following reasons:

Please read the Orcish lore so that you may find common Orcish names, instead of using names from God of War.Please include server lore in your application, use things like locations and events, with possible a lead up as to how you arrived at Elysium. Good luck on your next application!

Please wait 24 hours before re-applying.

PM me if you would like further explanation/help.

While you wait…Go and vote for the server to support it!

We all would really appreciate it.

[LeRenardNoir 413]

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